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1) Introduction:

Feminism in not really a third world issue because in fact, it is a global one.

2) Three Waves of Feminism in Europe and the US:

1st wave (19th to early 20th century)
2nd wave (1960s to 1980s)
3rd wave (1990s)

3)Feminism in the third world:
A case study of Pakistan-

Initial challenges faced by women
Developments in the status of women

4) Equal but different

5) Conclusion
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Alright guys. Sorry for being late. Having no option left, I went with topic # 10

Stance: Life without controversy is meaningless and aimless

Arguments to justify the stance

1. Everything today is relative; hero of one is villian of other, e.g. Hitler, Mao

2. Individual free will and thought is a divine blessing. Being conformists defies your own purpose of existence and deprives of this divine gift.

3. Controversy depicts individual brilliance, e.g. Genghis Khan and his military strategy

4. Controversy brings fame, e.g. Qandeel Baloch, Veena Malik, Seeta White

5. Controversy brings innovation, e.g. Western Scientists and their inventions like Edison, Wright Brothers

6. Controversy sets examples and lays down principles of justice. If all were conformists, there would have been no identification of right and wrong.

7. Controversy brings improvement through difference of opinion and constructive discussion.

8. Controversy encourages Independence of thought and independence of action, e.g. movement

9. Controversy is inevitable, even the Prophets were controversial for the infidels. Every action invites controversy and critique.

10. Conformists base their success on controversial people.

11. Success and controversy go hand in hand; most of the successful people are scandalized.

12. Controversial people set trends.

13. Lastly, It is a source of entertainment, e.g. media hype, news etc.

Conclusion: Life without controversy is indeed no life.

I have forgotten one point in arguments of the outline but it was largely the same as I have mentioned
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1) Introduction:

Feminism in not really a third world issue because in fact, it is a global one.

2) Three Waves of Feminism in Europe and the US:

1st wave (19th to early 20th century)
2nd wave (1960s to 1980s)
3rd wave (1990s)

3)Feminism in the third world:
A case study of Pakistan-

Initial challenges faced by women
Developments in the status of women

4) Equal but different

5) Conclusion
Though Ididnt attempt this one,let me share my understanding of the topic.
Basically,feminism is a political idea which has not found any root in the third world yet.no worth considering movements regarding feminism inthe third world,no globally recognised feminists from the third world,no feminist writers like SIMON DE BEAUVOIR,JUDITH BUTLER etc. S0,feminism is not REALY a third world issue because third world countries face even bigger issues.The issues like no democratic progress,no political culture,no rule of law,deteriorated economies,illetracy,poverty,hunger etc.Third world countries have failed to tackle these basic issues,how can they sponser an ideology which couldnt yield desired results even in developed countries.
Then u were supposed to highlight the extent of prevelance of that poloitical idea in countries other than the third world ones.feminist movements were definitely to be discussed but important was the outcome.
In this essay,key word was 'REALLY'.People who managed to break this word and led their essay in direction of disussing feminism's strength as a political idea in west and other developed countries,are in safe boats.
i dont think the topic was about any comparision btw the plight of women in the third world nd first world countries.
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Agreed with your stance on the feminism issue.

Would you please paste the link of Prof Howard Zinn's lecture regarding the holy wars essay?
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Amin, Did you address the question "But why one should leave the safe havens of conformism" in your essay?
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Amin, Did you address the question "But why one should leave the safe havens of conformism" in your essay?
Once I wrote points in favor of controversy, that automatically stands addressed
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Bro according to me there are some glaws in your essay, the biggest being relevancy, the major task is to reply to the question whether the world is moving towards peace or not, I find it difficult to imagine how your introduction to UN answers this question, thereafter 4 and 5 are relevant if you have mentioned whether in these wars world peace got established or not, 6th can be perfectly relevant, 7 shouldnt exceed more than 150 words as thisis not the main question,,, this is my assessment of your essay,,
If part 1 2 3 and 7 are the minute part of your essay, and 4 5(given you discuss the essay's question) 6 is where you major chunk of your essay lies, I would pass you with ease...

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Once I wrote points in favor of controversy, that automatically stands addressed


The question 'why one should not choose safe haven of conformism' is not the same as 'what is the importance of controversy in life'. In your essay, you seem to have answered the latter and ignored the former. Gintino rightly asked you whether you have touched upon the negatives of conformism. Examiner himself stated the 'positives' of controversy, what he wanted from the candidates was the 'negatives' of conformism.

Despite that, your essay shows maturity of thought and diversity of knowledge. It has a potential to cross the mark.


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