VIOLENCE IS THE LARGE REFUGEE OF THE INCOMPETENT
How to make an comprehensive outline?
How is violence the large refugee of the incompetent?
Violence is the large refugee of the incompetent because it is the incompetent that take refugee in resorting to violence as a first resort-competent authority resort to violence as a last resort.
EXPLANATION OF THE TOPIC
In this sense Tehrike Taliban Pakistan(TTP) resort to violence as first resort in fulfilling its evil scheme of enforcement of their shariah because they are not answerable to people.Rather Pakistan is competent authority focused on peaceful solution of the TTP issue as a first resort.In short,TTP take refugee in resorting to violence while Pakistan tries to peaceful resolution of the issue.
DETAILS OF THE TOPIC
a. TTP's militant approach
b.Religious monopoly
c.Intolerant behavior
d.Opposition to Constitution of 1973: democracy
e.Inclined to Amirul Mominin Scheme
f.Opposition to modern education
g.Ban on girls education
CAUSES of failed Negotiations
a.Adamant of both parties on their stand
b.Pakistan urges TTP renounce militant way, TTP urges Sharia
REMEDIES(NO NEED HERE)
conclusion

Your essay outline is focused more on Taliban than on providing the proof that Violence indeed is the last refuge. Look at the topic. Didn't mention TTP anywhere. Yes, TTP can be one of the examples but don't converge the whole topic on TTP. Provide more examples from the world, history and you get a good essay.

I'm no guru on essays but my two cents.

Brother kindly sift it AGAIN if i fall equal to demand
Violence is the large refugee of the incompetent(Complet outline and Its Intro)
Violence is the large refugee of the incompetent
1. Introduction
2. Meaning of violence
3. World at glimpse
4. Why is it said incompetency breeds violence in acquiring absolute power?
a. Lack of knowledge
b. No concept of relative freedom
c. Repercussions wars and revolutions
5. Violence has taught following lessons: competent world
a. To restore peace of the planet
b. Prevention of wars
c. Creation of world organizations
6. Violence has taught following lessons: incompetent world
a. Ideological wars
b. Imperial design: a New World Order
c. Rise of nationalism
7.The policy of violence against violence
8. Conclusion


There is a common saying that greed for acquiring absolute power breeds violence. Greed for power has been enriched in the blood of man and it is due to the fact that world has been a battleground for human race since its emergence in dominating others in some way or the others. Because they have been trying to acquire absolute power, the concept of using violence is the first rule of the society rather resorting others means to settle mutual dispute, for it undermine their scheme of acquiring absolute power. Precisely, the word violence may be used in certain ways; some say that it is the prerogative of the incompetent authority when certain unpopular policies are imposed over general public by force which in turn creates rebellious movements against the incompetent authority, others view in it the persistent effort to dominate the world at large by using inhuman schemes in acquiring absolute power. Sociologists argue that nothing is absolute in the world than death itself.
From the emergence of life on the earth, man’s life is divided in three stages, hunting life, agriculture life and the modern industrial life. Historian says that hunting life was the class less life of the man where different hunters tribes had been waging persistent wars in receiving their subsistence only. Agriculture life created feudalism where later butchers the former either by physically or economically in imposing heavy tenures. Similarly, the modern world, in spite of recorded the most civilized world, too has resorted to violence in acquiring absolute power on others. In acquiring absolute power they have don’t care for other nation’s freedom. Though the contemporary world is far better than old world, because it has learnt universally the importance of maintenance of peace of the planet, after catastrophic aftermaths of human tragedy in Second World War, and have taken certain measures to maintain it by creating world organization. These are the lessons of resorting to violence in Second World War. Unfortunately, it seems the world has forgotten the lessons of universally the importance of maintenance of peace. Soon after the creation of United Nations Organization, the world experienced once more a ideological war between bipolar world which is known in the history with name of Cold War, later on emerging of unipolar world with the slogan of New World Order, rise of nationalism, therein before, the world is transferring now from unipolar to multipolar. The bipolar world produced intimidating threat of nuclear war for almost five decades to the world nation, the presence of multipolar world can endanger the peace of the world if it will not be given power to UNO’s General Assembly. If one analyze the world populated with men, it seems violence is the only way to settle the disputes of the world.

I was silent on this thread. I have been for 2 days now. Didn't want to pour further input as I don't consider myself a good analytic person. However, I feel you don't get to know your own mistakes till you get it checked by a 3rd person. It happened to me so I feel I should put forth my views on these paragraphs and outline.


I noticed 4 things.

1. You have good vocabulary and good grammar.

2. It was good that you improved on the previous try and gave it some international color. Appreciated. Better outline and don't completely exclude Locality. A mix of National and International examples would prove the best.

3. If I read your paragraphs as a person who has normal understanding, I won't get what you are trying to say in these two para's. Try to make your essay easy for yourself and the examiner.

3a. Use shorter sentences.

4. You didn't clearly prove that Violence indeed is the last refuge of the incompetent. At one place you said, it is the foremost technique/method used by the incompetent.

e.g if I'm not wrong, you're relating somehow that participation in World War 2 was an act of incompetence because of use of violence. You have to prove it with your arguments.

essay k paper me headings b likni hoty....mean every new paragraph me hum new baat liktay hy tu new heading de gay?

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Headings are not needed in essay. I won't recommend headings.

Brother thank you so much.I try further to use such a techniques in my next attempt of practicing essay...