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NASR KHAN · #91 Sunday, February 24, 2013

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Originally Posted by Rauf Tariq

Essay paper 2013

1. There should be colleges and schools just for men/boys and some just for women/girls.

2. Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself.

3. The traditional male role changed in the last 20 years.

4. Gender equality is a myth.

5. Meaning and purpose of education.

6. If gold rust what shall the iron do.

7. Country life is better than city life.

8. Free speech should have limitations.

9. Not economy but politics is a key to success.

10. Modern day communication via social networks puts an end of true and sincere relationships.

easy paper, best of luck to all

Sarmad Ehsan · #92 Sunday, February 24, 2013

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Originally Posted by saeeds

dear sir
Plz share ur outline

Brother, I haven't put much emphasis on this outline saga, i attempted essay first and jotted down the outline about 5 mints before the time was finished. Please find below mentioned some of the points though there were around 12 points in my outline.

Interface
Economic Plight of Pakistan
Political Imbroglio
At the Alter of IMF
Tax evasion
Foreign Aid or AIDS
Corruption: Perception or Reality
Plagues on Pakistan's onus
The way forward
Conclusion

Nazi Orakzai · #93 Monday, February 25, 2013

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Originally Posted by Rauf Tariq

Essay paper 2013

1. There should be colleges and schools just for men/boys and some just for women/girls.

2. Let me take care of today, tomorrow shall take care of itself.

3. The traditional male role changed in the last 20 years.

4. Gender equality is a myth.

5. Meaning and purpose of education.

6. If gold rust what shall the iron do.

7. Country life is better than city life.

8. Free speech should have limitations.

9. Not economy but politics is a key to success.

10. Modern day communication via social networks puts an end of true and sincere relationships.

mY Guess Paper CE-2013
1. Dilemma of the water and energy crisis in Pakistan.
2. Can women freedom be ensured in Pakistan?( Gender equality is a myth.)
3. Corruption- our national dilemma
4. Is Global warming a real threat?
5. The U.N.O has failed to measure up to the demands of its charter.
6. Globalization and electronic media
7. How to strengthen democracy in Pakistan?
8. Power of Media in the Modern World.
9. Social, economic and Political challenges confronting Pakistan.
10. "Education has for its object the formation of character".
( Meaning and purpose of education.)

zuhaib ahmed · #94 Monday, February 25, 2013

Finally, a novel pattern has been adopted which asks one's natural composition and expressions and this is the thing which most of aspirants lack _ originality.

Essay writing is an art; those know who have practised it. Undoubtedly, this paper would have given tough time to traditional crammers.

This was the paper all about, "Be yourself." And, this is not the work of machines. In simple words: Cramming robots cannot achieve originality.

Essay writing is all about one's argumentation, presentation and expressions. The more good English expressions and argumentation one has, the more are chances to score high.

Essay is just like making a delicious dish. One needs to add necessary ingredients at exact place, right time and in proper amount. Having smelled, an intelligent cook can easily tell how the dish is. So does the Essay checker. Having read outline and introduction, he comes to know how one’s essay is.

I hope, you all would have made a delicious dish and I pray for you all!

Suggestion to new aspirants:

Learn the art of essay writing, cramming notes won't help you.

Regards,

asmakarim · #95 Tuesday, February 26, 2013

tricky paper.seniors have guided in their comments.thanks to all

Nazi Orakzai · #96 Tuesday, February 26, 2013

i wonder why candidates are confused about this paper. was there something new? essays were quite simple. for instance, gender equality is a myth. This was a simple essay on degraded status of women (with reference to Pakistan). Candidates should keep in mind that essays like "meaning nd purpose of education" , the examiner simply means "meaning and purpose of education in Pakistan". And, there is no constitution or specific purpose of education. one can right anything. Purpose of education i.e., socialization, social mobility, skills for exploitation of new resources,discipline, peace and love etc.

musmanhussain · #97 Tuesday, February 26, 2013

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Originally Posted by Amna Haq

