kindly check my outline seniors
 

[CENTER][U][B]Free speech must have limitations[/B][/U][/CENTER]
[U][B]outline:[/B][/U]
[B]what is free speech?[/B]
1) freedom of expressing one's opinion without moral or ethical check and balance
2) unchecked freedom of criticism on any state, institution or individual
[B]freedom of speech is expressed through:[/B]
public processions
electronic media
print media
social media
[B]why must free speech have limitations?[/B]
it is harmful at individual, national and international level
[B]Harmful effects at individual level:[/B]
1) constant criticism on every petty issue........source of derailment of interpersonal relations
2) cause of intolerance in the society
3) inability to solve social problems through consensus
[B]Harmful effects at national level:[/B]
1) unbridled criticism.........cause of political unrest
examples of current political situation in Pakistan
2) unchecked revelation of facts and figures by media......gateway for terrorist activities
3) broadcasting prejudicial comments.....cause of building wrong public opinion
examples of charges against Pakistan's ISI chief as well as respectable justice
4) deterioration of national unity
[B]Harmful effects at international level[/B]
1) source of derailment of bilateral relations......example of India and Pakistan
2) exploitation of rights of minorities......examples of Muslims in Myanmar, minorities of Hazara shia etc
3) political isolation of countries.........example of Russia facing international sanctions
4) source of economic loss
[B]Freedom of speech....... a weapon for media to[/B]:
1) enhance the rating
2) expose internal disputes at international level
3) morally bankrupt the society
4) defame the state's institutions
[B] Policy suggestions:[/B]
1) teachings of ethics should be made the part of international curriculum
2) moral values should be inculcated in the society
3) media should be strictly regularized
4) government policy should be formulated for check and balance
[B]Conclusion[/B]

V.V.Best outline but numbering and variable should be there.

thanx alot. i have made correctons

good effort :)
but restrict your every point for not more than three words...

Without prejudice

Good Effort

Outline is lose and not coherent.

In outlines

Avoid lengthy points.....rather chose compact words & restrict extra use of words

[B]Headings and sub headings are not well disciplined[/B]
[B]
Give each Heading a Serial Number[/B]
Then its sub heading in sub-numbering as under :-

1.What is free speech?
a. Freedom of expressing ............
b. unchecked freedom ...................

2. freedom of speech is expressed through
a. public processions
b. electronic media
3.......................................so on and so forth...............


Don't ask questions like [B]what is free speech?.[/B]................rather write only [B]Free speech[/B]........ the examiner knows that you will define it in expansion..........


Don't be so descriptive in Outline. Only touch topics which you would expand later in essay.

Again full length lines in Outline are very risky as per my meager knowledge. It shows that you lack requisite English vocabulary for ant outline that you are using full length sentences in outline to express yourself.


You cannot put dots in between words as you have done [COLOR="Red"]unbridled criticism.........cause of political unrest[/COLOR]
It would be a blunder in CSS Essay.

Never quote examples in outline as you have done.



Again good brainstorming but very sorry that it is not a very good outline due to long sentences.

Having said that, i am not an authority. I just expressed my opinion about an outline. I may be totally wrong here too. I tried once to share my views on essay writing in following post a well:-

[url]http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-compulsory-subjects/essay/79525-abc-essay-writing-examples-ad-intros.html[/url]

Never knew there was 'correct' way of writing a plan. The purpose of the plan is to aid the writer in writing the essay. Usually when I write plans for my essays I do not just use one word, as I tend to loose track of why I actually wrote that one word in the first place. So if writing a plan the way you have written works for you in organising your thoughts then you should stick with it.

On a side note, from my own experience, I recommend looking at the question and assessing what is being asked. It has asked you 'Free speech must have limitations' and you have given all the point why it must have limitations, but you haven't listed any points as to why it should not have limitations. An essay is a reasoned argument. If I was to read your essay based on your outline, I would be thinking 'but hey free speech is awesome, because of this this reason...' and in line with my views which you have not countered in your essay, I would be like, the writer lacks the knowledge to convince me why I am wrong and the writer is right. Treat any topic like a coin, it has two sides, represent both sides, after which pick a side you like best, but make sure you show the reader why that side is better than the other.

@Chintoo Avoid using red font