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New_Candidate Saturday, March 06, 2010 02:41 PM

Essay Paper 2010
 
01. Literature is the best criticism of life.

02. Dialogue is the best course to combat terrorism.

03. Pakistan is rich in natural resources but very poor in their management.

04. The U.N.O has failed to measure up to the demands of its charter.

05. All humans are born equal in dignity and rights but htey are in shackles everywhere.

06. Why is there no status of the third gender in Pakistan?

07. Can women be equal to men in Pakistan?

08. Without independent truth-finding commission , accountability is unachievable.

09. Religion has done more harm than help to human relations in the world.

10. The world politics stands more derisive than it was ever before due to the specific imperialist designs.

New_Candidate Saturday, March 06, 2010 02:48 PM

i have attempted
[B]Pakistan is rich in natural resources but very poor in their management[/B]


My outline was :

[B]INTRODUCTION[/B]

[B]NATURAL RESOURCES OF PAKISTAN[/B]

[B]CAUSES OF POOR MANAGEMENT[/B]
1. Obsolete Technology
2. Inefficient Government
3. Lack of Accountability
4. Corruptions
5. Lack of evaluation process
6. Insufficient funds

[B]SUGGESTION[/B]

1. Utilization of international forums
2. Import modern technology
4. Effective accountability and evaluation
4. Qualitative approach should be adopt
5. Long term planning

[B]CONCLUSION[/B]


Remarks me please

umarabbas Saturday, March 06, 2010 04:55 PM

i have attempted...

Can woman be equal to men in Pakistan?

I have written on these lines:

What is equality?
How is equality achieved?

Prevalent two different views about equality of women and men
1- Islamic View
2- Western View
Differences between the both.

Women's present plight in Pakistan
Causes for these conditions
What are the Government's recent steps towards equality of gender
Conclusion

Silent.Volcano Saturday, March 06, 2010 06:42 PM

can women be equal to men in pakistan?
 
I HAVE ATTEMPTED THIS TOPIC

MY OUTLINE WAS :

[B]I. INTRODUCTION[/B]
1.what is equality?
2.women constitute 51.4 per cent of population?

[B]II. PAKISTAN AS AN ISLAMIC STATE[/B]

1. ideology based on islam

quote of quaid e azam"

" NO NATION CAN RISE TO THE HEIGHT OF GLORY UNLESS UR WOMEN ARE SIDE BY SIDE WITH YOU :

example of fatima jinnah being always together with Muhammad ali Jinnah

2. is the women equal to men in islam?

TWO-THREE ISLAMIC QUOTES

[B]III.FACTORS BEHIND INEQUALITY OF WOMEN[/B]

1.customs and traditions
2.education backwardness

[B]IV.POTENTIALS OF WOMEN TO BE EQUAL TO MEN IN PAKISTAN[/B]

1. women on educational front(examples of women toppers,women engineers etc)
2. women on political front( examples of Benazir Bhutto, Dr. Fehmida mirza,shehla raza etc)
3. women on social front( example of Asma Jehangir )
4. women on other fronts (example of first women major general,women in media) etc.

[B]V.ARE CONTEMPORARY WOMEN EQUAL TO MEN IN PAKISTAN?[/B]

[B]VII.EFFORTS OF GOVERNMENT[/B]

.PRESIDENT PERVAIZ MUSHARRAF'S EFFORTS WERE REMARKABLE

[B]VI.FUTURE OF WOMEN IN PAKISTAN[/B]

future of women is bright in pakistan regarding to their status
its reasons are:

1. Independent media
2. independent judiciary

i have quoted in the last:
constitution of pakistan includes an article which says :

[I][B]"there will be no discrimination on the basis of gender"[/B][/I]

so independent judiciary will also make efforts to give equality to women in Pakistan.

[B]VII. Conclusion[/B]

floydian Saturday, March 06, 2010 06:56 PM

[U][B]All humans are born equal in dignity and rights but htey are in shackles everywhere.[/B][/U]

22 lines per page
8 words per line
total 14 pages

That makes 2464 words in total. :D
I revised the paper and made sure that there were no grammatical mistakes. My sentences were short and to the point. I followed my outline strictly. I quoted from my political science notes and also some Quranic verses. I completed the paper 20 minutes earlier than the alloted time.

And yes, I rocked.

I thank Lord of heavens.

cheers,
floydian

Silent.Volcano Saturday, March 06, 2010 07:34 PM

i wrote 18.5 pages including my outline.

please tell me did i handle the essay in the right direction.

i will be very thankful to u for analysing my essay n predicting the range of marks i can get.

Hunain Saturday, March 06, 2010 07:54 PM

Check my Essay Please
 
This is a re-post, I posted this in the 2010 Exam section as well.

