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space warriors Sunday, October 19, 2014 06:00 AM

Seniors please check my essay grammatically , and the coherence in sentences :)
 
Pakistan is facing a rapid resurgence in sectarian violence . Most often , such violence involves clashes between two groups -sunni-shia that fight tooth and nail . such violence is always triggered by overtly or covertly to keep the pot boiling .Pakistan is the second largest country comprising of Shia population after Iran- so , two rival groups sunni-shia , are put into war by some false fundamental thoughts .One another initiative factor of the sectarian violence if the bilateral relations of Pakistan with Iran and on the other hand the influence by Saudia .It looks like as if Pakistan has caught between two fires . Need of hour for Pakistan's political, social and economic condition , is to pull out itself from the verge of destruction .

This sectarian violence and its roots can be traced back to -2000s when TTP arose as an organisation . Lashkar-e-jahangvi on the other hand has took decision to disenfranchise Hazara community . The Hazara community on other hand has been militarized to protect themselves . Attacks and counter attacks are being carried out and the state's executive sessile in current scenario . Nothwithstanding the fact , the ongoing dissension will not stop from either sides , therefore state will have to scratch its head for its sovereignty . This is a war in cold blood with is prevailing by leaps and bounds .

It's burning question for Pakistan either to solve sectarian violence or to face grave repercussions much like Syria , Iran etc .

Reckless nation of Pakistan should feel by now that they should play a collaborative role against violence and they just cannot aloof from situation . if so they are trying to be oblivious of the current impasse then they are not among the true Muslims .

Please seniors guide me if i am wrong point out my faults regarding thoughts and irrelevancies , just one sentence of inspiration by you and i am on the throne :sad:


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