Originally Posted by elect

Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.

Originally Posted by choochi

I wrote my essay on this topic. Please check my outline and tell me if it's any good.


1-Introduction
2-Current world scenario

• Rise of nationalism
• Donald Trump and US/Steve Bandon and anti Muslim rhetoric
• EU refugee crisis, Brexit
• Indian nationalism under Modi

3-Evolution of nation state

• Peace of Westohalia
• French Revolution
• Unification of Italy and Germany
• End of Colonialism

4-Minorities in a modern nation state

• often sidelined
• not granted equal opportunities
• lack of development
• often take up arms against the state

5-Real world examples of conflicts between minorities and state

• Balkans
• Breakup of USSR
• Kurdish independence movements
• Kashmir

6-Presence of minorities doesn't mean violence is necessary

• US, multiculturalism
• Modern Russia, more than 23 ethnic groups
• India, hugely diverse states with very few secessionist movements

7-Pakistan, a nation of multiple nationalities

• Pre 1971, Pashtunistan and Bengali movements
• Bengali independence, harsh lesson learned
• Post 1971, movements all but finished due to democratic process, rights for everyone

8-Nationalism isn't inherently violent

• Rigid Nation state boundaries only in areas with intense historic conflicts e.g. Europe
• Minorities can live peacefully in areas that have experienced relative peace e.g. US
• Peace, development guarantee that minorities feel inclusive

9-Reccomendations

• Equal opportunities for everyone
• Promote shared values and culture
• Promote education of other cultures to increase ethnic tolerance
• Justice and freedom for everyone
• Relative autonomy (Iraqi Kurdistan example, 18th ammendment)
• Development of all people equally
• Stop hate speech against minorities
• International safeguards for the rights of minorities

10-Conclusion


What do senior members feel about this, is it good or not?

Originally Posted by elect

Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.

Originally Posted by NaveedaShaikh

It was indeed a difficult paper. I attained 41 marks, passing it. Very satisfied about all the brainstorming during the examination.

Originally Posted by raighulammustafa

Essay:- Literature is a lonely Planet of idealists.

OUTLINE:-

INTRODUCTION :- literature is not a lonely Planet of idealists. It is a necessary tool to make one's life ideal.

Supporting arguments :

1- literature makes distinction between right and wrong.

2- Literature is a great source of critical information.

3- Literature adds to man's knowledge.*

4- literature keeps morality alive in a society.

5- literature provides knowledge about different cultures and civilizations.

6- literature gives lessons from history.

7- literature brings man closer to nature.

8- literature provides knowledge of science.

9- muslims were on zenith of glory when they gave importance to literature.

10- literature is personal experience of writer.

11- developed nations have best literature in the world.

12- All great men of history were lovers of literature.

13- literature entertains people.

14- literature provides knowledge about economic policies of different era.

CONCLUSION :- Summary of essay

( I wrote an almost similar outline. There are some some points missing. I wrote 17 arguments.)

I guess very few people opted this topic.

Originally Posted by elect

Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.

Originally Posted by elect

Dear Seniors,
I am taking CE-2017 and wrote essay on "more and more international military engagements by the United Nations, Is the world moving towards peace". Below is my outline.

1. Introduction
2. Organizational Structure of the UN
a. Creation and members/size of the UN
b. Unbalanced power structure (members with VETO power)
c. Role of third world countries in the UN
3. Purpose of formation of the UN
a. Intended purpose of the UN
b. Role it is playing towards world peace
c. Role it can play for world peace
4. Military Engagements under the UN
a. Peace missions lead by the UN
i. Congo
ii. Bosnia
b. Role of Pakistan in Peace missions
c. Military Engagements by NATO/USA under the permission of UN
i. Vietnam
ii. Afghanistan
iii. Iraq
iv. Libya
5. Silence of the UN on Military Engagements of member nations on other countries/areas
a. Kashmir Issue
i. UN Resolution
ii. Practical Role of the UN
b. Israel/Palestine
i. israel expansion in Palestine Area
6. Assessment of the effectiveness of the UN for World Peace
a. Comparison of the role it can play and it is playing
7. Suggestion to make the UN effective in achieving peace in world
a. Stop backing military expeditions
b. Abolish concept of VETO Power
c. All the nations should have equal rights in UN
d. Enforce its resolutions
8. Conclusions

Please comment will it be enough to pass the essay paper.