Utility of intelligence and human survival.

here is my precis please check it and comment
precis; Education and morality
The contemporary man should discover use of intelligence for service of love and kindness. The human training should include empathic capacity development. By this way social morality and chances of survival can increase. It is challenge for educators and educational institutions to train morally. Traditionally religion was custodian of social morality. But their failure resulted in God is dead theological rheoteric. The powerful men believe machiavellianism in their decision; power is morality, morality is power which increases the chance of nuclear devastation. We hope educators have capacity, commitment and time to instill morality in human intelligence. Ways must be found in human training to give assurance to love, security to be kind and integrity for functional empathy

Easy one than previous paper....except idioms all others are marks fetching questions.

My title was :

[B]"Instrumentalizing moral-sensitive intelligence for societal welfare : A challenge for Educational Agencies "
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kindly comment .......

[QUOTE=nisma khan;695250][B][U]education without maorality is casuality[/U][/B]
sounds funny to me[/QUOTE]

Well you endeavored a bit,hope your precise-content went gud....
i am confused at the lengthy topic of my precise:


My title was :

[B]"Instrumentalizing moral-sensitive intelligence for societal welfare : A challenge for Educational Agencies "
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kindly comment .......

[QUOTE=Guria SNT;708802]here is my precis please check it and comment
precis; Education and morality
The contemporary man should discover use of intelligence for service of love and kindness. The human training should include empathic capacity development. By this way social morality and chances of survival can increase. It is challenge for educators and educational institutions to train morally. Traditionally religion was custodian of social morality. But their failure resulted in God is dead theological rheoteric. The powerful men believe machiavellianism in their decision; power is morality, morality is power which increases the chance of nuclear devastation. We hope educators have capacity, commitment and time to instill morality in human intelligence. Ways must be found in human training to give assurance to love, security to be kind and integrity for functional empathy[/QUOTE]

Well the first three to four sentences were very apt and brilliantly laid out....However,starting from the traditional role of religion to the nuclear devastation and then including hope are things that are just average and kind of exact copied out things,without any deliberate editing or conveying the essence........But hope,the examiner gets impressed by your first few lines!!

[QUOTE=abbas khan 119;708774]Utility of intelligence and human survival.[/QUOTE]

Well very commendable title,i must say.......you just hit the bulls' eye........simple,short and comprehensive !! Best of luck

My precis title
 

i don't remember but it was "Institutionalizing morality" or "Institutionalize the Morality"

Precise Title
 

Human Intelligence and Humanity

Plz do comment

[QUOTE=sarmad5;712661]Human Intelligence and Humanity

Plz do comment[/QUOTE]

[B] Although these were the key words,yet there should have been an expression connecting these two! Stil,it's ok :) Best of luck :)

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[QUOTE=Javed Ahmed Nizamani;712617]i don't remember but it was "Institutionalizing morality" or "Institutionalize the Morality"[/QUOTE]

Institutionalizing Morality is a thing far-fetched,as it would otherwise mean to induce morality in institutions,rather than creating institutional framework,based on morality or rather than devising any instrumentality,by the institutions to utilize human intelligence for societal welfare.......So,this confusion arose because your title was too short to imply any specific meaning.Anyways,hope the examiner understands the right meaning you wanted to express with the few words in your title.

Thanks for the comment
 

Oxford advanced defines the word "institutionalize" as, "to make sth become part of an organized system, society or culture, so that it is considered normal". From above definition "institutionalizing morality" means making morality teaching a part of institutions in organized way. This means I am right. I think main theme of passage was morality teaching all the rest was supporting points. Since Religion has failed in teaching morality, it was the duty of modern institutions to induce morality in members of society otherwise excessive materialism will annihilate present civilization.

I didn't disagree with what you intended to write: I thought of it in another sense,given the generalization in your title.But indeed,it was a very adeptly conceived of .....
Am surprised why no one has passed any kinda remarks(gud/bad) on my title(aforesaid).......And it's me who has been doing all the job for everyone :d

[QUOTE=My title was :
"Instrumentalizing moral-sensitive intelligence for societal welfare : A challenge for Educational Agencies " kindly comment .......

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Well bro, your title is impressive and to the point, but at the same time, it is a little bit lengthy as well.
Now, as quite a lot of time has passed of exam, prayers will be of value more than any thing else. So pray for yourself and for us also.