I did my english paper 2011 in same order as you have mentioned and I am successful candidate.

As long as yu have written right question numbers then its ok.

Dont worry about this nd try to focus on next papers.

[QUOTE=Adnans3041;407244]Thanks. But today I saw in the rule of CSS examination-2012 that "[B] the marking will be in order of consecutive answers" [/B]. I could not understand exact meaning of this statement.


Please guide.[/QUOTE]


That applies when you have attempted an extra question. If you have followed the instructions on the question paper, you've no reason to worry. The sequence does not matter, the quantity does. So does the synchronization of Q.No. in both Q.Paper and Answer Sheet.

[B]Regards,[/B]

my outline for critical analysis of educational system in pakistan..plz evaluate...

• [COLOR="Black"][B]Introduction

• Significance of Education in General[/B][/COLOR]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Literacy
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Employment
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Industrialization
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Scientific Empowerment
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Social and Moral development

[B]• Significance of Education in Islam

• Education System of Pakistan[/B]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Criterion for Grading in Pakistan’s Education

[I][INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] PHD
[INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] MPHIL
[INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] Bachelors
[INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] FSC
[INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] Metric[/I]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Different Educational divisions

[I][INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] O level And A level
[INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] English Medium
[INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] Urdu Medium
[INDENT][INDENT][/INDENT][/INDENT] Madrassa System[/I]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Private Vs Government institutes in Pakistan
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Text Books Boards and Universities
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Top 10 institutes of Pakistan
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Research Output of Institutes
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Extra Curricular activities for students
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Career Development Centers

[B]• Pakistan and Foreign Universities[/B]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o World Ranking of Pakistan Institutes
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Educational Exchange Program with Foreign Universities
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Foreign Scholarships for Pakistani Students
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Pakistan Education vs. Educational system of Muslim World
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Pakistan Education vs. Educational system of Developed Countries

• [B]Major Educational events of Pakistan[/B]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o HEC dissolution
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Major Privatization of Institutes
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Violence in Educational Systems

• [B]Issues of Pakistan’s Education[/B]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Expensive for the lower or middle class
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Unavailability in rural areas
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Regular changes in Educational Reforms
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Lack of Employment Opportunities
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Lack of common curriculum and standardization across provinces

• [B]Consequences[/B]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Increase in Crime Rates
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Increase in Child labor
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Immigration to Foreign Countries
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Suicides

• [B]Solution[/B]
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Learn from the West
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Incorporating the Teachings of Islam
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Standardizing The Text Books all over Pakistan
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Regular Checks of institutions
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Embracing Highly Qualified Faculty
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Regular Faculty Training Programs
[INDENT][/INDENT]o Improving Indigenous and Foreign Scholarship Programs

• [B]Conclusion[/B]

[SIZE="5"]The most interesting thing is that I started my essay with my own poem:) I wish I could mention my name :([/SIZE]


[B][CENTER][SIZE="4"][U]The Suffering soul in the scientific age[/U][/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

[CENTER][B][U]Introduction[/U][/B]

In pieces my soul has torn,
But I have no time to mourn,

Time is passing and passing on,
Life's vehicle is buzzing its horn,

Polluted soul and body deserve not,
To face the one who lives in heart,

Hatred,malice,envy and lies,
on my soul like buboes rise,

Would that I were a baby on my death,
With a pure heart and sacred breath!


[B][U]by Farrah Zafar[/U][/B][/CENTER]


[LIST][*]Materialism is the death of spirituality[/LIST][LIST][*]Man's material progress versus moral decline[/LIST]
"Man has looked into the volcanoes,dived into the ocean,perforated the earth,winged its flight in the skies.This material progress has led him to ditch of moral deprivation.etc

[LIST][*]What is soul and its importance[/LIST][LIST][*]soul is immortal,body is mortal[/LIST][LIST][*]Truth beautifies soul[/LIST],
Keats says,[B]"Beauty is truth,truth beauty,that is all ye know on earth and all ye need to know[/B]

[LIST][*]description of soul In literary works[/LIST]
[B]Faustus[/B] cries out for his soul,fears eternal damnation

[B]John Proctor[/B] in "The Crucible" says,[B] I have given you my name,leave me my soul.[/B]


[CENTER][B][U][SIZE="3"]Effects of soul's suffering[/SIZE][/U][/B]
[/CENTER]

[B]On individual level[/B]
[LIST][*]Frustration,depression,despondency[/LIST][LIST][*]examples of two men belonging to this scientific age[/LIST]
[U]One who seduced female dead bodies[/U]

[U]One who raped small children[/U]


[B]On Family Level[/B]
[LIST][*]weak bond of affection[/LIST][LIST][*]example of [U]western countries[/U][/LIST]
[U]old homes,Orphanages (having children who don't know the names of their fathers)[/U]

[LIST][*]Youngsters have no sense of direction,they are confused because of weak[/LIST]family institutions

[B]On National and International level[/B]
[LIST][*]souls have become impure[/LIST][LIST][*]no sympathy for mankind[/LIST]
[U]example ,nuclear bombing on Nagasaki
[/U]
[LIST][*]Material progress has made man hollow inwardly.[/LIST]
[B]Seamus Heaney[/B] has depicted well the hollowness of modern man in his poem,[U]"The Hollow Men"[/U]

[CENTER][U]Poem by Prabhakar bargurde[/U]

[B]Comrade[/B]

Don't be in hurry for revolution

you are still very small.

