@ Mortal sin
 

Bro, You are right that in essay paper "its all about your command over English language and its all about how u can produce a good writing out of something u virtually don't know about" but it doesn't mean that you write something out of the topic, you have to stick to the concerned topic. If it was only the test of good writing skills then FPSC might ask in paper " Write on any topic of your interest an essay of 4000 words" pir topics dainai ke zarurat he nahe the..
Anyways congrats on your success and all the best for your psychological and in interview.

@vet doctor. Yes here i agree with ur point :-) but uniter was not completeley out of context in that outline either so critisizing exainers is also not the right thing to do :-) and thanx for the wishes brother :-)

good work
 

its beautifully written..good luck

[QUOTE=engr.Mansoor;413022]Please check my start and ending of Essay (Energy Crisis) and let me know whether it was worth good or not.
"Student with a pen looking at his book in dark room, Childs weeping with their mothers fanning them with hands, an unending queue of vehicles and humans on petrol and CNG stations, a fierce crowd burning tyres on road; ready to kill or be killed' protesting. Patients crying with pain cursing hot weather and Govt. This is neither a trailer of an action movie nor an excerpt from a novel. This is the true picture of world seventh Nuclear power, one of the richest country in coal and gas reserves-Pakistan which is facing the severe energy crisis of the history."
This was my start of essay
In the end I gave optimistic vision and ended my essay by Robert Frost quote
"The woods are lovely, dark and deep,
But I have the promises to keep.
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep."

Please analyze and let me know.
Regards
Mansoor Arshad Khattak.[/QUOTE]

[COLOR=black][FONT=Verdana]A unique and adventures start. Captivating.[/FONT][/COLOR]

[QUOTE=TheUniter;432434]Senior, comments please.


[CENTER][B][U][SIZE=4]A critical analysis of the Education systems in Pakistan.[/SIZE][/U][/B][/CENTER]

“Next in importance to freedom and justice is the idea of popular education without which neither freedom nor justice can be maintained.” (A. Garfield)

[B]Introduction[/B]
[B]Importance[/B]
[B]Critical analysis:[/B]
1. Infrastructure
2. Poverty
3. Corruption
4. Lack of check and balance
5. Obsolete curricula
6. Privatization
7. No merit in appointment
8. Political intervention
9. Law and order problem
10. Tribalism
11. Lack of funds
12. Low budget allocated
13. Apathy to female education
14. Poor adult education
15. Attitude of indifference
16. Politicization
17. Lack of research
18. Poor state of higher education
19. Impact of disasters
20. Neglected technical education
21. Unfair exam system
22. Inequality
23. High dropout
24. Feudalism
[B]Impacts:[/B]
1. Unemployment
2. Extremism
3. Terrorism
4. Poor economic condition
5. Political instability
6. Social chaos
[B]Suggestions:[/B]
1. Check and balance
2. Implementation
3. Good governance
4. Effective planning and management
5. Role of media
6. Standardized primary education
7. Revision of curricula
8. Funding by NGOs, Universities and Govt
9. Technical education
10. Increased access to education
11. Merit based appointments
12. Education without politics
13. Female education should be paid attention along with adult education
[B]Conclusion[/B][/QUOTE]

“Next in importance to freedom and justice is the idea of popular education without which neither freedom nor justice can be maintained.” (A. Garfield)

[COLOR=black][FONT=Verdana]The best quote to break the ice.[/FONT][/COLOR]

hello everyone

i have yried to make an outline of the topic democracy is a culture rather than a
process

please check it and guide.


intro
definition of democracy
importance of democracy
democracy a culture, not just a process
state in pakistan
causes and consequences
suggestions to prevail this culture
conclusion

[QUOTE=HIRA ZAHRAH;544402]hello everyone

i have yried to make an outline of the topic democracy is a culture rather than a
process

please check it and guide.


intro
definition of democracy
importance of democracy
democracy a culture, not just a process
state in pakistan
causes and consequences
suggestions to prevail this culture
conclusion[/QUOTE]
Well, elaborate it .
These are not outlines this is precis of outlines. :)
not fine play properly with outlines.

how to make outlines in essay plz someone guide me its my first experiance :unsure:

hello everybody !
I am new to CSS and confused to achieve this marathon, i have a weak background of education in english, so guys please guide me to improve my grammatical english and suggest me a realiable book as well??
and the other question is how much time CSS demands daily?
and what about screening test have been decided yet?

@ The uniter
 

Critical analysis of Education systems in Pakistan.
I do not conform to the pattern of your essay.Actually the thing needed in this essay is the comparative analysis of prevalent education systems in Pakistan. In my opinion its outline may be;
1 Introduction: Education a colonial legacy in Pakistan
2 Prevalent education systems in Pakistan
a Public Sector Education system
b Private sector Education system
c Public-private partnership- SEMI-government education system
3 comparative analysis of these systems- their comparative merits and demerits and their delivery in current and historical perspective
4 Formal education system
5 Informal education system
6 Suggestions/personal opinion and expert opinion
7 Conclusion.

Thanks for sharing sir, is it necessary to write on all the above topics or we have some kind of choice to avail?