We both have pasted links here.

Dear Fortune,

Re-read 116th Post in this thread above. I re-iterate that you could also make its correction as:

He was not only a thief but also a murderer.

Above example is correct; however, it is used in less formal communication. The most formal and standard way of its correction was:

Not only was he a thief, but he was also a murderer.


@abrowaqas

I don't want to sound condescending nor do I virtually dismiss others' knowledge; however, if I am given the same sentence again, I will make my correction as above. You better not get yourself confused by our explanations; the best way is to do research yourself. And do what appeals to your mind.

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Buddy, its not the case. You will be awarded one mark even if your one sentence is correct in PoW. If it were not the case, the question would have five marks in total and not ten.

one thing remember ..book is a discourse and each discourse cohere with multitude of issues to one theme..so if one issue or sub theme would separated and its paragraphs was given..how it is justified title will accorded to book

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Have ur say about these titles

1) The Psychological causes of unhappiness

and

2) Sick soul

Seniors plz comment. ?

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no i am saying about title conquest of happiness

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ca i say something?im a junior member but i can give suggestions like seniors-
title is THE PSYCHOLOGICAL CAUSES OF UNHAPPINESS.it is the perfect title.generally titles are found in the first and last sentences.here v ve the title in the first sentence.

"psychological causes of unhappiness" is a wrong title. If u read the precis you will come to know that the author talks about state of unhappiness of man. the passage is not about the psychological causes, so it is not the right one.

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it is actually a story of unhappy men who give certain misperceived interpretations to their state of unhappiness.majority of such people can be corrected through guidance!

my title was :
MISGUIDED UNHAPPY MEN AND THEIR MISERABLE BELIEFS !

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Wraith, you're assessment is flawed; reason being, Author does talk about state of unhappiness but his analysis is virtually based upon psychological phenomenon and not on a medical conditions of man. I bet this paragraph was taken from some magazine of psychology.

It was taken from the book '' Conquest of Happiness '' by Bertrand Russell.I have this book at home.