wish you best of luck for future endeavors..

WOT and abuse of HRs

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Then who is that guy who scored 718 nd flanked in essay paper. Sorry I thought it's you. Thanks for your answer

I also attempted the same essay but got only 17 marks
Can you share with me your outline and introductory lines?

i had given my oultine on css forum, just after the exam. So , you can find it in my timeline.

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guys how to write outlines of an essay please guide and share your experience here

So the hypothesis that anybody who attempted 1st essay topic was targeted, has been proven wrong, as many aspirants have attempted this topic and passed the exam.

I am thankful to shezad sb for initiating this thread.

I request all the qualifiers, or those who attempted this topic and passed, to please share outline and conclusion.

@Sharia and Law: Have you studied at International Islamic University Islamabad? You have not shared your email so i could not ask you personally.

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What was your score ? I attempted the same but got 17 .
Please tell us how long was your outline?

Qualifiers, what would you suggest regarding outline of essay ? I have heard different approaches from different people which is why i am confused. What would you guys who passed essay suggest?
Should the outline be long enough to go around 2 or 3 pages or should it be short like 1 page or half a page ??
Does the length of outline matter ???
Do we need to mention each and every point in outline which we would write in essay or just 4 to 5 major points ???

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The topic of my essay was War on Terror and Human Rights Abuses . My outline was scattered over one and a half page and the whole essay consumed around 20 pages or so .

It was my favorite topic because IR was one of my optional subjects. I took a MOOC on Coursera on Terrorism and Counter Terrorism , had already watched plenty of documentaries. I have a flood of information and statistics in my mind that I want to pen down but time was short .

So below is a brief sketch of my outline . I might be missing many points as they have been deleted now from my mind .

Introduction
A Brief History Of terrorism.
- From Zealots to Hassan ibn Sabah then to Reign of Terror in France after French revolution
How to define Terrorism ? A puzzle for whole world.
- I briefly discussed the till now there is no accurate definition of terrorism. Every nations defines terrorism according to her own political and social scenario

A Brief History Of war on Terror
• How it all started.
• Who were the coalition partners?
• Prime objectives
• The geographical area where it was fought
Who First Coined The Term War on Term ,US President George W Bush on September 21st 2001.

How WOT is responsible for mass abuse of human rights
- Become a mere tool by the western powers to invade any country
- Given rise to Islamic phobia around the world.
- It was a direct challenge to the credibility of UN.
- Given rise to extremism around the world. Like TTP , ISIS etc
- Human rights abuses by CIA , their concentration camps , drone strikes , using cruel interrogation tactics as confessed by the CIA chief
- Exploitation of the rights of PoWs Guantanamo Bay , Abu Ghuraib jail incidents
- Made world more insecure
- Lack of Free trials
- Curb on freedom of Expression .
- Responsible for the Economic Crunch of 2008 .
- Electronic surveillance of Citizens , US NSA Prism program , Edward Snowden Case .
- Given a free license to oppressive regimes around the world to curb the just right of self-determination such as In India , Israel

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Conclusion

Perfect!
This shows that if you have adequate knowledge about the given topic, you can pass it. Would you please tell us how you concluded your essay?

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