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@ Mangat1;

Dear, Quality matters not quantity. I know many guys who have passed CSS exam with 12 pages of essay. Essay needs to be full of facts and to the point. Beating about the bush is not the key point to get success in CSS.
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I could not write 2500 words ,mine would be 1700-1800 almost. Does it affect?


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i wrote 18.5 pages including my outline.

please tell me did i handle the essay in the right direction.

i will be very thankful to u for analysing my essay n predicting the range of marks i can get.

My Outline wasn't comprehensive like yours but points were same and No. of pages too.

actually i did not count any words as i did not have much time.i just focused on best examples and to cover every aspect of essay in a good way.

and my essay outline was not comprehensive i have mentioned some points here just to show that it was a matter in it like quotes and examples were not included in my outline.


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Your outline is awesome. I pray may you find success. AMEEN
Ameen and thanks for a thorough look at outline.

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I could not write 2500 words ,mine would be 1700-1800 almost. Does it affect?
firstly , i don't think so it matters a lot.but to some extent it can help u to extract some more marks from the examiner.and finally,i have also heard that 11 pages are enough to pass the essay paper but with a relavent information.

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I wish you all the best but this was just a comment. You don't need to take it serious. Those were the views of a person, not of everyone.
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I wrote essay on this topic.
Can women be equal to men in Pakistan?

My outline was like this.

1. Introduction
2. state of women rights in ancient societies
3. state of women rights in Hinduism
4. Equal status accorded to women by Islam
5. state of women rights in Pakistan
6. Factors responsible for the present state of affairs
7. Crimes being committed against women
8. Steps taken by the present government
9. Hope for the future
10 What needs to be done further?
11 Conclusion.

I would request all members to pray for my success. My prayers are with you people. Also comment on the outline.
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@ ShallowWater, Kindly tell us, how many pages you have written and apt words. Thanks
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I wrote 25 pages with an average of 105 words per page.
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hey guys,
I have written on
Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism.

Introducation
defining terrorism
causes of terrorism
motives of terrorism
terrorist's perspective
western perspective (various theories)
war on terror (a story of failure)
why dialogue? (arguments, voilence breed violence, poverity, extremism etc)
conclusion.

I could hardly pulled my essay to 11 pages,

comment, am worried about the word limit and outline structure.

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dear friends Assalam'o' Alikum
how r u all?
i wrote the essay
"Dialouge is the best way to combat terrorism"

i wrote almost 2 copies
but i am ready to prepare again bcz my sis said u didnot written in a correct manner and ur material is not relating. now comment plz

my outline was


Introduction

Definition
1 terrorism
2 dialouge

how it comes into existance

causes of terrorism

terrorism in south asia
terrorism in western countries

Effects of terrorism

on public
on administration
on rulers
on security forces

terrorism in pakistan

remedies to reduce this evil

war vs dialouge

conclusion


some of them i am not recalling at the moment.
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@saba

Dear...yours was a nice effort but, i am afraid, in the wrong direction. it would have been a marvelous effort if the essay was on title of terrorism and its implications or anything similar..

this essay demanded terrorism in context with dialogue..

although i didnot attempt this essay but i wrote down its outline...

according to me it should have been like this:

What is a dialogue
why is it important during conflicts
leading examples
terrorism of today
its root causes
dialogue and terrorism today
examples of dialogues with terrorists
why is it necessary today?
when to start the dialogues and on what grounds?
conclusion.

in your essay the word dialogue barely seems to come out in the limelight..

though i am not an authority and your effort was a pretty nice one...the reason i dropped it out was that it was vast, and i thought it would be attempted by many...:P

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is here anyone who has written on "why is there no status of third gender in Pakistan?"
yeah i wanted to go for this topic in a cynical fashion.. i mean criticizing the society for its negligence of basic rights for men, women, chidren, elderly let alone the third gender....then found it too repungent :P
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@umarabbas
dear ur approach iz very positive.i m sure the way u hv dealt ur essay there is no que of failure.
Dear the outline tht u hv jotted down while suggesting one other candidate is also as gud as it shud b.i wish u succes n glory.keep it up.tc
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