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hello all..........have joined the forum for few months now but m posting for the first time....
well i m surprised to see no one who has written on "why there is no status of third gender in pakistan", well .......i have written on this topic....n after making outlines on three other topics wasting those precious minutes..but i wanted to play smart by writing on totally a new subject.....all my friends were both amazed and surprised on the fact. my words were roughly 2400.... my outline was: .what is third gender .biological and social causes .social prejudice of society about third gender, after this i dont exactly remember the sentences i made in outline but following is what i stuffed into the essay.... . highlighted the meaning of status and correlating it to whole population of pakistan in general and third gender in specific .then, on the weak overall infrastructure of pakistan in terms of social, political, cultural, religious, national, economic and technological .whereas my supporting arguments were based on that in a country where the first and second gender is so discriminated ,then how can one hope for any status of this poor third gender, well i talked on all aspects making third gender the subject through out the esaay in terms of lack of concern from the governmnet and civil society emphasizing that third gender dont get special education, health, recreational activities, freedom to live, repect etc etc and all the status factors a normal human can think of.............. my conclusion was remedial in a sense, though blamming the govenrnment in specific for not embodying the rights of thrid gender and the civil society in genral for such a discriminating behaviour towrds the poor third gender. also i talked about that law should protect them n the government should empower them. any comments wil be welcome.........i hope i didnt blow it .....fingers crossed |
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@ Miss Naqvi
Thank you very much for your precious and invaluable contributions.Please tell me if you have ever given CSS exams? What were your results? Thanking you again. Stay blessed. Regards, Help |
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I attempted 'Can women be equal to men in Pakistan?' Main theme of my essay was that : Yes women can be equal to men.. they are already traveling towards the road to equality.. True there are some injustices to women but they are few and mostly in Sindhi and tribal areas. We can not paint the picture of whole Pakistan as a women-oppressor nation based on few unfortunate events that happen now and then.
I stated that in most civilized Western nations too, women are subject to ill-treatment but they bring to light the more brighter side of picture. Same should be done by us. I gave examples from social, economic, legal, constitutional and political points of view. Do you think I have been right in my theme? My outline and writing plus grammar is good enough. Koi tou respond karey.. I am really worried!! |
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@ Mr Sahil
Mr Sahil i strongly condemn personal attack on Miss Naqvi.If you have posted your essay on the forum for comments then you must have the courage to face criticisam.i am reproducing some of your remarks and just think does it suit to a CSS aspirant to use such a rustic language. Quote:
The way you have used abusive language for her depicts your appraoch, i am sorry to say. It is said that empty vessals make much noise.You ,to prove your claim, have wrongly claimed to have qualified css 2009 written.(There is no Mr Sahil amongst qualifiers). You say you are fan of Irshad Hussain in Dawn. Mr for your kind information there is no regular writer of this name in Dawn. One thing more i want to tell you. You know the second position holder of CSS 2008, Ms Huzefa ? She has done masters from USA but she flunked in Essay Paper in her CSS 2007 attempt. So if examiner has failed her ,should she get ofended over it? The way you have got personal and insulted her, i condemn. If you can not bear criticsam then why you have posted it for comments? Do you only wanted to hear that you are excellent? You have resorted to a fake claim of having qualified CSS 2009 just to add weight to your say. Brother with this approach you can never be a CSP. I also request the moderators to delete these abusive remarks from the post in question. Quote:
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And last but not least, i was expressing my comments on the TOpic given in the examination paper that was CAN WOMEN Be EQUAL TO MEN?.. AND i just answered no(and it is True Search Quran(3;31) which says "and surely male is not like the female"). Why you are getting so frenzy on my answer? and again if i hurt you. then me so sorry. i was just making the mood lighter. take it easy. Best of luck to you and me also sister. |
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@ Sahil
Whats you real name then? if you are a qualifier, why u r hiding your identity here and not awarded the passed candidates medal? One technical thing, if u r qualified in 2009, y u felt a need to join css forum in August 2009? Were u in a doubt about ur capabilities?
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hmm
Salam guys i wrote essay on Dialogue is the best way to combat terrorism it was my first experience to write essay of 14 pages well my english is very bad but topic seemed good so i made one page outline, used simple angrazi words, and didnt repeat firstly i roughly made outlines in last page and then i re-arranged them sequencely but i think my essay was good but Allah knows better what i wrote length i didnt count but i wrote 25 lines per gage i think and 5 to 6 words per line May Allah pass me in this essay Insha Allah i be very thank full |
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any senior please reply
how is to write essay on "The U.N.O has failed to measure up to the demands of its charter", providing all facts and figures? is this a marks gaining topic? what should be the length of such type of essay?
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@ Sahil
I do not believe in saying much when all has been said in rules. I just do when the time is right. So watch your words in future and learn to respect the members here. Else, you know what this will be followed by.
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I hope I am successful in my effort.
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