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Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.
I think it is not enough to get passing marks lack of knowledge and method of attempt. Plz dont mind it is my observation
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I wrote my essay on this topic. Please check my outline and tell me if it's any good.


1-Introduction
2-Current world scenario
  • Rise of nationalism
  • Donald Trump and US/Steve Bandon and anti Muslim rhetoric
  • EU refugee crisis, Brexit
  • Indian nationalism under Modi
3-Evolution of nation state
  • Peace of Westohalia
  • French Revolution
  • Unification of Italy and Germany
  • End of Colonialism
4-Minorities in a modern nation state
  • often sidelined
  • not granted equal opportunities
  • lack of development
  • often take up arms against the state
5-Real world examples of conflicts between minorities and state
  • Balkans
  • Breakup of USSR
  • Kurdish independence movements
  • Kashmir
6-Presence of minorities doesn't mean violence is necessary
  • US, multiculturalism
  • Modern Russia, more than 23 ethnic groups
  • India, hugely diverse states with very few secessionist movements
7-Pakistan, a nation of multiple nationalities
  • Pre 1971, Pashtunistan and Bengali movements
  • Bengali independence, harsh lesson learned
  • Post 1971, movements all but finished due to democratic process, rights for everyone
8-Nationalism isn't inherently violent
  • Rigid Nation state boundaries only in areas with intense historic conflicts e.g. Europe
  • Minorities can live peacefully in areas that have experienced relative peace e.g. US
  • Peace, development guarantee that minorities feel inclusive
9-Reccomendations
  • Equal opportunities for everyone
  • Promote shared values and culture
  • Promote education of other cultures to increase ethnic tolerance
  • Justice and freedom for everyone
  • Relative autonomy (Iraqi Kurdistan example, 18th ammendment)
  • Development of all people equally
  • Stop hate speech against minorities
  • International safeguards for the rights of minorities
10-Conclusion


What do senior members feel about this, is it good or not?
Good try . some where irrelevent but some where you did it good exactly to the point lets hope to get passed
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It was indeed a difficult paper. I attained 41 marks, passing it. Very satisfied about all the brainstorming during the examination.
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Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.

very nice outline. i hope that you have passed the exam.
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It was indeed a difficult paper. I attained 41 marks, passing it. Very satisfied about all the brainstorming during the examination.
Can you please share your selected topic and outline?
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What was your result? Did you manage to pass?
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