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U posted that everybody wrote point of 'Circular Debt' then do u want people to repeat points n paragraphs in Essay? |
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Nice attempt
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andleeb Akhter (Thursday, October 11, 2012), pari Ali BNi (Friday, October 26, 2012) |
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I would like to voice some thoughts in regards to your outline. • Materialism is the death of spirituality: Unless materialism is clearly defined, this statement tends to ignore the importance of the material world. Islam has laid great emphasis on the material world: nature is a source of knowledge in the Quran. I think spiritualism and materialism ought to run parallel to each other. One should compliment the other. • Truth beautifies soul: How are you associating the truth with spirituality in this context? One who seduced female dead bodies; One who raped small children: We cannot restrain that argument exclusively to the scientific age. Similar examples to exist prior to the scientific age. • it has deprived man of joy,love,affection and harmony: It would be appropriate to provide a few functional definitions of the terms since there are numerous measures of joy and happiness - material wealth; friends; intellectual satisfaction; etc. • all religions support love and kindness for humanity.People of this scientific age are astrayed from the way of religion,that is why,their souls are suffering: Again, this equally applies to the times prior to the scientific age. For instance, the crusades; the cult of the assassins, etc. • Spirituality should be focused rather materialism: I would say materialism should supplement spiritualism. • Teachings of religions generally and Islam specifically should be followed: I think it would be good to specify which teachings are the most basic and fundamental – Islam is the official religion in Saudi Arabia & Iran. Thanks! This was a great attempt! Best of luck! :-) |
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1)Materialism(regarding topic) clearly means over- lust for materialistic pursuits,the one that deprives man of love,affection and kindness.The one that has turned him into machine. 2)An unseen topic it was ! I attempted it in my own way,perhaps I did justice with it.I appreciate your criticism but it's of no use for me as this outline isn't for mere practice;it can't be edited Thank you & pray for my success
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Love is my Shield,Truth is my Sword,Brain is my Crown,Smile is my Treasure and I'm a Queen; Quitters never win and Winners never quit..!!! |
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Thank you. Yes, it was right on! May we be successful. :-) |
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Brains Like Hearts go where they are appreciated Out Line:
Genius within: Social Apathy: Social Mobility Jeopardized: Opportunity Attracts: Reality is Disappointing: Discrimination Prevails: World No Different: No Place is batter The One’s Own: Need For inclusivity: Conclusion: “Nobody can become universal without being Local” Y.B. Yeast Plz comments i know it's not a traditional approach but still I'm Confident |
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Well here is a Funny thing....me n uniter both Misread the script (in ur View) and We both Passed :P
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It shows the marking style of the examiners, lolz. a number of passed candidates missed the script and still passed....
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anyways my topic wasnt education systems..i dint write on it but i did make its outline ...actually i made outlines for 2 topics n then decided to go for "brains like hearts go where they r appreciated" |
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