Did anyone attempt "If the gold rust what shall iron do?"


Kindly, upload the outline.

is it compulsory to make outlines or u can start directly ?

It is not compulsory but it is really important.Examiner gets an idea about the flow and coherence of your essay and it becomes pretty easy for a person to compose 2000 to 2500 words. so make outline..!!

Can anybody elaborate on the topic of the traditional male role changed in the past 20 years... nobody seems to have attempted it....
What should be the outline and how to elaborate?

1.Intoduction
2.Politics is key to success
3.factors that weak politics
a.illitracy
b.poverty
4.factors that stengthen politics
a.education
b.trancparent electorial system
c.media
5.politics in Pakistan
6.political system in developed countries
7.political system in developed counteries
8.economy depends on stable political system
9.Conclusion

Yes I attempted that

1. Introduction (Summary of whole essay in one paragraph)
2. Gender Equality in other civilizations( gave the references of Code of Manu, Greek Law, Roman Law and English Law i.e. Married Women Act 1872)
3. Islam and gender equality( gave examples)
4. Causes of gender in equality in Pakistan(gave five causes, one in each paragraph)
a. Misinterpretation of Religion
b. Feudalism
c. Lack of education
d.
e.
5. Impacts(one in each paragraph)
a. Poor Economy
b. Tarnished Country Image
c. Violation of Human Rights
6. Governmental Steps
a. Women Protection Bill 2006
b. Women Bill 2012
c. Females on Important positions
d.
e.
7. Remedies(gave five)
a. Propagate true message of Islam
b. Discourage feudalism
c.
d.
e.
8. Conclusion (My conclusion started like this: Ideally speaking, gender equality has failed to takes its place as reality. However, it can be converted into a reality by following these steps. Then I emphasized on the important remedies. Moreover, I gave a wonderful quote of THE QUIDE quotes on role of women in advancement of the country.)
In last paragraphs I made few cuttings and had to cut first line of conclusion and rewrite it. Kindly comment candidly.

Outline

Introduction
What is free speech
positive use
negative use
moral and ethical values violated
privacy is affected
limitations
conclusion



Please evaluate my outline, i attempted this topic in essay paper.
Regards

That can well be another approach towards topic. In fact separate institutes for Girls in education itself is a broad braces to fill in. My interpretation to the topic would have been the difference of expertise of males and females in respective fields. There purely are some fields that men can not go in and some clearly banned for women. Co-education up to some extent works, but then field for specialization should also be given due attention. Some radical approach towards different fields; as you mentioned for girls, is also needed. So thoughts are to be induced in individuals to think against the flow.
Ahhhh! there can be many interpretations of this topic, picking the best ones is on FCPS

__________________
Man proposes God disposes

you are right...
its not purely based on co-education...it is based on specific fields for men and women....
it can be treated as gender discrimination....

it is blend of co-education.....gender discrimination... area of expertise....