shaairi
 

kia tashree se pehlay shaair k kalaam ki mutalka khoobi ka zikar karna chaiay/
?
aur mafhoom se shoru karna chaaiay?
dar haqeeqat me tashree k aaghaaz k baray me maloomaat lena chahta hoon,
un sahibaan se jo bataanay se peshtar score dekh chukay hon apna.
shukryya!!!


:waiting

ap poet ki zindagi se tashreeh shuru ker saktay hain jesa k Ghalib k shaer ki ager tashreeh ki jaye tou kuch youn ho gi;
qarz ki peetay thay maey or samhtay thay k haan,
rang laye gi hamari faaqa masti aik din......!!

TASHREEH;
Ghalib ki sari zindagi mua'ashi tangdasti mein guzri.Musa'aib o aalaam se faraar k liye wo sharab noshi ka sahara letay thay
yani ap start len gay poet ki zindagi ka shaer k sath relation show ker k,ager ho tou...
phr tashreeh kernay k baad ap shaairi islahaat ka ziker karen gy ager koi istemal hui hon ya jo tarakeeb istemal hui hon..
aakhir mein thora sa ap ka zaati tabsara jesa k;
is shaer mein Ghalib apni bebasi ka mazaq urra rahay hain or ye un k kalaam ki khasoosiat hai k wo takaleef pe aansu bahanay ki bijaye shagufta mizaaji ka sahara laitay hain or ye e un ki infraadiyat hai...
rahi baat mafhoom ki tou wo mujhe b confirm nae,i hope koi or bata de ga.
ma'azrat k sath bhai,mei ne urdu pehlay attempt nae kia hua bcz ye meri pehli attempt ho gi Feb mein but i tried to help:)
Regards

shukryya
 

apki rahnumai ka shukryya!!!!!!!!
dar asal meri bhi pehli koshish ho g Feb me.Parh to bahot kuch lia ha lakin paper me produce karna zara technique se aata hay,jiski k mujh me abhi kammi hay.

ap ne saray poets kiye hain?

Takreeban
 

hafeez jakindhari ni kia siraf,ak dafa reading ki thi SHAHNAMA E ISLAM ki
baki to sab kiay hn

Please solve it
 

shaairi me c + d part
aur nasar me syaaq o sabaaq se b part,

(jeem)kahin tou kaarwan e dard.........
tashreeh:poet k dard be'inteha hain,musaa'ib itnay k goya ik qaafila ho,takleefen itni k jesay jhurmat ho.dard ka kaarwaan kehnay se poet ki muraad hai k us k tamam dukh dard ik doosray se aisay bandhay hue hain or is tarah munazzam hain jesay ik qaafila ho.qaafilay ki herkat tou qaabil e tasleem hai mger shaair ne manzil ki herkat ka b ziker kia hai..yani shaair k ranj o gham ik qaafilay ki soorat manzil ki jaanib barhay ja ry hain or azziyyat ki bat tou ye hai k manzil ka b koi thikana nae or ye shaair ki dastaras se door hai..
aglay misray mein shaair kehta h ye meri guzerti hui umer bhi kahin teher jaye.goya shaair apni maut ki tamanna ker ra h kiun k ye e ik tareeka hai musaaib o aalaam se chutkara panay ka.shaair is be'chaini mein ye b pukar ra h ya tou maut aa jaye ya phr meray dil ko sabr o qaraar...dard ka kaarwaan shaair k liye ik musalsal azziyaat ka baa'is hai,ye e waja hai k wo is se faraar k lye duaa go hai..shaair k lafzon mein jo kasak hai wo us ki dard ki tarjumaan hai...
bhai 2nd shair ki tashreeh kal karun gi.
regards

ok
 

aur sath support me koi shair bhi agar likh diay jaain,jese baqol ghalib k,
meri qismat mein gham gar itna tha
dil b ya Rab kai diay hotay
kia khyal hay?
thori si umeed to ab lagi hoi hay shaair ko jo "shaaid " kehta ha?

g ashaar tou kafi add ho saktay hn bas mei ne to the point likha jaldi jaldi...ab i will try to put ashaar also..
kal pehlay sher ki tashreeh ki thi ab usi k aglay sher ki..
Amaa'n kesi.....
tashreeh:shaair apni bebasi ka rona ro hai k abhi mujhe apnay dukhon se panaah kesay milay?k abi tou zulm ki inteha nae hui...moj e khoon ka ki taraf ishara krnay se shaair ka maqsad ye ehsaas batana hai k abi zulm o sitam ne meri jan nae li..abi mein zinda hun..aisa maloom hota h k shaair ka ishara apnay mehboob ki janib hai,jis ka zulm us waqt thamay ga jab tak shaair ka khoon nae behta...
aglay misray mein shaair kehta h k jab meray jism se khoon ka fawaara phootay ga tab he meray mehboob ka waar kernay wala hath thamay ga or zulm rukay ga..
baqol shaair;
sarfaroshi ki tammana aaj meray dil mein hai,
dekhna ye hai k zor kitna baazoo e qaatil mein hai
is sher ko youn b lia ja skta hai k shaair ka ishara hukmarano ki jaanib hai.un k zulm o sitam ne awaam ko bebasi ki inteha pe pohancha dia hai k wo ab wo faqat apni maut ka intezaar ker ry hain...mger wo ye nae jantay k;
"mar k bhi chain na paya tou kidher jayen gay"
ye ashaar shaair k dil ki aawaz lagtay hain kyon k in mein dard or bebasi ka ijtimaa waazeh toar pe mehsoos hota hai...

aglay ashaar mujhe zara mushkil lag ry hn AMAL JIN KA HAI walay..mger kal i will try to do..
regards

shaair ka naam
 

vesay poet konsa ha?
mjay poet ki samaj ni lagi sahe