Originally Posted by lovereflector

Foreign aid and economic stability
Intro
Foreign aid helps to achieve economic stability of short term. But, in long term, it has adverse impact on economy.
Body
1.How foreign aid helps to achieve economic stability of short term?
1.1 Source of finance for budget deficit
1.2 Growth in developmental project
1.3 Multiplier effect on whole economy
2.How foreign aid has adverse impact on long term economy?
2.1 Over-dependence on foreign aid.
2.2 Moral demise of national integrity
2.3 Foreign aid mostly come under hidden agenda in the contemporary world.
Example of nations that progressed without dependence on foreign aid.
4.Suggestions
1.instead of foreign aid training of skill workers should be prioritize.
2.Trade and export increment; better way to revive economy.
Conclusion.
Few points are missing, as I don't remember them now. Kindly, post your opinion regarding my essay.I tried my level best to come with guineas opinion that fpsc baba checkers demand.

Originally Posted by abbas khan 119

It seems one colon in most of the essays will shatter the dreams of many. Essay paper was the most elusive.

Originally Posted by soyuz

abbas khan can u tell me what should be the focus in this topic...world as a global village learning to live together...

Originally Posted by abbas khan 119

learning to live together should be the focus but in the context of global village.

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first what is tax culture (a complicated term) then total focus on perspective, prospects(again somehow an elusive word) and challenges.
yet another example:

crisis of governance: the need for reforms and institution building.

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In such type of essays where a colon is used essay should be written on latter part but in the context of first part.

Originally Posted by abbas khan 119

learning to live together should be the focus but in the context of global village.

Another example:

promotion of tax culture: perspective, prospects and challenges.

first what is tax culture (a complicated term) then total focus on perspective, prospects(again somehow an elusive word) and challenges.
yet another example:

crisis of governance: the need for reforms and institution building.

again, reforms and institution building should be the sole focus
In such type of essays where a colon is used essay should be written on latter part but in the context of first part.

Originally Posted by soyuz

Thank you for your clarity and I did the same by focusing on the latter part but do you think candidates who focus on the first part in outline are going to fail ??