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When life throws you lemons , make lemonade

1. Introduction
2. Every one is suffering from problems
3. Challenge yourself
4. Hopelessness in youth
5. Life and challenges faced by Prophets (from ADAM A.S. to MUHAMMAD (PBUH))
6. Politicians- Obama and Narendra Modi (from tea boy to Prime Minister)
7. Scientists and leading entrepreneurs (Bill Gates and Steve Jobs)
8. Sports Personalities (Christiano Ronaldo/ Eoin Morgan/ Yuvraj Singh Cancer)
9. Example of renowned Pakistani people who faced hardships
10. Conclusion, Last sentence was the quote (Fortune favors the brave)
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for war on terror abusing human rights
Introduction
What Is war
Wt Is terror
Human right wt r human Rights
Then i explain the the title
War on terror and éducation
Waron terror and health
War on terror and religious intolérance
War on terror and freedom of speech
War on terror and increse in Defence budget due to which govt impose more tax on people to fulfil Defence requirment
War on terror and human right to live
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Though majority of people attempted first essay, but it was the only essay that provided you with material enough for writing 2500-3000 words without the risk of going irrelevant. But who ever tried to limit its scope, whether for Freedom of Speech or just IDPs, didn't answer the question.
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Though majority of people attempted first essay, but it was the only essay that provided you with material enough for writing 2500-3000 words without the risk of going irrelevant. But who ever tried to limit its scope, whether for Freedom of Speech or just IDPs, didn't answer the question.
This paper was a game changer this year along with composition. Its my guess.
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Introduction
9/11 and us invasion in afganistan
Present position
Us failure
Is war on terror limited to Afghanistan?
War on terror in iraq Syria Middle East
ISIS

this has nothing to do with topic. why this?
Human Rights violation

American violation of Humanitarian Laws
Attrocities in Afghanistan
Poverty
Inequalities
Food shortage
Refuge Camps
Internal Displacement
Killings of Innocents
peshawar Incident
Killings of Children
Intolerance
Sectarian Killings
Shikarpur Incident

can they be termed human rights violations??

No freedom of Expression
Media under threat
Child Abuse
Women victimizations
Minorities Under threat
Hurdles in admistration of Justice
Bad Governace
Hurdles in implementation of law

again, can they be termed human rights violations caused by war on terror??

Remedies:

21 Amendment
Military Courts (really? aint they creating another problem by not giving a fair trial?)
Zarb E Azab
Banned On Capital punishments uplifted

Conclusion

In my view most of this was irrelevent. it seems like you had tried to reach the word limit and have not understood what the topic demanded.
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for war on terror abusing human rights
Introduction
What Is war
Wt Is terror
Human right wt r human Rights
Then i explain the the title
War on terror and éducation
Waron terror and health
War on terror and religious intolérance
War on terror and freedom of speech
War on terror and increse in Defence budget due to which govt impose more tax on people to fulfil Defence requirment
War on terror and human right to live
you dont need to explain to them what war is. nor do you need to explain to them what terror is. or, for thta matter, what war on terror is. what they have asked you is whether the war on terror ( as understood in the current scenario) has led to any human rights violations? and if you agree with that, what are those violations. in my opinion your outline is irrelevant to the topic.
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Outline:
Introduction
War on terror- a brief overview
War on terror- a case study of Pakistan
How war on terror has contributed to the violation of humans rights?
Socially:
a. Masses are devoid of basic necessities ( so does that mean masses were not devoid of basic necessitites before the war on terror started?)
b. Loss of education. (huh?)
c. Loss of human lives.( i guess that is relevant. )
d. loss of infrastructure ( infrastructure as human right??)
Economically:
a. Swelling poverty
b. Sky rocketing inflation
c.
d.
Way forward:
a. Operation with negotiation.
b.
c.
d.
e.
f.
Conclusion
i don't remember my entire outline but in last i gave quotation:
"Every heart is panic stricken
Felt his heart terror sicken"
Further many ek ek para main right ko discuss kia and violation ko start kerny se pehly
U.N human rights declaration ka article dia right to live and educate ... that's it !!!
please read my remarks with your outline.
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Miss where your essay outline,kindly post it and share your experience.
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Asslam-o-Alaikum There was very clearly written in the question that:
"1. Make sure you use different forms of discourses, e.g., exposition, argumentation, description and narration."
"2. Credit will be given for organization, relevance and clarity."
I think after reading and understanding above statements there is nothing left for ambiguous questions that which outline is better and what to write and how to write. The only thing matters is ow you developed your thesis statement and expand essay accordingly.

I will try to write down outlines of all the topics soon and I will also explain method of writing and attempting an essay on the basis of my experience and my study.
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and also keep one thing in mind, since about 90% people went for 'War on Terror' essay so only that will pass who would have chiseled his essay exactly according to the exact scope of the topic as only one teacher would check all the essay papers !!!..
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