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hello all..........have joined the forum for few months now but m posting for the first time....
well i m surprised to see no one who has written on "why there is no status of third gender in pakistan", well .......i have written on this topic....n after making outlines on three other topics wasting those precious minutes..but i wanted to play smart by writing on totally a new subject.....all my friends were both amazed and surprised on the fact. my words were roughly 2400.... my outline was:

.what is third gender

.biological and social causes

.social prejudice of society about third gender, after this i dont exactly remember the sentences i made in outline but following is what i stuffed into the essay....
. highlighted the meaning of status and correlating it to whole population of pakistan in general and third gender in specific

.then, on the weak overall infrastructure of pakistan in terms of social, political, cultural, religious, national, economic and technological

.whereas my supporting arguments were based on that in a country where the first and second gender is so discriminated ,then how can one hope for any status of this poor third gender,
well i talked on all aspects making third gender the subject through out the esaay in terms of lack of concern from the governmnet and civil society emphasizing that third gender dont get special education, health, recreational activities, freedom to live, repect etc etc and all the status factors a normal human can think of.............. my conclusion was remedial in a sense, though blamming the govenrnment in specific for not embodying the rights of thrid gender and the civil society in genral for such a discriminating behaviour towrds the poor third gender. also i talked about that law should protect them n the government should empower them.


any comments wil be welcome.........i hope i didnt blow it .....fingers crossed
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@ Miss Naqvi

Thank you very much for your precious and invaluable contributions.Please tell me if you have ever given CSS exams? What were your results?

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I attempted 'Can women be equal to men in Pakistan?' Main theme of my essay was that : Yes women can be equal to men.. they are already traveling towards the road to equality.. True there are some injustices to women but they are few and mostly in Sindhi and tribal areas. We can not paint the picture of whole Pakistan as a women-oppressor nation based on few unfortunate events that happen now and then.

I stated that in most civilized Western nations too, women are subject to ill-treatment but they bring to light the more brighter side of picture. Same should be done by us.

I gave examples from social, economic, legal, constitutional and political points of view. Do you think I have been right in my theme? My outline and writing plus grammar is good enough.

Koi tou respond karey.. I am really worried!!
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Mr Sahil i strongly condemn personal attack on Miss Naqvi.If you have posted your essay on the forum for comments then you must have the courage to face criticisam.i am reproducing some of your remarks and just think does it suit to a CSS aspirant to use such a rustic language.

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i do not know if you have cleared the CSS exam or not, and even if you did, it was a matter of luck.
Again work on your English. i hope you will do better next time.
have given the example of a SHOPKEEPER because i know the mental acumen of yours
Ms Naqvi is higly respectable member of the forum and her contribution to the forum is laudble(It has been acknowledged by forum mangement by awrding her meddal).She has guided many aspirants in her precis thread ,just go through it once to realise her calibre.This thread has been given the status of sticky and some of the qualifiers have benifitted from it by taking her comments on their precis.

The way you have used abusive language for her depicts your appraoch, i am sorry to say.

It is said that empty vessals make much noise.You ,to prove your claim, have wrongly claimed to have qualified css 2009 written.(There is no Mr Sahil amongst qualifiers).

You say you are fan of Irshad Hussain in Dawn. Mr for your kind information there is no regular writer of this name in Dawn.

One thing more i want to tell you. You know the second position holder of CSS 2008, Ms Huzefa ? She has done masters from USA but she flunked in Essay Paper in her CSS 2007 attempt. So if examiner has failed her ,should she get ofended over it?

The way you have got personal and insulted her, i condemn. If you can not bear criticsam then why you have posted it for comments? Do you only wanted to hear that you are excellent?

You have resorted to a fake claim of having qualified CSS 2009 just to add weight to your say. Brother with this approach you can never be a CSP.

I also request the moderators to delete these abusive remarks from the post in question.

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And i do not blame you women have brains that are 5 ounce less in weight than men.again Natural Intelligence
You have a sick metality,i wont say any thing els.You does not deserve to be a member of this forum.You can do just fake claim of having qualified CSS 2009 (if you are true person you should have given your name).Now i shall request mangement to ban you from the forum.
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You have a sick metality,i wont say any thing els.You does not deserve to be a member of this forum.You can do just fake claim of having qualified CSS 2009 (if you are true person you should have given your name).Now i shall request mangement to ban you from the forum.
Wawoo, that smells jealous. again honorable SALEEQA {I hope you do have "saleeqa "in your diurnal life } i was just alluding to the scientific fact that womens do have brains that are 5 ounce less than that of men. search net for that.they also have 10000 less red blood corpuscles(RBCs) {I hope you are conversant with the term} again check net for that.

And last but not least, i was expressing my comments on the TOpic given in the examination paper that was CAN WOMEN Be EQUAL TO MEN?.. AND i just answered no(and it is True Search Quran(3;31) which says "and surely male is not like the female"). Why you are getting so frenzy on my answer?

and again if i hurt you. then me so sorry. i was just making the mood lighter. take it easy.
Best of luck to you and me also sister.
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@ Sahil

Whats you real name then? if you are a qualifier, why u r hiding your identity here and not awarded the passed candidates medal?

One technical thing, if u r qualified in 2009, y u felt a need to join css forum in August 2009? Were u in a doubt about ur capabilities?
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Salam guys
i wrote essay on Dialogue is the best way to combat terrorism
it was my first experience to write essay of 14 pages
well my english is very bad but topic seemed good so i made one page outline, used simple angrazi words, and didnt repeat
firstly i roughly made outlines in last page and then i re-arranged them sequencely
but i think my essay was good but Allah knows better what i wrote
length i didnt count but i wrote 25 lines per gage i think and 5 to 6 words per line
May Allah pass me in this essay Insha Allah i be very thank full
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how is to write essay on "The U.N.O has failed to measure up to the demands of its charter", providing all facts and figures? is this a marks gaining topic? what should be the length of such type of essay?

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I do not believe in saying much when all has been said in rules. I just do when the time is right. So watch your words in future and learn to respect the members here. Else, you know what this will be followed by.
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Frankly speaking I didn't take your comments as humiliating but these are not constructive too.
Thank You so much for tolerance. Let me clarify what I wanted to convey.

Excerpt from my post

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Do you really think that he has written well by discussing current submits?
I think I couldnt make it clear, as I had replied you just after Sahil so here I had commented without description. If you will go through the outline that I have suggested in my previous post you will find same points here I am reproducing it.

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In my perception essay should have following distribution.
  • Importance of Dialogue (In text and by the help of examples mean one can justify the topic by adding relevant examples as Sahil has said in two of his headlines "Dialogue with Iran" & "Dialogue with Afghanistan") 20%
  • How terrorism is dealt during last few years. (Some touches of War on Terror and its failure) 10%
  • Significance of dialogue in current circumstances. (As I have mentioned in my previous post). 20%
  • Why dialogue is best way to combat terrorism. (As discussed by Saleeqa) 40%
  • How dialogue should proceed to get its best. (Need suggestions to make dialogue a success to deal corruption) 10%
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Madam I don't see any harm in quoting live examples of the contemporary world for proving one's point.
Even I dont see any harm in quoting live examples of the contemporary world for adding logic to your opinion. But the word Current Submit leaves bad impression. When I say "Current Submits has nothing to do with the terrorism" I mean to indicate misuse of vocabulary that in no case can be associated to the terrorism and same is the case with 1st subheading "London Submit". If a candidated is not clear about the difference of submit and Summit then we are responsible to indicate that mistake. So my purpose was to indicate the flaws that should be avoided in future.

I hope I am successful in my effort.
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