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kindly evaluate and suggest
In the presence of military conflict, civil strife, lawlessness, bad governance and human rights violation, terrorist find it easier to hid, train and prepare their attacks outline1) Introduction a) Definition of terrorists The users of illegitimate power who perform the following activities: i) Deteriorate ideological basis of state ii) Break the social fabrics iii) Manipulate people's opinion iv) Hatch conspiracy against state's institutions v) Perform bloodshed 2) Situations suitable for terrorists' activities a) Military conflict: i) Terrorists engage state's forces to divert the attention ii) Cause economic loss due to enhanced defense budget iii) Easily infiltrate their allies from borders b) Civil strife i) Disharmony among state's institutions facilitates terrorists ii) Provincialism iii) Sectarianism iv) Vested interest groups influence the law making process c) Lawlessness: i) Injustice compels masses to find alternatives ii) Favoritism breeds terrorist mentality among the deprived people iii) Attempt to escape the status quo thrives terrorism iv) Terrorists easily hide among innocent people d) Bad governance: i) Unemployment paves way for terrorism ii) Poverty ridden people are prone to terrorism iii) Illiterate people are easy to be molded mentally iv) Inequality breeds terrorism v) Ineffective law enforcement agencies are the main cause e) Human rights violation i) Lack of basic facilities compel one to go for terrorism ii) Exploitation of the rights of minorities iii) Terrorism is a revenge against feudalism 3) Conclusion |
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An incomplete essay;almost 90% of students writing on this topic will be touching what you have written because it is typical formula writing..While, it touches the topic yet relevance to topic isn't the only thing that elevates an essay to desired heights...An essay isnt just facts and figures and analysis of a topic...It also requies tat extra spice to captivate n compel a reader..You may be methodologically correct with this one but as i mentioned it fails short of rising beyond an average attempt.. minor digressions and detours;if relevant doesnt constitute a sin in essay writing.Do not strictly follow the rules that are regularly churned out by academies and self proclaimed Essayist as strict conformation to those ideals restrict your essay..Essay isn't just about writing simple,technichally correct english,it also needs to fulfil the criteria of being complete on its literary merits(After all it is an English essay we are talking about).This essay while technically sound lacks in originality(as whole body seems to be mere explanation of the topic itself);Start is not catchy and ends abruptly without bringing any logical conclusion to the writing...Remember, learn the art of writing essays which are intersting to examiner,avoids monotony of expression,imbibes essence of originality and are executed to acheive the standards of literary merits (for that read essays of well known English essayists to learn few tricks of trade;as it will help you understand what measures they employ in their writings to elevate their writings to heights of literary master pieces)...Good luck.
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kindly suggest me some good essayists.n is it possible for you to check my pieces of writing via email?i want to take guidance individually.
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