Dear fellows, AlhumduLILLAH, today's paper went well, I just have doubts about my Essay, and I would like someone to comment on it.

I chose the topic, Religion has done more harm and help human relations in the world.

I will just write the points I wrote.

Introduction
-How over the span of history, religion has been forefront for many wars and bloodshed.
-How from it's inception, it has been a cause of dissent and divergence between people.
-How, we need to exemplify the plight caused to humans by religion and analyze whether religion was the sole factor.

Beginning of Religion
-Expulsion of Adam and Eve, creation of the world, start of man kind.
-Guidance of Man kind, broadly, divine religions and man-made.
-Islam, Judaism, Christianity, Buddhism, Hinduism and Zionism.

Consequences of Religion
-Plight of Bani-Israel, Prophet Musa, stood against Pharaohs.
-Crucifixion of Jesus, although he was considered a shepherd and guide.
-Persecution of Muhammad P.B.U.H, and forced migration to Medina.
-Arab Isreal wars.
-Hindu Muslim issues in the Subcontinent.

Analysis of the above events
-Religion used as a tool and abused.
-Real motives were hegemonic and greedy.
-Cruel rulers did not like the teachings of religion and enlightenment of public.
-Hidden political agendas, religion used as a pretext.

Examples of Religious Help
-Treaties between Muslims and non-Muslims.
-Charter of Medina
-Hindu-Muslim Unity, possible in practice, but did not work due to personal revenges and agenda.
-Religion preaches peace and equality.

Non-religious Plight upon Man kind
-WWI, WWII, Jewish Holocaust by Nazi Hitler.
-Aggressions by Secular India and secular US.
-Clash of Civilizations, East vs West.
-Arms and resource race, competition to become number one.
-World domination and Colonial period did more harm to humans than religion.

Current Scenario
-Colonialism replaced by Neo-colonialism
-Political motives to exploit other nations
-Terrorism, associated with religion
-Islam under direct attack - Defense of Islam, Religion of peace etc.

-Conclusion
-All religions teach peace and not violence.
-Marked events through history, man fought before popularity of religions.
-Innate nature of man to dominate others.
-Religion used as a pretext, Instigation between sects for political agenda.
-The relations between mankind are strained due to our own problems and limitations and policies of exploitation and dominance, religion does not really have a role in it.
-Being a human, responsibility to seek out the truth and the true religion.
-If followed properly, religion will not be the cause, but a discouragement from violence and bloodshed.
-Humans need to put their act together, otherwise a WWIII may happen, and we may not be able to survive it.


These are the points I remember, but I think these were pretty much all. I am in doubt, if I handled it okay, no one in my center or friends attempted this topic, and I am quite upset, since I have been told it was a bad choice for essay, so I would appreciate honest comments, I pray I make through this, InshALLAH Ameen.

Thank you.

mangat1 Saturday, March 06, 2010 08:00 PM

I'm preparing for 2011. Although I didn't appear in 2010 but the paper seems interesting, it wasn't difficult according to me. Those who appeared this time are so lucky that they had a start with such a paper.
Best of Luck everyone !
I pray you all be blessed by ALLAH ALMIGHTY.

@ New Candidate
i think this outline is not enough. you know you got to be relevant to your outline and how can you write 2500 to 3500 with this much outline

@ Silent Volcano
Your outline is awesome. I pray may you find success. AMEEN

@ Hunain

Your outline is good. It covers a lot. You could write a lot. It shows your study and vast knowledge. Its great but I find one thing here that you have mentioned about the current scenario but not as much as you should have done because there's a lot of stuff that one can write. You might have missed a lot of current affairs regarding the essay topic as you haven't mentioned much about the current situation. This is something that I would have NEVER missed in the paper.
These are just my views.
I pray you score a lot.
AMEEN

Hunain Saturday, March 06, 2010 08:32 PM

ty bro, you are probably right, I did mention the current scenario in what ever way I could relate with the whole body, I wanted to emphasize and narrate events over the whole history, since the topic didnt state anything to imply a contemporary approach, so I covered it through what ever history I could...it was very vast, and I had to finish it as well, otherwise I would just go on writing...had to wrap it up too, so did not go much into details, just basic arguments, since it was an argumentative essay and not a factual one so to speak.

and Ameen :)

nageen Saturday, March 06, 2010 08:51 PM

I could not write 2500 words ,mine would be 1700-1800 almost. Does it affect?

[QUOTE=silent.volcano;173355]i wrote 18.5 pages including my outline.

please tell me did i handle the essay in the right direction.

i will be very thankful to u for analysing my essay n predicting the range of marks i can get.[/QUOTE]

My Outline wasn't comprehensive like yours but points were same and No. of pages too.


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