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As uploading topics fully to get some views is herculean task on CSS forums & I remain busy to a nth degree with my books.So,I won't get much time for that.But as its fact that critical analysis of any topic is miniature which get your critical abilities judged in a trice.Hence,in order to do that & get some views about my way of assessing topics. I have uploaded a critical analysis of my P.A topic.Your appreciation & pummeling is welcome. Topic5.
Critical analysis of Lucknow Pact:-
The "Lucknow Pact"of 1916 is a glinting docket in Indian history caught in communal chaos & absolute perturbation.No doubt,it was a tremendous achievement by hindus & Muslims,where both the communities shown a pining for working in tandem to achieve their desired ends.Apart from this superficial view,the pact carried other different dimensions as well for both the communities.Firstly,for Hindus the acceptance of separate electorates by Congress was equivalent of breaking the country on Communal line,which too in a constitutional and agreed manner.Hindu looked at acceding separate electorates to Muslims as opening gates of Communal deluge in a heterogenous Indian nation. Also,Hindus viewed the whole pact from a narrow rather a pigeonholed prism of unjust appeasing of Muslim minority. As famous indian writes Bipin Chandra writes in his book " Indian struggle for Independence",
". . . The acceptance of the principle of separate electorates for Muslims was certainly most controversial decision.It can not be denied that pact was motivated by a sincere desire to allay minority fears about majority domination"
Also,another famous Indian writer Rajiv Ahir says the same,
". . . The controversial decision to accept the principle of separate electorates represented a serious desire on the part of Congress to allay the minority fears of majority domination."
However,the Muslims looked at positive dimension of Pact and unlike Hindus their approach was much apt.The Muslims called it a positive & successful development in Indian stride towards self-rule.As I.H qureshi writes,
" The Muslims won a unique victory when the Congress,of its own free will and without any reservations,accepted separate electorates and made them the pivot of scheme."
Overall it suggests that,the pact was a result of joint endeavours by Congress and League to put up a united front against British,this shows the farsightedness of the both the sides involved.Also,the acceptance of separate electorates by Congress was actually an indirect admission of fact that Muslims are a separate nation & a separate political entity with different political ideals and aspirations.This was indeed a remarkable step in evolution of Two-nation theory.Thus,it can be said that,though the pact offered different aspects to both the corrival communities, who too looked at it from different dimensions but at last they curled the mo in getting their cherished demand of self-rule by the British Government answered.As Government later introduced Montagu-Chelmsford Reforms in 1917,which was considered an answer to Indian pep up for self-rule. As Rajiv Ahir says,
" . . . there was a large enthusiasm generated among the people by this reunion.Even the government decided to placate the nationalists by declaring its intention to grant self-government to Indians in times to come,as contained in Montagu's August 1917 declaration."

1. Why it was significant for both congress and league? Give the clear point in a same sentence.
2. Why were the British behaving to be idols as if they don't care about the continent? Simply what makes the pact successful?
3. It would rather be better to mention the gains to the league and congress separately.
4. The way to write introduction still needs to be polished.
5. Few grammar mistakes are also there.



Better to write on a page, take a photo and upload here or email.





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Ok your answer is appreciated up to the hilt.But i want to know that as I have made my analysis is that wrong? I mean I have my own mental acumen of assessing things & you have your own.Why I'm wrong? Please guide senior #Thanks

Only the words change but the nature of ideas remain same. This is the actual case while attempting the answer.

Can you email me that question that you attempted?
[email]insafaly@gmail.com[/email]
Also tell me which subjects you have opted.

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Anyother source? I don't have email id

Messenger or whatsapp or make the email.
Will you be attempting 2019?

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I am for 2020.But you didn't tell what is wrong in my analysis.I have assessed Lucknow Pact from a different angle & given my opinion at last even proved it with remarkable quote.You given me suggestions but didn't tell why you underrated my analysis without any good reason.I wana know that and that is why i have uploaded it here.So,I ask again,how is my analysis I mean rate it out of 10? Kindly

5/10

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The thing where you are making your ideas vague is the use of long sentences. We easily get ourselves satisfied that we have written proper answer but the actual case is not so. One important thing that your using strange vocabulary i mean uncommon words.


Oh you are aspirant for 2020. Still you have a lot of time. I thought you might attempt this year.

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Mr.Insaf would you like to clear one thing for me.And that is "What is difference between Quote & reference" I mean i am busy in making my notes as I give quote along with reference as above I have done.But i have seen people writing it separately as if these are two different things.Now can you please clear in details what is refernce & how it is different from quote???