Essay Paper 2017
 

[QUOTE=hmsaad;1031073]Kindly evaluate #10 essay attempted in 2017



1) Introduction

Although controversies will arise when one seeks a break from conformity,but non- conformity is necessary for reaching the goal of self actualization,for human progress and to gain one’s rights.



2) Reasons why one should not should chose safe haven of conformity



a. Non conformity is the nature

i. A dialogue between a wave and shore

ii. God does not change those who do not cange themselves



b. Non conformity is necessary for self-actualization

i. To reach Iqbal khudi one should carve one’s own way (one cannot reach one’s destiny by treading on other’s path)



c. Non conformity is necessary formanking progress

i. Politivcal progress(American progressive movement)

ii. Social progress(feminists movement)

iii. Scientfici progress(corpencius break away from church’s notion that earth sun reveolves around earth)



d. Non conformity is necessary to preach the truth

i. Socrates

ii. Prophet Muhammad(Pbuh)



e. Non-conformity is necessary to unfetter oneself from usurpation of one’s rights

i. American civil rights movement

ii. Pakistan freedom movement



3) Recommendations(how one should non conform or requireemnt)

a. Be a change yourself

b. Moral courage

c. One other point



4) Conclusion (remain hopeful for results of non conformity ---)[/QUOTE]



You have attempted it very well. Relevant, simple, relatively error-free. If you are sure that you avoided glaring grammatical mistakes and kept your essay in line with this outline, I am 99% sure you will make it through (if fate doesn't turn against you).

Contrasting your essay with others who have written on the same topic, your essay appears most 'pass-able'.

P. S

You have very amply addressed "why one should be a non-conformist". Had you added a few points addressing "why one should not be a conformist", I would say your essay is a solid 100%. Let's hope for the best though. The examiner may not even notice this if your organisation and relevance catches his fancy from the outset.

[QUOTE=PartyPooper;1030375]I am a physician, graduated from one of the top public medical colleges, doing post-graduate residency in a public hospital. Took 13 and 15 attempts. Failed in essay.[/QUOTE]

Are you gearing up for ce-2018?

[QUOTE=saniam;1031124]Are you gearing up for ce-2018?[/QUOTE]



No.


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[QUOTE=PartyPooper;1031126]No.


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Why not? You have acquired excellent analytical skill on essay, why not use it for yourself? I really like your points on essays.

Essay Paper 2017
 

[QUOTE=saniam;1031131]Why not? You have acquired excellent analytical skill on essay, why not use it for yourself? I really like your points on essays.[/QUOTE]



I used it. Thrice. Failed twice.

Will go to Ireland if I fail again, to continue my practice of medicine there.


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[QUOTE=PartyPooper;1031134]I used it. Thrice. Failed twice.

Will go to Ireland if I fail again, to continue my practice of medicine there.


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You are awaiting result then. Best of luck for it or if not 'it' happens, then for future endeavours.

[QUOTE=saniam;1031137]You are awaiting result then. Best of luck for it or if not 'it' happens, then for future endeavours.[/QUOTE]



Thanks. Best wishes for your result as well. And good luck for the future attempts.


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[QUOTE=PartyPooper;1031097]You have attempted it very well. Relevant, simple, relatively error-free. If you are sure that you avoided glaring grammatical mistakes and kept your essay in line with this outline, I am 99% sure you will make it through (if fate doesn't turn against you).

Contrasting your essay with others who have written on the same topic, your essay appears most 'pass-able'.

P. S

You have very amply addressed "why one should be a non-conformist". Had you added a few points addressing "why one should not be a conformist", I would say your essay is a solid 100%. Let's hope for the best though. The examiner may not even notice this if your organisation and relevance catches his fancy from the outset.[/QUOTE]


Partypooper Bro I am so much thankful to you for your's such deep analysis

[QUOTE=PartyPooper;1031162]Thanks. Best wishes for your result as well. And good luck for the future attempts.


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Thank you

Evaluate my essay on feminism
 

Seniors Please evaluate my essay outlines on feminism which i attempted in css 2017 :). I have written what i could recall. positive criticism is welcome :)
BR
1. Introduction
2. Operationalizing constructs/concepts
a. feminism (theory and achievement)
b.(Third world (using the concept of development by IR, third second and
first worlds were explained in terms of definition and examples)
c. issue
d. what does this topic mean?
3.History of feminism
a. First Wave (definition scope and achievements with time period)
b. Second Wave
c. Third Wave
4. arguments
a. Common feminist problems in "all worlds" (harassment, glass ceiling etc)
b. UN focus and the organizations
c. Inclusion of gender equality, as a SDG goal, for all countries of the world)
d. Focus of the Third wave of feminism/postmodern feminism
5.Opposing arguments
a. Focusing only on the history and proposition of the second wave of feminism (only on white-women)
b. Availability of more rights like education
Mechanisms in first world to address issues of feminism
6.Countering the opposing arguments
a. Mechanisms to address the feminists issues in the Thirld world
b. Information influence theory
Applying information influence theory to counter the argument to
those who focus only on second wave of feminism
7. Conclusion