Excellent. Anyone with excellent communication skills could solve this....Bravo Bravo

5 and 9 are the simple essays
i wish i would have appeared in this exams

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Hello All

I hope all of u are doing well with your papers.Wish you all good luck .
Well, essay paper is never easy so I wouldn't take it easy.... This time again simple topics have been wrapped in difficult words but the core is the same,as someone has already mentioned afore,womens rights,media etc....Not that difficult ,ahh ???

I guess most of the people have attempted the essay" What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state" .Being a topic of current affair it is relatively easy to attempt ,I suppose.Some strong points, members have elaborated here,should easily secure the position of a candidate.But then it all depends on the whim of the examiner-don't forget the caprice of LUCK here as well.

Those who have clearly elaborated their arguments ,irrespective of the length of words, should feel safe here.Quality matter the most than quantity ,as they say,is true in this case.Even a short ,say about 1200 to 1500 carefully worded
essay, is enough to pass the paper-not a rhetoric but personal experience.So evaporate any such fears But the vice versa is never safe even if length is 4000 or so.

I hope all of you have tried your best-as it is expected, therefore,fell satisfied.Now hope for the best and ready for the worst.
In the end I would say:

Shikast-o-Fateh Naseebun say hey walay a Mir
Muqabla to dil-e-Natawan nay khoob kya.

Best Wishes to all

regards

Oriental

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The reply for the guys who are wooing about the essay num 2nd.↲Clear the syntactic structure. ↲↲↲↲↲↲1st....the skills↲↲2nd. The impossible life..↲Modern world.↲Requisite of modern world.↲Communication skills of modern world and life n have its comparison with past.↲I only mentioned first two parts of essay.my essay was of 8 to 9 segments.↲it seems hectic for me to post regular.↲↲So those who written only about communication or skills are wrong.1 shud jolt the imptnc of skills and communication as well

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am i9 like the only one who went for topic 3
the time we live in is the winter of the world.
it went well. i wrote some 1800 words. but it was good. or atleast i think so.

TheRepeater...

your essay looks similar to mine essay. but i didn't put angelina jolie wali example... It was a really easy essay.I mean its strange that it was the only topic which i had skipped but one night before exam one of my bro asked me whether i had prepared disaster or flood related essay or not which i didn't...so i immediately prepared the essay outline.luckily there were old newspapers of july n august in the store plus cssforum as well.

there was no such essay in my essay books plus i was emphasizing on terror n women issues..

So it was my good luck that i just saved myself from total ruin in essay.

mostly people around me in hall did essay on women and some guys did the disaster essay.but mostly people which i met were not content with their essay.they said it was difficult.

Thanks Gulrukh for your response, Its good someone responded to TheRepeater. I was about to as she has done an excellent attempt on this essay. I mean the outline she has written is just awsome, she will extract 40 for just the outline. Could you share your outline if you have please?

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Can someone help me in the essay on the topic politics in Pakistan...HURRY.....i want some outlines regarding topic politics in pakistan... Could you plz help me

Posting it again, Need your suggestions?????

Outline:

Introduction
-Disasters
-Disaster management
-Govt's objective to provide secuirty to its citizens
-Pakistan's location vulnerable to natural disasters

Types of Disaster

Natural disasters
-Floods
-Earthquakes
-Cyclones, storms etc

Human origin disaster
-Fire
-structural collapses

Constituents/Components of disaster management system
-Human component
-Tangible component( equipment/machinery)
-Coordination/information systems

Stages of disaster management
-Prevention(before)
-Mitigation(during)
-Rehabilitation( after)

Recent major disaster in Pakistan and their handling by our government
-Earth quake
-Floods
-Fires in major cities
-handling of IDP's due to terrosism and military operation

Analysis of the over all disaster management abilities of our government machinery till date, proving them as inefficient in this area.

Recommendation
-Strong, envisioned, and empowered disaster management authority
-Disaster management to be allocated sufficient budget
-Development of a national policy
-Development of water reservoirs to
-development of building structures on modern lines to cope with earthquakes
-Replacement of obsolete machinery with authorities involved in it
-Utilization of emergency information systems
-Deployment of disaster management force upto distrcit level
-Training of the whole nation to better carry out relief activities.

Conclusion



I had my outline on 2.5 pages, and my essay was on next 22 pages. But i right in a larger font. On average i write about 110-115 words per page, so my essay without the outline would be approximately 2200-2400 words.

In 2010, i had written about the same and i scored 45 marks in essay.

I have not used much of figures in my essay. One can never be sure about essay, but i am very hopeful. Please pray for my success. Essay ho jai, InshAllah the rest i will get through in.

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I attempted question three. the time we live in is the winter of the world. I wrote about the brutalities and death. I think it is not the global warming because in the past 10 years the over all temperature has risen thus it cannot be about global warming do comment please. Further more i did give a hint of global warming in the paper, since it too is one of the irregularaties that are happening in the world