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About your introduction is started well and intro look like a report instead of an essay, so many statistical figures in your intro.
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Thesis statement is not properly defined..
you are using abbreviations which are not allowed in css essya use complete words.. Dont repeat same ideas.. your ideas are true but you are explaining too much in introduction. Dont make it too lengthy brother. Remaining is good. |
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