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Post with drawl 2014- Implications on Pakistan.



Generally if we consider these two Afghanistan and Pakistan they both link with each other according to their religious, trade, linguistics, ethnic, and neighborly they are inseparable.

Afghan soil bore the brunt since, Arab invasion and after the Soviet Union war which lasted 9 years from December 1979 to February 1989. Its consequences were faced by Pakistan. Influx of its refugees to Pakistan and other neighbor countries Iran, Iraq and so on. Familiar with customs and tradition mostly afghan refugees are settled in Pakistan. Muhajidines who fought in Soviet Union become a formidable threat to future of Afghanistan.

After the 9/11 attacks. America waged war against the belligerent factions of different Militant organizations. With the assistance of North Atlantic treaty organization (NATO) and U.S allied forces to dismantle the notorious group of Al-Qaida and their allies’ insurgent groups and eradicate their safe havens by removing Taliban’s power.

Since,2001 the war on terrorism. started by Americans and supported by U.K, Pakistan and Saudi Arabia. The NATO forces which are dominating its power in Afghanistan and fighting against proscribed Militants are working as chameleons, which can be observed by Salala’s attack on Pakistani soil in 2011.

Pakistan’s Major Issue peace talks with Tehrek e Taliban Pakistan (TTP) is always repulsed by America. They have taken colossal lives of masses in Pakistan soil by their brutal acts against innocent civilians for only their demands.

Failure of peace talks internment attacks on Pakistani agencies and retaliation attacks on them is grave concern for envisaging there upcoming attacks on people of Pakistan.

Afghanistan’s feeble law and order circumstances have given militants sigh of relief to stay in their sanctuaries with impunity and if, for instance withdrawal will take place it will be a giant like situation for Pakistan. There cross border attacks and will bolster them to revolt against state. With KPK which is always known as place of Insurgents and Baluchistan which is supported by foreign hands. As Baluchistans minister Sanaullah zehri said they are funded by Indian spies and agencies for the revolt against state.

Socially and economically Pakistan will suffer. Defence budget for war on terrorism will be stopped. Their renaissance (T.T.P)will merely sabotage the economy of country. Law and order will face the major challenge to confront the threats of different insurgent groups. Balochistan will revive its rebellion attitude toward country. Several other issues will take place after the withdrawl.

It will be a menace to minorities by their negative, so called fatwa against them. Extremism and sectarianism will take place once again in Pakistan. It will create So like situation of Afghanistan during soviet union war.

So Pakistan need to settle the disputes with militant’s organizations according to the interests of masses and safety of its integrity. Top priority is to stable the law and forces of country alert and vigilance in order to defend country. Natos withdrawl is completely uncertainty for both countries and it can also lay a civil war situation in country.

You have used good vocabulary but sentence formation is not so appropriate as some of them appear incomplete. Try to put the punctuation marks accurately.

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i dont have teacher who can guide me.

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Brother try to use active voice.
try to use lesser words.
For practice write one sentence per line.
get a good book on grammer.
get a good novel to read and use abridged versions as a start.
read, read and read. read for three hours and then write for an hour.
your vocabulary is good. you do convey your meaning. but expression is weak, i.e. your sentence structure is weak and overall your sentences seem disconnected. so what are you waiting for? get to work brother and come back a month later!

my grammar is weak. How can i improve any good book ?

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go over this thread

http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compu...xpression.html

and brother english is like swimming. you learn it by reading, writing and speaking it. any book on grammer will do. pick up any grammer book from a bookstore for any class or school.

get this book if you can find it. Exploring the world of English. or get grammer and compostion by wren & Martin. or get both.

and stop making sad faces

regards

thanks. i have these books.

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