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Hey All,
I attempted the topic of " Disaster management and government preparedness" Outline: Introduction -Disasters -Disaster management -Govt's objective to provide secuirty to its citizens -Pakistan's location vulnerable to natural disasters Types of Disaster Natural disasters -Floods -Earthquakes -Cyclones, storms etc Human origin disaster -Fire -structural collapses Constituents/Components of disaster management system -Human component -Tangible component( equipment/machinery) -Coordination/information systems Stages of disaster management -Prevention(before) -Mitigation(during) -Rehabilitation( after) Recent major disaster in Pakistan and their handling by our government -Earth quake -Floods -Fires in major cities -handling of IDP's due to terrosism and military operation Analysis of the over all disaster management abilities of our government machinery till date, proving them as inefficient in this area. Recommendation -Strong, envisioned, and empowered disaster management authority -Disaster management to be allocated sufficient budget -Development of a national policy -Development of water reservoirs to -development of building structures on modern lines to cope with earthquakes -Replacement of obsolete machinery with authorities involved in it -Utilization of emergency information systems -Deployment of disaster management force upto distrcit level -Training of the whole nation to better carry out relief activities. Conclusion I had my outline on 2.5 pages, and my essay was on next 22 pages. But i right in a larger font. On average i write about 110-115 words per page, so my essay without the outline would be approximately 2200-2400 words. In 2010, i had written about the same and i scored 45 marks in essay. I have not used much of figures in my essay. One can never be sure about essay, but i am very hopeful. Please pray for my success. Essay ho jai, InshAllah the rest i will get through in. |
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by same in 2010 i mean same length for the essay.
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Dear friends,
I need your opinion and the experience of the seniors. I have a question, I wrote a good essay with a detailed outline. The only problem is that i forgot to write the question number and the title of the essay. Is this mistake going to prove costly please comment. Although the outline and the essay clearly depict what the topic was. It was "the time we live in is the winter of the world". Please do comment |
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@ kanwal
communication skills will u refer i did not quoteit full its quarter part . define kinds i thinkk communication skiils created automobiles industries and computers, E language is also a communication Stress is on possible or impossible, You should address in yes or no is it possible or not with facts. Skills need ...Mean knowledge of skills. So its not about knowledge but knowledge of communication role
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the things you described are different modes/techniques etc of communications. the essay was not about that (as far as i understand it, if it read communication skills)
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i attempted .."pleasures of reading"....
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aesthetic appearance? :P
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Sumia kindly share your outline.I also wanted to attempt it but couldn't.
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please someone comment over my essay's outline. I am anxious to know whether I attempted it rightly or not.
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