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my attempted essay
salam to all
dear memon and rao ur outline were good... mine was on "pakistan's war on terror" and socio ......impact on pakistan. actually i dont remeber the exact sequence of my outline, but i'll quote as much as i remember. -what is terrorism? historical background (with special references to the research material i had studied) -perspectives of terrorism. terrorist groups. AL-QAEDA AND TALIBAN (as special concern to pakistan) -9/11 -pakistan's involvement. taliban's stretch to different parts of pkaistan. influences on taliban *wahabism *arabs *afghan talib -moral and financial suppport given to taliban by whom? *afghanistan's drug supply to the whole globe. *indian factor to destabilise pakistan. *arab imperialism * alleged isi -goals and objectives of taliban *talibanization (their menifesto) -impact on pakistan. *pro-taliban factor *anti taliban factor *isi .. .. .. conclusion. this is the material i remeber...i'll surelly add more as it comes to my mind. |
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@Almaas Ruby
Thank you for your post. I am little bit confused in this topic "Pakistan's War on terror and its impact on our psyche and politic.socio.economic fronts". You know why I am confused: Actually, topic demands material on the War aspect "War on terror" but most of the guys have written essay like they were asked to write on "Terrorism". Don't we confuse both the topics with each other while writing? This mistake is common because previously it has frequently been asked to write on "Terrorism and its implications" but this time topic was reverse "Implications of War on Terrorism" which was misunderstood by most of the candidates. And they overloaded the paper with all the stuff they had collected on merely terrorism without even thinking of its relevance. Your comments are awaited please. Regards
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I have attempted the essay"Pakistan's war on terror and its psycho, politio,socio and economic fronts"
Outline introduction: what is war on terror? Why Pakistan is involved? Pakistan's role in the war. Impacts: Psychological front: War phobia Constant tensions for people Psychological issues particularly in affected areas Chances of higher Psycho diseases Women and childrens are suffering more Political front: Political instability in country Emergence of new faces in politics like Sufi Muhammad Politicians are just busy in dialogues and personal attacks Politicians are using this war to win public pool only Every govt. is carrying on this war to win America's favors All efforts are focused at war while other welfare projects are lacking behind. Social: Impact on people of war affected areas. Forced migration. Social problems are increasing in the country. These migrated people are affecting the social life of other areas. War impact on life style of general public. Economic impacts: Loss of MNC's business Poor condition of stock markets Absence of local investors Decreasing rate of economic growth Business in affected areas is totally dead. Loss of foreign exchange through tourism Export is decreasing( as developed countries are turning towards India and other countries) Devaluation of currency Increasing inflation and cost of production Rehabiliation of these people is extra burdon on economy. Conclusion: These headings may be somewhat in diffrent sequence.I worte upto 24 pages of main sheet while I used to write 5 words a line and 11 or 12 lines per page.
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@ramshakhan
You have very well addressed the topic. Excellent.
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ramshakhan (Wednesday, May 13, 2009) |
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@Raz
R u sure.I was thinking that I could not attempt very well as I really wanted. As it was very first paper so speed and performance was very low.
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Outstanding attempt Ramsha,
Infact I wanted someone to come ahead and share his/her way of attempting the peculiar essay. Actually having seen this essay I was a bit confused about elaborating the psyche front. Regards, |
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ramshakhan (Wednesday, May 13, 2009) |
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regards @ramsha u have taken the topic logically and have illustrated it wotever was required, so weldone,. you have written abt 1500 words but the quality/sequense/areas covered of ur essay are outclass so i think u must get 60% in this paper. reagrds
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Aftab:
Isn't it said that essay is to test the ability of how one arranges the sentences, further how the sentences are arranged in a paragraph? As far as "Terrorism" and "War on Terrorism" are concerned; both of them appeared to be different topics. However its my perception, you are in a liberty to disagree. I guess that essay could be best tackled in the way ramsha has shown. |
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@lord
u are right dear , i know ramsha has done it wisely, and these topics are definately different but they have same material...now it depends upon once ability how he takes the essay, how he illustrate/arrange/rearrange the ideas than how he concludes it...so i was just talking abt the relevancy of thse topics. Moreover if u take topic TERRORISM than definately u will disscuss the WAR aswel which is going on since 9/11. so my dear ideas are same but only the arrangment which varies.
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