my attempt.
Gender Equality is a myth.

outline.
1. introduction
what is gender equality.
myth or a reality.
thesis statement
2. Emergence of gender equality.
industrial revoution
world war-I and II
Lack of men workers in Industries
women as workers in European Industries
3. Islam and Gender Equality
status of men and women in Islam
difference between belief and reality.
4. Gender equlity in Western Culture
men's world
women as a source of entertainment.
belief and practice.
5. causes of gender inquality.
6. impacts of Gender inquality.
7.conclusion

Comprehensive , but don't you think that your whole outline revolves around Pakistani perspective . It addresses the topic " gender equality a myth in Pakistan " ? I'm of the opinion and I can be wrong too that essay demanded a global touch too . Few examples from the global perspective would have made it more attractive . Waiting to listen your views , dear ,

best of luck for results frnds....
guys what do u think how much words are sufficient for 80% or above score in essay paper...???
and please tell me how marks divided... mean how much for outline,body and conclusion ...???

Nice "question"
FPSC asks 2500 to 3500 words for 100 marks, so one should try to write at-least 1800 words to elaborate the topic. Yet there is no defined criteria for marking though it is asked by FPSC: "Make sure you use different forms of discourse e.g. exposition, argumentation, description and narration. Credit will be given for organization, relevance and clarity".
There is no division of marks between outlines and essay. It depends upon examiner how he handles the paper some may be fascinated by outlines other may lay emphasis on arguments, all what we can do is to give our best in both areas.

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At first glance it might appears that it was written in Pakistani perspective but while elaborating those points I took every care to generalized the concept.

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EDUCATION: ITS MEANING AND PURPOSE

*What is Education?
- Education is not merely going to educational institutes - that is formal education.
- Besides that, education is man's interaction with Nature - learning process; acquiring knowledge.

*Man is an intelligent being.
-Man's interaction with Nature and the formation of societies and theories.

*Man is a selfish animal.
-Wars and bloodshed.

*Purpose of education
- Formation of self-identity and personal truth.
- Formation of the national truth.

*What is truth?
- Truth from a socio-cultural perspective as enunciated by Hegel and Marx.
- Truth is relative to the nation-states --> National interest.
- Personal truth --> beliefs, attitudes.

*A Note on how truth has been formed by Kingdoms, Empires and now the nation-states; Education as a tool, along with the media, for forming their respective truths in order to survive in the world order.

*A Note on formal education.

*Conclusion
- True education begins at home.
- Importance of education.
- Education must inculcate critical thinking.

dosto i have given outline more or less as salemani given . my main focus was on politics rather economy . outline took 2 and half pages like first half page and other two . intro and conclusion was comparatively eye catchy . some1 told me not to mention quotation in the essay otherwise i remember many quotes regarding politics by nelson mandela .
pray for me dosto

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i attempted the same essay with the following outline......seniors need to give their precious remarks...
1. Introduction
2. Deprivation of women of their rights
a. Ancient Civilization
b. Hinduism
c. Christianity
d. ISlam
3. Women's treatment in developed countries
4. Condition of women in Pakistan
a. Control of feudal lords
b. Tribal System
c. Women suppressing laws
d. Economic problems
e. Agricultural issues
f. Forced labour
g. Inheritance problems
h. Social problems
i. Inhumane customs
j. Illiteracy among women
k. Low health facilities
l. Rape attacks
m. Acid attacks
n. dowry abuse
5. Impact of women's depression on society
a. Schizophrenia and suicide attempts
b. Results in low literacy rate
c. Feminist movements
d. Beggary
e. Eloping results in prostitution
6. Role of govt of Pakistan
a. Huddod Ordinance 2006
b. Women empowerment act 2007
c. Protection against harrasment of women act 2010
d. 10 % quota for women in civil services
e. women police stations
f. abolishment of jirga system 2004
g. BISP and KAshf foundation
h. Darul Aman
i. SAF
j. Blue Veins
k. Pakistan federation of business and professional women for technical education
l. APWA
m. Induction of women in defence forces
7. Solution to the problem
a. Suitable legislation
b. Perfect educational infrastructure
c. Provision of better health facilities
d. Media
e. Development of backward areas
f. Role of NGO's and Ulemma
8. Conclusion

did u give any touc to the status of women in pakistan??????????m a bit worried coz i have included the condition of women in pakistan in my essay

did u give any touch to the status of women in pakistan coz i have included the condition of women in pak in my essay hope it wudnt have any negative impact on my essay?????????