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Essay: Man is born with equality & rights but everywhere he is shackles

- Introduction
- Global perspective
Economic disparity
Colonialism
Neo-Colonialism
Educational & Scientific inequality
Sham democracies

- National perpective
Feudalism
Concentration of economic, social & political power in few hands
Formation of estates
Ethnic, religious, sectarian divide
Regionalism

- Remedies
- Conclusion



Essay length: 2000 words

I did not emphasied on the above mentioned SYSTEMS, rather their implications on humans beings.

I gave sufficient evidences n examples to augment my argument.

@ Miss Naqvi

Dear Madam.I appreciate your efforts in guiding the students.You didn't reply my post in which i enquired whether you have ever appeared in CSS?

If you didn't,you can never understand what stress a candidate feels during the exam.And if you appeared,qualified or failed then please share your story.

In CSS it is almost impossible to accurately attempt all the essays.You cannot claim to be an authority on essays.There is always some digression.

Kindly spare some time and provide us with your specimen.I wrote on "Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism".If i be asked to write it again,my new attempt will be entirely different.

I wrote an essay on "the present system of education should shoulder some of the failures of our system".I got it checked from Prof.Manzoor Mirza.He gave his valuable suggestions.Afterwards,he wrote that essay and told me that he had written it to clarify that topic to candidates.CSS essay can never be spot on.Moreover,the topics reduce your freedom to somersault in different directions.

i hope to hear you worth suggestions soon.

Regards,

Help

i wrote on this topic...i dont think one topic is scoring n the other is not..it depends on your expression n material..

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CAN WOMEN BE EQUAL TO MEN IN PAKISTAN?

Introduction
Status of women
Role of women

Islamic Perspective
In the light of Quran
In the light of Hadith

International Perspective
A brief history
Current Scenario

Pakistan scenario
A brief history
Current Scenario

Why women are not equal to men in pakistan

Political Reasons
Lack of will of politicians
Ineffective laws
Poor law enforcing mechanism
Dealy in justice

Social Reasons
Illiteracy
Fuedal and tribal mindset
Poverty
Exploitation by men at workplaces

Economic Reasons
Declinig economy
Less job opportunities for women


Can women be equal to men in pakistan?
YES!
Suggestions

Political reforms
Representation of women in law making
Strong law enforcing mechanism
More representation of women in government sector
Protection against domestic violence

Social reforms
Improvement in education sector
Protection at work place
Need of changing the attitude of men towards women

Economic reforms
More job opportunities for women
Revival of cottage industry

Benefits of making women equal to men
More well equipped labour hence more chances of prosperity
Better economy

Conclusion

Thanks for your appreciation. Yes I appeared only once in 2006.

I am well aware of the nerve breaking stress a candidate come across when has to appear for 10 papers in just 5 days.

You are newbie so may not knowing me. My story is written in the posts of 2006 you and can check it out from my profile. I hope it will give you clear picture of mine.

Even I am not claiming to be an authority on essay but I know I am good in analysing it. I comment on the outlines and essays in the light of my experience and exposure.

I have already shared the outline so you can go through it. If you asking for essay then you have to wait. As I am already occupied with my commitments so it would be hard to manage 3 to 4 hours in a day. Essay writing is never enjoyable if not in 1 sitting. Rest assure I will share one with you.

You are 100% right. Its easy to analyse essay outside the examination hall but its very hard to manage it in the examination hall. You still can make a difference by practice.... practice.... more practice and more and more practice. Every time choose essay topic from past CSS papers collect relevant material and read it twice. Then jot down important points. Now draw outline and start your essay.Now find a teacher to check your work. If you will practice 15 essays this way I am 100% sure next CSS is yours.

If something left you can ask anytime.
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@ Saad

Your outline is really good and comprehensive. If your written expression is good and flawless Inshahallah your score will be good.


Regards

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"When Allah leads you to the edge of the cliff, Trust Him Fully, only 1 of 2 things will happen either He will catch you when you fall or He will teach you how to fly"

Well thank u so much, i will really appreciate improvemnets in my outline from other members.

@ Miss Naqvi

Thank you madam.I am highly indebted to you for the detailed reply.You are dead right.

CSS is really a tough job.Well,i dare say that you should have utilised your talent and taken another chance.Nevertheless,you are doing a splendid job.The only objection is that people normally lend ear to the suggestions of qualified officials.Our society is impressionistic in nature.The psychological aspect is always given more weightage.but i had no intentions to belittle your sincere efforts.

Thank you again.

Regards,

Help

Thanks for your words.

Yes its very good suggestion and I came across the same many a time. There were some personal reasons for being occupied afterwards. Then I got the job as Vice Principal through FPSC and now more than satisfied with my current job.

Well Mr. Help I think very few would have objection if they know me. I have already told you that being newbie you know me a little. For your information I am MSc Applied Psychology, MA TEFL (Teaching English as Foreign Language), Advanced Diploma in English Language and Literature from NUML and had got first position and some professional qualification relevant to educational field. I hope in the light of these you would find me able to give suggestions. Apart that some of my articles has been published in Dawn Education Pages. My English poem "Faith" is the part of English for Class 6th published by NCE. And above all my husband has appeared in CSS this time. I hope after all these I may get an impression in your mind.

Actually I am the one who believe on talent. I know it always make its way even under worst circumstances. For your satisfaction I would say there are many teachers who remained examiners for CSS but they were never Civil Servants. I mean the destiny of a CSP is determined by a Non-CSP so you cannot deny the worth of a teacher (a learned person) having no impressionistic image as per your say.

Even you should not.

Regards

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"When Allah leads you to the edge of the cliff, Trust Him Fully, only 1 of 2 things will happen either He will catch you when you fall or He will teach you how to fly"

@ Miss Naqvi,kindly check my outline..

Intro:

Women constitute almost 50% of world's popoulation
Women are participating in every field of life with men

Status of women in Islam:

Western misperception that Islam believes in oppression of women
Islam believes in equality of both men and women and the rights that Islam gave to women 1400 years back are being given to women now.
Women worked as traders and fought alongside men in wars

Status of women in Pakistan:

Male dominated society and women are treated as a property
Sold like animals in markets,not allowed to go out side of homes and their main duty is to reproduce and take care of their families
Not allowed to marry the person of their choice and in case they do,they are killed and their bodies are thrown away,
Contrary to Islamic teachings and has more to do with our tradition.

Role in development of Pakistan:

Tide is slowly in their favour now.
Participating in all fields of life alongwith men
Women are more hard working and taking distinctions in educations
Women in operational branches of armed forces
Women in Parliament,Dr.Fehmida Mirza as first women speaker of the National assembly.Their role in legislation
Women in Economic sphere,Dr.Shamshad Ahmed as first Governer of State bank


Role of Government:
Women Empowerment bill
Women Protection Bill
Benazir Income Support Program
Increased stress on female education

Conclusion:

Women are in no way inferior to men and both are working together to make Pakistan a better country.
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