mani aesthetic importance hehehe

decent outline. will fetch you decent score inshallah provided there are no grammatical and spelling mistakes. you would have done awesome if disaster management was defined right in the first para. no issues however. best of luck with the coming papers!


@all others! i am amazed to find people asking about "how many pages? or kitnay pages likhay" or "what was your score last time?"

in an essay paper all these things are irrelevant. quality not quantity helps the boat sail to success in CSS Exams these days (just like smart work and not hard work counts nowadays)

@Umar kindly comment on my essay;
http://www.cssforum.com.pk/css-past-...-2011-a-4.html

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Love is my Shield,Truth is my Sword,Brain is my Crown,Smile is my Treasure and I'm a Queen;
Quitters never win and Winners never quit..!!!

i have already forgotten half of it ...but i must tell you i wrote 15 pages...could write a lot more if had time....wrote about different genres....n how was it all so pleasurable...wrote about instinct of curiosity, imagination and culture of mind.linked pleasure with all i discussed....or yad nae he...!hope i do well...intro,conclusion be diya tha

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Hmm I wish I could do the same
A student of literature and skipped something over which I had command.I'm amazed my brain didn't work properly for this topic and I failed even in making an outline.
Best of luck dear.I hope you will rock Insha Allah

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Love is my Shield,Truth is my Sword,Brain is my Crown,Smile is my Treasure and I'm a Queen;
Quitters never win and Winners never quit..!!!

I expressed my views on

What are the hurdles in our way to becoming a truly independent state?

I had the same outline drawn as mani had done but a added a little in the historical perspective then the post partition scenerio.

I did it in 18 pages

But my part B was much more better then The A

Pray for us!

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after the observations quoted above lets come to the core issue. Number 1, Quantity does not matter. 2010 i had 12 pages. not a big deal. the checker looks at the stuff you have penned down. give it enchanting to me and i assure you good marks.

anyways. i am just confused about the pre-partition factor in your essay! it was about pakistani media. since in an essay, the limit is your imaginations skills it may work here. but then you need to define it somewhere for that one uses a prologue. a sort of an appetizer before the main course

the rest of the essay was good :P except ofcourse the remedies. they are not practical solutions but ideal imaginations i hope you understand. you should have defined it practically. for example: governments initiatives, peoples responses etc. what the governments need to do? how the people should respond to corrupt/biased/new monger media.

anyways a decent attempt! best of luck for the up-coming papers

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I Know I am Bad But When Bad is the Best, Bad is the Only Choice

Guys what about my outline?

I)INTRODUCTION

II)WHAT IS COMMUNICATION

III)WHAT ARE COMMUNICATION SKILLS


i) Verbal Communication Skills
ii) Written Communication Skills

IV)GOOD COMMUNICATION SKILLS ARE ESSENTIALLY EFFECTIVE



[V) ROLE OF GOOD COMMUNICATION SKILLS IN SOCIAL INTERACTIONS

i) Religion
ii) Family
iii) Education
iv) Business and Workplace
v) Order Institutions

VI) MODERN POLITICS AND EFFECTIVE COMMUNICATION SKILLS


i) Election Speeches
ii)Government Representatives
iii) Press Conferences


VII) ROLE OF COMMUNICATION SKILLS AND MEDIA

i) Entertainment Industry
ii)Information Industry
iii) Can the good do evil?


VIII) FUTURE PROSPECTIVE

IX) CONCLUSION

I did around 19 pages! Wacko!

awesome attempt. ofcourse grammatical and spelling mistakes are a big no. however behna where did the "Today's world" go? Remember the essay had two foundations. today's world and communication skills. however, it was an attempt that will see you through inshallah. for other subjective answers always answer all the aspects of a question btw inshallah you are through in this paper! because you happened to describe all the roles it has in this Todays World without invoking its introduction

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Umar Abbas Babar
I Know I am Bad But When Bad is the Best, Bad is the Only Choice

Thankyou Umer for encouraging remarks.About pre-partition,I weaved it in a symmetry.I guess it would not seem irrelevant
I got your 2nd point.Yes it was a mistake on my behalf because I didn't practice a single essay and didn't read Dawn or columns to improve my analytical approach.
Insha Allah next year I will show some wisdom while attempting an essay.

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Love is my Shield,Truth is my Sword,Brain is my Crown,Smile is my Treasure and I'm a Queen;
Quitters never win and Winners never quit..!!!

Thank u. Today's world k part he to hain yeh saray. In fact I first drew a picture of modern world and that was a point in outline and oops i missed mentioning it here!!!! lol after drawing a picture of modern world, I took every faction one by one and proved that life cant move without effective communication skills