Let's see dear.

In each point, I also mentioned a few sentences regarding the negative impacts of conformism and eventually linking it up with my stance.

Rest, CSS is more of a luck factor. If it lands up on the right day in the right hand, you're through and vice versa.

Agreed. Good luck.


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Actually the statement is simple.The speaker is claiming that you should non-conform and while you nonconform controversies will arise .And this is what you should embrace instead of sitting in safe haven of conformism.Because controversy itself is nothing;it is a product of nonconformity ........so linking both the staetemnts was necessary.none of them can be taken separately.In the case of civil right movement of america,for instance,blacks were nonconformists and they faced controversies from whites who were against gving rights to blacks.And if the blacks
instead of becoming nonconfromists had chosen the safe haven of conformism they could not have unfetterd tehmselves from clutches of duress.

Exactly. In my opinion, controversy stems out of unconformity. So these statements seemed interlinked to me.

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Well guys, passing Essay - or for that matter Precis - depends entirely on your luck. Given the domination of "trend regime" in FPSC, many have billed this year as the "Essay" year. However, I think FPSC is now going to target Essay and Precis equally. And I'm sure the "trend" pattern indicates that the examiner is not to be blamed; in fact, FPSC deliberately fails the students in either one of the papers. This is surely going to decrease in the wake of hefty criticism.

brother , your ideas are mature and broad. how you got this skill ?

i am new aspirant.
and also comment on my outline :

ESSAY:: are modern war not holy war?
.causes of holy war.:::
1 Disunity among muslim umaah .

2 Creation of ISIS to defame Islam.

3 Middle east crisis is a project for greater Israel.

4 American invasions on Muslim states after 9/11 inside job.

5 Killings of non-Muslims by the funded extremists in Muslim states.

6 Formation of Islamic military alliance to tackle NATO states who are involved in holy war.

7 Create reasons for civil wars within Muslim state for further expeditions.

8 Installations of puppet governments to weaken and plunder muslim states.

9 To label muslims as terrorists in the western world.

10 Media is a tool to show controversies regarding the lifestyle of muslims .

11 American interest to conflict between shia-sunni leaders in world politics .

12 Bashing of western leaders against Muslims in their election campaigns.


.Effects of holy war,
1 Victimization of Muslim immigrants .


2 Muslims mass migration in the smoke of weapons

3 Genocide of Muslims in all war zones of this century

4 Islamophobia is growing

5 Radicalization

6 terrorism is increasing day by day

7 Humanity is suffering.

8 Maximum chances of World war 3.

9 Arms race.

10 Brain wash of the western people against Islam and Muslims.

11 Impartiality of UNO regarding Muslims rights.

12 Sectarianism .

Solution to end this holy war:

1 Nato states should call back their army from war zones.

2 To empower UNO by finishing the hegemony of VETO STATES .

3 Ban on military alliance such as nato or Islamic military alliance.

4 To resolve Palestine-israel issue peacefully.

5 Religious clergies should play their role in media to remove misunderstandings
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6 To find similarities between Christianity, Judaism and Islam for love and peace. (as sir syed ahmed khan had done after war of independence ).

7 UN should ban journalists who hit religions .

8 UNO member states referendum for peace invasions .

good topics

1 Everything today is relative; hero of one is villian of other, e.g. Hitler, Mao

this outline represent that you proved only one statement like Life without controversy is meaningless and aimless.You prove other statment of essay that is related to why should not choose the safe heaven of conformism.Did you discuss in this outline as hitler is conform to the established principle of nationalism.Hitler didn't conform to the established principle of nationalism which bring controversy to him.Did you prove second statement of essay in your outline?

As stated earlier, I wrote a sentence in each point regarding what would have been likely if they opted to be a conformist.

Not resorting to conformism = Being controversial

Can you answer a query of mine?

Doesn't controversy stems out when you refuse to be a conformist? e.g. Iblees refusing to bow before Adam?

If you guys agree, I think you've got my answer. If not, it is not going to change my Essay now

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i only asked from you as your outline represent that you prove only one point.Outline is brief sketch of essay.If you take my comment positively this comment didn't represent that i criticized you.If any one on this forum then he derived same result from your oultine as me.As far as your question is concerned it depends upon circumstances.Even you refused to conform to established principle of judiaism as jews many jewish people criticized you or religious conformism also bring contrversy.So proved one point if you go on the second point then give so many examples.It become argumentative essay whether you agree or disagree and it creates problem for writer and in simple word it bring controversy for writer by examiner when he read essay.I have not enough time to criticized any one.