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@bonaparte dear thanks for assesment. Will you eloborate your above statement.
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Your essay is good enough to tempt the examiner and my point of view may not necessarily reflect examiner`s mindset. In-fact, i shared my opinion on the basis of my 3rd CSS attempt and I clear English Essay in my second attempt with 45 Marks. CRISES OF GOOD GOVERNAMCE IN PAKISTAN: NEED FOR REFORMS AND INSTIUTION BUILDING “Missiles can kill terrorists. But I am convinced that good governance is that what will kill terrorism” United Nations Secretary General Ban ki Moon Outline :- Introduction: 1) Pre-requisite of Good Governance 1.1) Consensus Oriented 1.2) Accountability 1.3) Transparency 1.4) Responsive 1.5) Equitable and Inclusive 1.6) Effective and Efficient 1.7) Follow the rule of law 1.8) Participatory 2. Crises of Good Governance in Pakistan 2.1) Loopholes in criminal Justice system 2.2) Obsolete Police Ordinance 2.3) Slow implementation on National Action Plan 2.4) Lack of coordination between institution 2.5) Clash of media and dismal role of PEMRA 2.6) FATA Reforms and flaw in Article 247 (3) and sub section (7) of Constitution of Pakistan 2.7) Inefficient Public institution and lacking adaptation technologically 2.8) Public schools and no follow up on Article 25-A (Free education) in Pakistani schools 3. Need for Reforms and Institution building 3.1) Revamp Criminal Justice system 3.2) Capacity building of Police and reconsider obsolete police ordinance 3.3) Promote coordination and cooperation between institutions 3.4) Participation of people in national matters viz-a-viz foreign policy etc 3.5) PEMRA must be vigilant and censure glorification on banned outfits 3.6) Inviolability of constitution particularly related to masses must be feasible Article 25, Equality of citizen Article 3, elimination of exploitation Article 34, Full participation of woman in national life Article 37 promotion of social justice and eradication of social evils Article 33 parochial and other similar prejudice must be discouraged 3.7) Tax collection must be regulated and sources of funds should be monitored as per section 165-A, income tax ordinance 2001 to abstain suspicious transaction reports. 3.8) Renovate public schools and highly trained teachers should be recruited on merit 3.9) Uniformity on national curriculum swiftly implemented for future coexistence and peace 4. Conclusion: “To make this great state of Pakistan. We should wholly and solely concentrate on the well being of the masses and especially for the poor and you are free to go to your temples, mosques and churches in this great state of Pakistan” QUAID E AZAM MUHAMMAD ALI JINNAH Ended with quote and wrote 10 and half pages including outline |
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Would it be okay to choose frailty thy name is woman ? For a literature student ?
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It completely depends upon interest. If one feel comfortable and have knowledge about the topic then it could be better to handle otherwise choose another essay subject.
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Please comment on my outline
Does Foreign Aid helps to achieve economic stability?
I) Introduction: a) Economic stability is of paramount importance in the nation's development b) Relying on foreign aid for economic stability is an utter folly c) Foreign aid does not serve the national interest II) Thesis Statement: Foreign aid makes the leadership of a country dependent and does not serve the national interest thus hampering the economic stability rather than achieving it. III) What is an Economically Stable Nation? a) politically sound b) socially cohessive c) educationally supreme IV) Why foreign aid is incapable of achieving economic stability: a) serves the self interest of the donor and not the national interest b) makes the leadership of a country dependent c) give rise to corruption d) makes a nation stagnant as a whole V) Foreign aid does not lead to economic stability - A Glimpse from history: a) Pakistan has not been able to become economically stable despite heavy foreign aid b) Japan, after WWII achieved excellence through strong political leadership and education not the foreign aid VI) How to achieve economic stability then? a) Independent political leadership b) eliminating corruption c) investing in education d) enhancing foreign direct investment + two more points which I cant remember VII) Conclusion: a) Economic stability is the bread and butter of any nation b) Masters of nations are needed and not the slaves of foreigners to achieve economic stability |
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Please comment on my Essay (2nd Attempt).
World as a Global Village: Learning to Live together.
1. Introduction a. Globalization & Global Village b. Living together in a Global Village 2. Efforts of ancient societies for living together 3. Synergy of globalization & life in learning 4. Where learning takes place through globalization, leads life more closer a. Easing Domestic Front b. Increasing Online communities c. Empowered education institutions 5. Factors of Globalization influencing living together a. Social b. Liberalism c. Cultural diffusion d. Formation of collective norms e. Predictable attitudes 6. Afflictions of globalization a. Social isolation b. Social Network horror c. Depression d. Unemployment 7. Future of living together in a global village 8. Implications 9. Recommendations 10. Conclusion This was my outline in 2016 Essay and I posted almost 2000 words in it. I remained to the point and portrayed/elaborated in broader terms with slight instances. I highly appreciate comments from 360 degrees. Thanks. |
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Those fellows who attempted " Water crisis and unity of the country" and " frailty, thy name is woman" are requested to share their outlines.
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In 2014, It was simply bookish knowledge whereas, CE-16, is backed by legal research based comprehensive approach.
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