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Hey All,

I attempted the topic of " Disaster management and government preparedness"

Outline:

Introduction
-Disasters
-Disaster management
-Govt's objective to provide secuirty to its citizens
-Pakistan's location vulnerable to natural disasters

Types of Disaster

Natural disasters
-Floods
-Earthquakes
-Cyclones, storms etc

Human origin disaster
-Fire
-structural collapses

Constituents/Components of disaster management system
-Human component
-Tangible component( equipment/machinery)
-Coordination/information systems

Stages of disaster management
-Prevention(before)
-Mitigation(during)
-Rehabilitation( after)

Recent major disaster in Pakistan and their handling by our government
-Earth quake
-Floods
-Fires in major cities
-handling of IDP's due to terrosism and military operation

Analysis of the over all disaster management abilities of our government machinery till date, proving them as inefficient in this area.

Recommendation
-Strong, envisioned, and empowered disaster management authority
-Disaster management to be allocated sufficient budget
-Development of a national policy
-Development of water reservoirs to
-development of building structures on modern lines to cope with earthquakes
-Replacement of obsolete machinery with authorities involved in it
-Utilization of emergency information systems
-Deployment of disaster management force upto distrcit level
-Training of the whole nation to better carry out relief activities.

Conclusion



I had my outline on 2.5 pages, and my essay was on next 22 pages. But i right in a larger font. On average i write about 110-115 words per page, so my essay without the outline would be approximately 2200-2400 words.

In 2010, i had written about the same and i scored 45 marks in essay.

I have not used much of figures in my essay. One can never be sure about essay, but i am very hopeful. Please pray for my success. Essay ho jai, InshAllah the rest i will get through in.
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by same in 2010 i mean same length for the essay.
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Dear friends,
I need your opinion and the experience of the seniors. I have a question, I wrote a good essay with a detailed outline. The only problem is that i forgot to write the question number and the title of the essay. Is this mistake going to prove costly please comment. Although the outline and the essay clearly depict what the topic was. It was "the time we live in is the winter of the world". Please do comment
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@ kanwal
communication skills will u refer


i did not quoteit full its quarter part .
define kinds

i thinkk communication skiils created automobiles industries and computers, E language is also a communication
Stress is on possible or impossible,
You should address in yes or no is it possible or not with facts.
Skills need ...Mean knowledge of skills. So its not about knowledge but knowledge of communication role
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@ kanwal
communication skills will u refer


i did not quoteit full its quarter part .
define kinds

i thinkk communication skiils created automobiles industries and computers, E language is also a communication
Stress is on possible or impossible,
You should address in yes or no is it possible or not with facts.
Skills need ...Mean knowledge of skills. So its not about knowledge but knowledge of communication role
you got it all wrong. communication skills refer to the way you talk, present your words, organize your words, mode of communication, the tone you have, the confidence you have etc etc.

the things you described are different modes/techniques etc of communications. the essay was not about that (as far as i understand it, if it read communication skills)
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i attempted .."pleasures of reading"....
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aesthetic appearance? :P
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i attempted .."pleasures of reading"....
Sumia kindly share your outline.I also wanted to attempt it but couldn't.
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Would appreciate comments and critique on my outline!!

I wrote 2200 words on

What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?

My Outline was

INTRODUCTION
Hallmarks of our dependence
What are truly independent states

HISTORICAL PERSPECTIVE
Alignment towards one superpower
1950s
1960s-1980s
1990s
Post 9/11

External Interferences
Dismemberment of East Pakistan 1971

Nuclear Explosions 1998

MAIN CAUSES
Lack of National Integration
Failure of Democracy
Poor Economic Growth
Lack of Education & Health care
Dependence on foreign aid

REMEDIAL MEASURES
Economic Turnaround
National Integration
Provision of Social services
Democracy must be allowed to flourish

CONCLUSION

Outline was on 1.5 pages and essay on 11 pages
let me congratulate you. you are through in this paper atleast inshallah (if no grammatical/spelling mistakes are there). one of the few essay caring to give an introduction to the topic (which ofcourse is very very important). Work hard on other papers especially EDS which is very scoring.
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please someone comment over my essay's outline. I am anxious to know whether I attempted it rightly or not.
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