Great Nations win without fighting "The right approach" - Page 8

Javed Ahmed Nizamani · #71 Monday, August 25, 2014

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Originally Posted by jafferbhutto

2014 Essays:
My outline on Great Nations Win Without Fighting:
- I started with Hazrat Adam a.s and then discussed ancient history of conflicts and wars
- Causes of conflicts n wars (Brief History of all wars and their outcomes)
- Discussed and compared arab spring with European countries
- Then gave examples of developed countries (Like Japan and France as they have progressed well after their conflicting histories of wars and revolutions)
- Then I came to Pakistan fron 1947 till now
- The wars and the problems with its neighboring countries (India,Afghanistan,Iran)
- What should be done and what should not be done (Better but not Bitter relations with all countries especially neighbouring countries)
- They should learn from the countries like Japan and France
- Good relations for the development of the nation as Great Nations win without Fighting .. !!
How was it.. ?? Please give your valubale comments .. !!

I think you have good chances of passing the exam, but did u mention ( at that time) present diplomatic efforts to resolve internal and external challenges? I dont know others would agree with me but to me essay was on peace through dialogue with India, Afghanistan and Taliban along with peaceful economic progress. I favored dialogue and diplomacy from position of strength to solve external challenges but preferred force to establish writ of the state internally. Acquiring deterrence capabilities to prevent aggression plus war and aggressive tax collections to boost economy was central idea of my essay. Case analyses of treaty of Hudebia and its benefits for muslims i.e temporary peace for preaching and progress.

blessed soul · #72 Monday, August 25, 2014

i thought its been an ambiguous one ..not clear about the negotiating patterns of power politics.

Aamna Bahadur · #73 Monday, September 22, 2014

its a very simple topic indeed ... most of the people lose their marks because they are used to complicate each and everything they come across.
in this topic we just need to focus on technology , education , determination. bravery and all other moral values which makes a person great. so by taking examples of china , japan, and America too although they fought but now they are progressing too .

mhz99 · #74 Monday, September 22, 2014

Weeks to go before we get to know what exactly examiner meant from this topic

sincere khan · #75 Monday, September 22, 2014

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Originally Posted by Aamna Bahadur

its a very simple topic indeed ... most of the people lose their marks because they are used to complicate each and everything they come across.
in this topic we just need to focus on technology , education , determination. bravery and all other moral values which makes a person great. so by taking examples of china , japan, and America too although they fought but now they are progressing too .

Yes Madam I also attempted this topic because this was very interesting. I wrote all these which you have mentioned like technology. education. business relation. entertainment and sport activities and strictly wrote against war. violence. extremism. because these are not the solution of everything. but Im little worry about my grammatically mistakes. i wrote almost 22 pages of my essay

Diplomatic · #76 Saturday, September 27, 2014

I mainly focused on peace through dialogue and Diplomacy. War should always be kept as the last resort. One should go through various channels of diplomacy. We should empower the masses at large by educating them.

Main Focal Points:

1. Economic Prosperity
2. Development
3. Peace through Dialogue
4. Great Nations
5. Education, Health etc
6. Diplomacy
7. Examples like Jinnah and Gandhi who were advocates of Non-Violence and focused on
Dialogue.
8. Hudaybia Peace Accord
9. Jinnah as a Negotiator
10. Internal and External Conflicts
11. Role of Diplomats
12. Foreign Policy

Buddha · #77 Saturday, September 27, 2014

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Originally Posted by Diplomatic

I mainly focused on peace through dialogue and Diplomacy. War should always be kept as the last resort. One should go through various channels of diplomacy. We should empower the masses at large by educating them.

Main Focal Points:

1. Economic Prosperity
2. Development
3. Peace through Dialogue
4. Great Nations
5. Education, Health etc
6. Diplomacy
7. Examples like Jinnah and Gandhi who were advocates of Non-Violence and focused on
Dialogue.
8. Hudaybia Peace Accord
9. Jinnah as a Negotiator
10. Internal and External Conflicts
11. Role of Diplomats
12. Foreign Policy

What was your thesis statement?

Diplomatic · #78 Thursday, October 02, 2014

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Originally Posted by Buddha

What was your thesis statement?

I didnt wrote Thesis Statement.

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Originally Posted by mhz99

Weeks to go before we get to know what exactly examiner meant from this topic

Please have a look on my outline and do comment.

mhz99 · #79 Sunday, October 05, 2014

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Originally Posted by Diplomatic

Please have a look on my outline and do comment.

Sorry brother i am not into posting on this forum anymore. Regards

Buddha · #80 Sunday, October 05, 2014

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Originally Posted by mhz99

Sorry brother i am not into posting on this forum anymore. Regards

You aren't mod anymore? Did you voluntarily give up?

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