Introduction
What is Gender Equality?
Gender Equality in Pakistan over the years
- Gender Equality in economic sphere
- Gender Equality in Social life
- Gender Equality in political affairs
- Gender Equality Religious role
Current Situation
- Decision maker
- Sharing in GDP
- Active role in Judiciary
- Participation in extracurricular activities
- Know how about fundamental rights
Effects of Gender Equality in Pakistan
- Economic Independent
- Decision maker
- Self-confidence
- Active participation in progress
- Part of main stream
- Socio-Economic uplift
Barriers on the way of Gender Equality
- Political mind set & feudalism
- Patriarchal society
- Poor Law & order situation
- Discrimination at work place
- Mobility issues & insurgency
- Discriminatory customs & norms
- Women illiteracy
- Orthodox Ullema
- Propaganda of media
Proposals to uplift Gender Equality on Pakistan
- Changing mindset of people
- Education for all
- Rule of law
- Eradication discriminating customs & law
- Equality at work place
- Distant learning and vocational training
- Separate schools
- Abolishing feudalism
- Awareness campaign
Conclusion

ap na es dafa exam diya hai kiya?

umarabbas · #98 Tuesday, February 26, 2013

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Originally Posted by anum2011

I wrote on gender equality is a myth...I supported it stating yes it is a myth.Not directly mentioning it but it is all over my paper

Over time gender issues have been used to turn one sex against the another.
Whether it is presenting the idea of Feminism or male dominance all stream from the issue of gender equality...It is not a matter of whether men or women are equal or not coz both are different in every way hence can't be compared...

I wrote in context of Islam,worldwide perception and through the misuse and propogation of this topic is being used in order to divide the human population and to lead them astray from other important issues like terrorism or poverty.I quoted Gandhi, Confucius etc and a few books...I feel that I attempted the paper as best as I could.

Now all depended on my luck..I could encounter the following problems when my paper is checked...
-examiner won't agree to my point of you..
-May think I am doing women bashing coz there is no name so she/he would think it's a guy criticizing women
-Also instead of quoting direct references I have used ideas to prove the validity of my POV..like using the idea of poverty...the examiner might think I have lead astray
-Lastly there may be a lot of references coz I read a lot I have quoted books and authors...he/she might think it is all rote learning.

well i attempted the same topic but perhaps in a different fashion and like you, i am having my fingers crossed:

Gender Equality Myth?
-Introduction
-What is sex?
-what is gender?
-defining equality
-calculating gender equality?
-dfferent ideologies about Equality (Islamic, Western)
-A cursory view of Gender Equality situation throughout the world
-Highlighted areas of where Gender Equality issues are there
-Reasons (patriarchical society, limited funds, high illetracy etc)
-Future Propects in terms of international scenario.
-Conclusion.

"My conclusion is Gender equality is not a myth. Sexual equality is a myth"

mechrose37 · #99 Tuesday, February 26, 2013

I attempted country life is better than city life.Here is my outline.

Introduction.

A brief history of man's journey from country life to city life.

Pleasures of Country Life

1.Enjoyment of Natural Beauty.
2.Deep Social Interaction.
3.Pure Diet
4.Healthy way of Life
5.Peace of Mind.

Ills of City Life

1.Population Explosion
2.Social Isolation.
3.Pollution
4.Frustration and Anxiety

Comparison of City and Country Life

Conclusion

Kindly comment.I wrote 20 pages,

Seemab · #**100** Tuesday, February 26, 2013

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Originally Posted by dms664

I think I should share the outline before it vanishes off my mind.

My outline which I can recall:

-introduction
-non tech age w/o internet and telephone
-sincere relationships
-slow pace of life
-arranged marriages
-love marriages
-postal letters
-romeo Juliet, heer ranjha, adam khan durkhanai

- telephone and mobile age
- internet age
- Internet relay chat (IRC) , msn , yahoo messengers
- Orkut
- Facebook 2004
- mark zukerberg idea of socializing online for educational institutions
- Twitter
- Focus on Facebook as it is the concerned social network
- Positive use of Facebook
- Negative use of Facebook
- Discrete private messaging and chat option - how it works
-Flirting with multiple people
-Effects on marital life of married couples
-divorce rate on the rise
- honor killings
- video chat
-dating culture promotion
- showing off amid blood relations on social networks
- mock up relationships
- greedy young hunters searching old but rich ladies
- old and rich ladies luring young men for physical needs
- time pass relationships
- cheating couples
-broken families
-Recommendations / cure
- nothing is good or bad but its use
- Educating people
- employing religious clerics to educate people
- strict control by parents
- controlled and monitored internet access
- early marriages, kill frustration
- Conclusion
(end on positive note)

My essay was small and people taunted me for writing such small essay. 2 pages for outline and 13 pages essay. I am satisfied with the essay and leaving the results on Allah.

This is neat, dude. All the best.

P.S. I second the recommendations, especially that regarding early marriages.