Your ability to resist

atrocities,boycotts and rapes,

that go on every moment

has become nil,

Comrade !

Tomorrow's dawn is yet to rise,

sleep undisturbed until then...


[SIZE="3"][U][B]Reasons[/B][/U][/SIZE][/CENTER]


[B]1)Materialim[/B]

[LIST][*]it has deprived man of joy,love,affection and harmony.[/LIST]
[LIST][*]he runs after material progress,therefore neglects his soul[/LIST]

[B]2)Lust for power[/B]
[LIST][*]man wants to attain power by hook or crook,he ignores his soul[/LIST]
[B]"Power corrupts man and absolute power corrupts absoulutely"
[/B]
[U]example of character of [B]Kurtz[/B] by Joseph Conrad.[/U]

He cries out,fearing damnation of his soul,

[B]"The horror ! The horror"[/B]


[B]3)astrayed from religion[/B]
[LIST][*]all religions support love and kindness for humanity.People of this scientific[/LIST]age are astrayed from the way of religion,that is why,their souls are suffering.
[LIST][*]The sufi poets emphasized on purgation of soul but their messages have been[/LIST]ignored.

[LIST][*]A sufi poet said,[/LIST]
[B]"Kadi Mann apnay wich tu warrya he nae"[/B]

[U]You never introspected your heart.
[/U]
[LIST][*]Generally all prophets and specifically Holy prophet (PBUH) laid emphasis on[/LIST]love for mankind.

[B]"If one kills a man with no reason,one kills the whole humanity"
[/B]

[CENTER][U][B][SIZE="3"]Solution[/SIZE][/B][/U][/CENTER]

[LIST][*]Method of Introspection should be adopted to purify soul[/LIST][LIST][*]Spirituality should be focused rather materialism[/LIST][LIST][*]Love and peace should be spread.[/LIST][LIST][*]Teachings of religions generally and Islam specifically should be followed[/LIST][LIST][*]The only food for soul is self control and prayers[/LIST]
[SIZE="4"][CENTER]
ہے دل کے لیے موت مشینوں کی حکومت
احساس مروت کو کچل دیتے ہیں آلات[/CENTER][/SIZE]

[SIZE="4"](The reign of machines is the death of heart.The instruments crush the feelings of courtesy and kindness.)[/SIZE]


[SIZE="5"][CENTER]Please comment [/CENTER][/SIZE]

[QUOTE=Farrah Zafar;408086][SIZE="5"]The most interesting thing is that I started my essay with my own poem:) I wish I could mention my name :([/SIZE]


[B][CENTER][SIZE="4"][U]The Suffering soul in the scientific age[/U][/SIZE][/CENTER][/B]

[CENTER][B][U]Introduction[/U][/B]

In pieces my soul has torn,
But I have no time to mourn,

Time is passing and passing on,
Life's vehicle is buzzing its horn,

Polluted soul and body deserve not,
To face the one who lives in heart,

Hatred,malice,envy and lies,
on my soul like buboes rise,

Would that I were a baby on my death,
With a pure heart and sacred breath!


[B][U]by Farrah Zafar[/U][/B][/CENTER]


[LIST][*]Materialism is the death of spirituality[/LIST][LIST][*]Man's material progress versus moral decline[/LIST]
"Man has looked into the volcanoes,dived into the ocean,perforated the earth,winged its flight in the skies.This material progress has led him to ditch of moral deprivation.etc

[LIST][*]What is soul and its importance[/LIST][LIST][*]soul is immortal,body is mortal[/LIST][LIST][*]Truth beautifies soul[/LIST],
Keats says,[B]"Beauty is truth,truth beauty,that is all ye know on earth and all ye need to know[/B]

[LIST][*]description of soul In literary works[/LIST]
[B]Faustus[/B] cries out for his soul,fears eternal damnation

[B]John Proctor[/B] in "The Crucible" says,[B] I have given you my name,leave me my soul.[/B]


[CENTER][B][U][SIZE="3"]Effects of soul's suffering[/SIZE][/U][/B]
[/CENTER]

[B]On individual level[/B]
[LIST][*]Frustration,depression,despondency[/LIST][LIST][*]examples of two men belonging to this scientific age[/LIST]
[U]One who seduced female dead bodies[/U]

[U]One who raped small children[/U]


[B]On Family Level[/B]
[LIST][*]weak bond of affection[/LIST][LIST][*]example of [U]western countries[/U][/LIST]
[U]old homes,Orphanages (having children who don't know the names of their fathers)[/U]

[LIST][*]Youngsters have no sense of direction,they are confused because of weak[/LIST]family institutions

[B]On National and International level[/B]
[LIST][*]souls have become impure[/LIST][LIST][*]no sympathy for mankind[/LIST]
[U]example ,nuclear bombing on Nagasaki
[/U]
[LIST][*]Material progress has made man hollow inwardly.[/LIST]
[B]Seamus Heaney[/B] has depicted well the hollowness of modern man in his poem,[U]"The Hollow Men"[/U]

[CENTER][U]Poem by Prabhakar bargurde[/U]

[B]Comrade[/B]

Don't be in hurry for revolution

you are still very small.

