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i wrote can women be equal to men in Pakistan?
Outlines Introduction about equality and women condition etc as i did mention all in my essay can women be equal to men in Pakistan women is not equal to men in Pakistan but she can be equal to men in Pakistan we shall have to see all those places where she has not equal rights then we can explain how can she be equal with men in Pakistan women status in Pakistan Faces of inequality of women in Pakistan Women in home Women in society Women in education Women in politics Women in jobs Women in culture Women in economy Women in equality in decision making Poor women Women inequality in relation Women as sister (as compare with brother) Women as wife ( as compare with husband) Women as daughter ( as comparer with son) Women as mother ( as compare with father) Government steps Politics, law, NGOs , Education and in jobs fix quota Suggestions Pakistan a Islamic country Islamic principles should be follow Orthodox Muslim thoughts should be discourage Education should be necessary Women should remove her fear Women should know about her rights Brother should be cooperative Husband should be cooperative Father should be cooperative Law and order condition should be better for women Women should be courage in decision making More quota for jobs should be increased for women More sets should be reserved in parliament Women should be courage in economy field Narrow mind thinking should be change Media should play its role Women can play better Role in country progress Conclusion criticism will be welcome.... |
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@ New_Candidate
Did you mention about the Thar Coal Deposits, Reqo Dik Gold Deposits, Saindak Copper mines and Daddar Lead in your essay? I hope you did !
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So the war has begun in exam halls !
Although i am not an expert in this field, but i liked the essay of Hunain after reviewing all in this thread. Seems no canidate mentioned the recently passed law of women protection, while describing the govt's efforts for the equal status of women in socety. Anyway, wish u all best of luck, keep the spirit high ! |
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@ Bilal Zamir,
Yes ! Bilal, My essay contains, Projects: Thar Coal Deposits, Saindak Copper, Kakar, Sui, Wind Corridors, Gypsum, Rock Salt, Limestone Analysis, Mangement in text with: Mughals, China and developed nations In Suggestions: Super Computers, China Assistances, GAAP and AAA, Example of Kala Bagh Dam, Corruption - Kickbacks and Patronages; nepotism and croynism, Import of technology to own it, rather enjoying sharing at 20:80 ratio. etc Idioms Used in between: 10 and 15 2 Quotations: One by Meliore - " It is not only what we do, but also what we do not do, for which we are accountable " Other by Quaid-e-Azam at the end - " Pakistan came into being to live forever " ( I have used this quotation because in my conlusion i have written that Quaid has gift us Pakistan with enormous deposits of Minerals, thats why we should care of our resources to uphold our self with dignity " --- I took 30 minutes for Outline, and 30 minutes for Introduction page. ALHAMDULILLAH, it is one of the best intro, I beleive. I started writing causes and suggestion at 10.00 and finished at 11:15. In the last i took my time to write good conclusion and re-check the paper. |
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Please advice....
09. Religion has done more harm than help to human relations in the world.
This was the essay I attenpted. I won't reproduce the outline, its just the same like others who attempted this. I tried to use all Argumentation, (by presenting anti-theses and arguing on questions that may appear in my readers' mind), Description, Narration, (How terrorists misuse the concepts of Religion; narration of a suicide bomber turned with the aid of religion) Exposition and Definition (A bit about how Religion is defined). A plus, I didn't put emphasis only on inter-religious intolerance but also discussed intera-religious intolerance (sectarian conflicts Shiits vs Sunnis, Protestants vs Catholicss, Attack of Spain on England, destruction os Spanish Armada). I, however, didn't blame religions but the misuse of Religions, exploitation of Religions. I did mention what all religions order about human relations; peace and harmony, and how the followers misuse it. I didn't want to look an atheist I discussed Crusades, as a special case. I put lot of emphasis on present day world's problem; terrorism in this context. I discussed how in the name of Allah they slaughter their fellow Muslims in Swat-Malakand. ........ A problem: I have also reproduced 8 lines of poetry (of my own from a poem which I published on-net last year during op. Rah-e-Rast indicating the complain of an IDP that how those terrorists misused religion.) MY QUERY, IS MY INCLUDING POETRY ALLOWED. RESPONCE FROM ALL PLEASE. |
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@ New_Candidate
Fantastic. Looks like you really gave it your best. I personally believe that this essay topic was the best and the most marks securing. Good luck in the rest of the exams.
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@ Bilal Zamir,
But One thing, I went for quality rather quantity Because Many CSP advised me to go for Quality rather Quantity and I did the same, I saw candidates besides me, they started paper early and left the examination hall before 30-40 minutes and wrote around 15-18 pages. but now i am confused, because i have just written 13 Pages including Outline. What do you think, According to my facts, Are 12 pages enough to pass the paper? |
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I wrote 'Pakistan is rich in natural resources but poor in their mgt'
Outline was: Introduction Mineral resources Power resources-fossil fuels and others Environment suited for agriculture Forests Problems: Improper planning lack of technical knowhow shortage of capital Structural issues impeding implementation of plans Effects of poor mgt of natural resources: Lack of industrial development Energy Crisis Foreign exchange problems as we have to import resources Macroeconomic instability Proposed solutions: (wrote solutions of the problems discussed earlier) Pitfalls in implementing these solutions: Budget constraints Lack of will of govt. Conclusion |
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@jahanzaib khan
work hard on mcqs and true false type questions...remember they fetch the maximum marks...go through all the acronyms...in the paper write very short, to the point answers...and never forget to add diagrams whereever they could....never go for paper filling techniques...if its two marks question, it means they want two points only....remember two points....not two pages....
Example for clarification: - What is photosynthesis?(1) if it is a one mark question, the answer would be: "Photosynthesis is a process whereby light energy is converted into chemical energy in the chloroplasts (leaves) of the plant" however if it were a two marks question, then the answer would be different: "Photosynthesis is a process whereby light energy is converted into chemical energy in the chloroplasts (containing chlorophyll) in the leaves of the plants. The process uses up Sunlight and Carbondioxide and produces oxygen and glucose" You may write the equation here or draw up a diagram..!!! you can ask for more clarification
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I wrote on equality of men and women and pakistan,wrote 16 pages and am reproducing my outline here,kindly comment on it as I don't feel satisfied with it.
Intro: Women constitute almost 50% of world's popoulation Women are participating in every field of life with men Status of women in Islam: Western misperception that Islam believes in oppression of women Islam believes in equality of both men and women and the rights that Islam gave to women 1400 years back are being given to women now. Women worked as traders and fought alongside men in wars Status of women in Pakistan: Male dominated society and women are treated as a property Sold like animals in markets,not allowed to go out side of homes and their main duty is to reproduce and take care of their families Not allowed to marry the person of their choice and in case they do,they are killed and their bodies are thrown away, Contrary to Islamic teachings and has more to do with our tradition. Role in development of Pakistan: Tide is slowly in their favour now. Participating in all fields of life alongwith men Women are more hard working and taking distinctions in educations Women in operational branches of armed forces Women in Parliament,Dr.Fehmida Mirza as first women speaker of the National assembly.Their role in legislation Women in Economic sphere,Dr.Shamshad Ahmed as first Governer of State bank Role of Government: Women Empowerment bill Women Protection Bill Benazir Income Support Program Increased stress on female education Conclusion: Women are in no way inferior to men and both are working together to make Pakistan a better country.
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