Your essay seems good.

@Elect,

I think ......Greenboat's outline ,compare to yours one,possesses all that required essential stuff ,which is direly required to win the examiner's heart.

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I wrote my essay on this topic. Please check my outline and tell me if it's any good.


1-Introduction
2-Current world scenario

• Rise of nationalism
• Donald Trump and US/Steve Bandon and anti Muslim rhetoric
• EU refugee crisis, Brexit
• Indian nationalism under Modi

3-Evolution of nation state

• Peace of Westohalia
• French Revolution
• Unification of Italy and Germany
• End of Colonialism

4-Minorities in a modern nation state

• often sidelined
• not granted equal opportunities
• lack of development
• often take up arms against the state

5-Real world examples of conflicts between minorities and state

• Balkans
• Breakup of USSR
• Kurdish independence movements
• Kashmir

6-Presence of minorities doesn't mean violence is necessary

• US, multiculturalism
• Modern Russia, more than 23 ethnic groups
• India, hugely diverse states with very few secessionist movements

7-Pakistan, a nation of multiple nationalities

• Pre 1971, Pashtunistan and Bengali movements
• Bengali independence, harsh lesson learned
• Post 1971, movements all but finished due to democratic process, rights for everyone

8-Nationalism isn't inherently violent

• Rigid Nation state boundaries only in areas with intense historic conflicts e.g. Europe
• Minorities can live peacefully in areas that have experienced relative peace e.g. US
• Peace, development guarantee that minorities feel inclusive

9-Reccomendations

• Equal opportunities for everyone
• Promote shared values and culture
• Promote education of other cultures to increase ethnic tolerance
• Justice and freedom for everyone
• Relative autonomy (Iraqi Kurdistan example, 18th ammendment)
• Development of all people equally
• Stop hate speech against minorities
• International safeguards for the rights of minorities

10-Conclusion


What do senior members feel about this, is it good or not?

i attempted no 3 but could not write more than 10 pages in 2 hrs.

More and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace.

1. Introduction.
2. Historical background of UN.
3. Is the world moving towards peace? No
4. Military engagements directly under the umbrella of UN and indirect
role of UN in several civil wars in 21st century:
4.1. Attack on Afghanistan
4.2. Invasion of Iraq
4.3. Libyan civil war
4.4. Yemen war
4.5. Syrian crisis
5. Failure to resolve other major disputes:
5.1. Palestine issue
5.2. Kashmir
5.3. Conflicts in South China Sea
5.4. North korea crisis
6. Consequences:
6.1. Sufferings of war-torn areas
6.2. Deteriorating conditions of health and education
6.3. Increase in radicalism and terrorism
6.4. Emergence of terrorist outfits e.g IS etc
6.5. Endangered world peace severely
7. Causes behind the scene:
7.1. Structural flaws in UN
7.2. Role of veto powers
7.3. Dominance of big fishes as great financiers of UN
7.4. Inequality among member states
8. Suggestions for improvement:
8.1. Structural reforms in UN
8.2. No veto powers
8.3. Equality for all members
9. Conclusion

Here is the rough sketch of my outline in today's essay. I opted the following topic. Kindly do comment and suggestions are desperately needed.
Is colonoial mentality impeding Pakistan's growth ?
Introduction
Its been 70 years that we get rid of collnialosm but the remains of colonial system are still existing in our society.......
Remains of colonial system :
》Fedualism
》Bureaucratic Culture
》Elite and aristocracy rules the majority
》Divide and rule formula still exists
》 DIVISIONS IN THE NAME
1• RELIGION
2•ETHNICITY
3•REGIONAL DIVISIONS ETC
》Minority rules majority etc..
Pakistan's progress is not directly linked with colonial mindset but it has some other aspevts as well .
》POLITICAL ISSUES
1. POLITICAL CRISIS
2.LACK OF POLITICAL WILL
3. MILITARY INTERVENTIONS
4.UNSTABLE DEMOCRATIC CULTURE
5.PROVINCIAL DISINTEGRATION etc....
IMPACTS OF THIS COLONIAL MINDSET IN PAKISTAN'S DEVELOPMENT
COMPARISON AND CONTRAST WOTH INDIA :
As India was also a colony of Britain but they get rid of thus colonial mindset .
》BY
1. LAND REFORMS
2.NO MILITARY INTERVENTUONS
3.ESTABLISHING A TRUE DEMOCRATIC CULTURE.
4. REFORMS IN CIVIL SERVICE STRUCTURE ETC.....
WAY FORWARD ...
CONCLUSION .....

Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.

I wrote on Feminism is not a third world issue.

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Is this unending process or project ... ??

By the way, these three are potential questions for CA, PA & IR.

2nd one.
Intro
Brief history of globalization
Brexit and globalisation
Protectionism
Extractive economic policies
Capitalism and globalization
Free market
Private ownership
Cycles of capitalism and socialism
Capitalism hasn't left the globalized world, how would it return
Role of state to prevent inequality in capitalistic market
How the future would look like
Way forward for the world
Conclusion

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