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What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state? 22
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I attempted "In this country reason does not apply to anything."

It certainly paid me back. How much ?? That would be a mystery till final result.
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I attempted:
"Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom by the print and electronic media."

Following is the outline of my essay and it was a good attempt in my opinion but I was able to score only 35 in it.
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i attempted #9. hurdles. my score is 49
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saadshafiq please you also mention outlines of essay you attempted
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Share outline as you attempted this essay in CSS-2011.
I started with the quote:
"Peace rules the day where reason rules the mind"

In introduction I discussed Political, religious and social reasons and the purpose this country came into being for.

Then I dealt with the question if all the objectives achieved or not? Discussing the prevailing anarchic situation(with special emphasis over extremist mindset of our society) I justified my answer of "BIG NO".

Then I tried to trace out the root causes of these failures discussing our misplaced priorities in political, social, economic and religious spheres.

Then recommending the possible solutions I Concluded the essay..

I would try to come up with detailed outlines whenever I get time..
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a.a My question to Respected Arthur,
Kindly tell me how much pages u utilize for outline and for writing the body of essay? And also did u write headings and sub heading n the body? I had write the same outline and body as yours but i got 38 as compare to ur 47. Also i write 2 pages for outline and 25 pages i.e whole answer sheet for body. plz do reply. i had write essay on women as angel or evil in pakistani society.
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My topic was : "Truth is a rare commodity despite the freedom by the print and electronic media"
Without any preparation I got 29.
My outline was not impressive one, paragraphs were not coherent but at the end I concluded well.
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