Your ability to resist

atrocities,boycotts and rapes,

that go on every moment

has become nil,

Comrade !

Tomorrow's dawn is yet to rise,

sleep undisturbed until then...


[SIZE="3"][U][B]Reasons[/B][/U][/SIZE][/CENTER]


[B]1)Materialim[/B]

[LIST][*]it has deprived man of joy,love,affection and harmony.[/LIST]
[LIST][*]he runs after material progress,therefore neglects his soul[/LIST]

[B]2)Lust for power[/B]
[LIST][*]man wants to attain power by hook or crook,he ignores his soul[/LIST]
[B]"Power corrupts man and absolute power corrupts absoulutely"
[/B]
[U]example of character of [B]Kurtz[/B] by Joseph Conrad.[/U]

He cries out,fearing damnation of his soul,

[B]"The horror ! The horror"[/B]


[B]3)astrayed from religion[/B]
[LIST][*]all religions support love and kindness for humanity.People of this scientific[/LIST]age are astrayed from the way of religion,that is why,their souls are suffering.
[LIST][*]The sufi poets emphasized on purgation of soul but their messages have been[/LIST]ignored.

[LIST][*]A sufi poet said,[/LIST]
[B]"Kadi Mann apnay wich tu warrya he nae"[/B]

[U]You never introspected your heart.
[/U]
[LIST][*]Generally all prophets and specifically Holy prophet (PBUH) laid emphasis on[/LIST]love for mankind.

[B]"If one kills a man with no reason,one kills the whole humanity"
[/B]

[CENTER][U][B][SIZE="3"]Solution[/SIZE][/B][/U][/CENTER]

[LIST][*]Method of Introspection should be adopted to purify soul[/LIST][LIST][*]Spirituality should be focused rather materialism[/LIST][LIST][*]Love and peace should be spread.[/LIST][LIST][*]Teachings of religions generally and Islam specifically should be followed[/LIST][LIST][*]The only food for soul is self control and prayers[/LIST]
[SIZE="4"][CENTER]
ہے دل کے لیے موت مشینوں کی حکومت
احساس مروت کو کچل دیتے ہیں آلات[/CENTER][/SIZE]

[SIZE="4"](The reign of machines is the death of heart.The instruments crush the feelings of courtesy and kindness.)[/SIZE]


[SIZE="5"][CENTER]Please comment [/CENTER][/SIZE][/QUOTE]

Awessssssssssome! :)

Sis, I assure your success. It is an ineffable. Quite well.

I thought I could write better, you had done the best. :)

Sis, It would be out-standing, if you had given more touch of scientific age.

[B]Social and economic securities of women in Islam[/B]
1)Introduction
2)Status of women before the emergence of Islam
3)Islam had revolutionized the status of women
4)Social uplift of women in islam[LIST][*][B]Regarding status[/B][*] As Mother[*] As spouse[*] As female child[*] [B] Equal status in religious obligation[/B][*] [B]Regarding Education[/B][*] [B]Social security-Husbands,fathers and brothers are made guardians[*] [B] Merital Rights[/B][*] Marriage of choice[*] Right of Khula[*] Right to re-marry[*] [B]Political rights[/B][*] [B]Legal and civil rights[/B][/B][/LIST]5)Economic securities[LIST][*]RIght of inheritance[*]Dower as a religious obligation[*]Right of maintenance[*]Exemption from financial responsibilities[*]Right of property[*]Professional choices[/LIST]6)Examples from the life of Prophet(PBUH)
7)Examples from the life of Sahaba(RA)
8)Propaganda of west against Muslim women
9)Conclusion

[QUOTE=zuhaib ahmed;408100]Sis, It would be out-standing, if you had given more touch of scientific age.[/QUOTE]

Zuhaib ! :)

Perfection ? ah Fancy that !

Well,both went parallel ,soul and scientific age.I connected them with each other,didn't focus only on soul.The above is just outline:)

Yes, I thought. You would have linked suffering soul and scientific age. But, didn't find anything like in outlines, So i said.:)

I am really astounded to view the outline. Marvellous, amazing is it! I can hardly think anyone write this all. I am a beginner but ,from here onward, I will work hard to aim at my target. Really your post is optimistic one.
There are
References from English, Punjabi and other Literatures.
Clues to social evils
Political awareness

In fact, I can't assess the qualities, but wish you the best of luck!

Please guide us to prepare essays like such above.