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Originally Posted by sarfaraz shami
Energy crisis is due to higher prices. Pakistan has capacity to generate electricity more then its demand. Only reason is higher prices of the petroleum. Because it pressurizes the Balance of Payments. Moreover Government has giver subsidy on electricity, so higher the prices of petroleum higher the subsidy is. Now one question I ask to you,
Why Government releases funds after riots ? What is purpose of that ? When there is no capacity where funds utilized ?
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All these points form the heading of CIRCULAR DEBT.
U posted that everybody wrote point of 'Circular Debt' then do u want people to repeat points n paragraphs in Essay?
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Nice attempt
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Social and economic securities of women in Islam
1)Introduction
2)Status of women before the emergence of Islam
3)Islam had revolutionized the status of women
4)Social uplift of women in islam - Regarding status
- As Mother
- As spouse
- As female child
- Equal status in religious obligation
- Regarding Education
- Social security-Husbands,fathers and brothers are made guardians
- Merital Rights
- Marriage of choice
- Right of Khula
- Right to re-marry
- Political rights
- Legal and civil rights
5)Economic securities - RIght of inheritance
- Dower as a religious obligation
- Right of maintenance
- Exemption from financial responsibilities
- Right of property
- Professional choices
6)Examples from the life of Prophet(PBUH)
7)Examples from the life of Sahaba(RA)
8)Propaganda of west against Muslim women
9)Conclusion
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Nice Outline...Please let me know your marks whenever you get the result..  But I wish you get your mark sheet after the interview.
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Wednesday, October 03, 2012
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Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar
The most interesting thing is that I started my essay with my own poem I wish I could mention my name
The Suffering soul in the scientific age
Introduction
In pieces my soul has torn,
But I have no time to mourn,
Time is passing and passing on,
Life's vehicle is buzzing its horn,
Polluted soul and body deserve not,
To face the one who lives in heart,
Hatred,malice,envy and lies,
on my soul like buboes rise,
Would that I were a baby on my death,
With a pure heart and sacred breath!
by Farrah Zafar
- Materialism is the death of spirituality
- Man's material progress versus moral decline
"Man has looked into the volcanoes,dived into the ocean,perforated the earth,winged its flight in the skies.This material progress has led him to ditch of moral deprivation.etc
- What is soul and its importance
- soul is immortal,body is mortal
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Keats says, "Beauty is truth,truth beauty,that is all ye know on earth and all ye need to know
- description of soul In literary works
Faustus cries out for his soul,fears eternal damnation
John Proctor in "The Crucible" says, I have given you my name,leave me my soul.
Effects of soul's suffering
On individual level
- Frustration,depression,despondency
- examples of two men belonging to this scientific age
One who seduced female dead bodies
One who raped small children
On Family Level
- example of western countries
old homes,Orphanages (having children who don't know the names of their fathers)
- Youngsters have no sense of direction,they are confused because of weak
family institutions
On National and International level
example ,nuclear bombing on Nagasaki
- Material progress has made man hollow inwardly.
Seamus Heaney has depicted well the hollowness of modern man in his poem, "The Hollow Men"
Poem by Prabhakar bargurde
Comrade
Don't be in hurry for revolution
you are still very small.
Your ability to resist
atrocities,boycotts and rapes,
that go on every moment
has become nil,
Comrade !
Tomorrow's dawn is yet to rise,
sleep undisturbed until then...
Reasons
1)Materialim
- it has deprived man of joy,love,affection and harmony.
- he runs after material progress,therefore neglects his soul
2)Lust for power
- man wants to attain power by hook or crook,he ignores his soul
"Power corrupts man and absolute power corrupts absoulutely"
example of character of Kurtz by Joseph Conrad.
He cries out,fearing damnation of his soul,
"The horror ! The horror"
3)astrayed from religion
- all religions support love and kindness for humanity.People of this scientific
age are astrayed from the way of religion,that is why,their souls are suffering.
- The sufi poets emphasized on purgation of soul but their messages have been
ignored.
"Kadi Mann apnay wich tu warrya he nae"
You never introspected your heart.
- Generally all prophets and specifically Holy prophet (PBUH) laid emphasis on
love for mankind.
"If one kills a man with no reason,one kills the whole humanity"
Solution
- Method of Introspection should be adopted to purify soul
- Spirituality should be focused rather materialism
- Love and peace should be spread.
- Teachings of religions generally and Islam specifically should be followed
- The only food for soul is self control and prayers
ہے دل کے لیے موت مشینوں کی حکومت
احساس مروت کو کچل دیتے ہیں آلات
(The reign of machines is the death of heart.The instruments crush the feelings of courtesy and kindness.)
Please comment
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Great work!
I would like to voice some thoughts in regards to your outline.
• Materialism is the death of spirituality: Unless materialism is clearly defined, this statement tends to ignore the importance of the material world. Islam has laid great emphasis on the material world: nature is a source of knowledge in the Quran.
I think spiritualism and materialism ought to run parallel to each other. One should compliment the other.
• Truth beautifies soul: How are you associating the truth with spirituality in this context?
One who seduced female dead bodies; One who raped small children: We cannot restrain that argument exclusively to the scientific age. Similar examples to exist prior to the scientific age.
• it has deprived man of joy,love,affection and harmony: It would be appropriate to provide a few functional definitions of the terms since there are numerous measures of joy and happiness - material wealth; friends; intellectual satisfaction; etc.
• all religions support love and kindness for humanity.People of this scientific
age are astrayed from the way of religion,that is why,their souls are suffering: Again, this equally applies to the times prior to the scientific age. For instance, the crusades; the cult of the assassins, etc.
• Spirituality should be focused rather materialism: I would say materialism should supplement spiritualism.
• Teachings of religions generally and Islam specifically should be followed: I think it would be good to specify which teachings are the most basic and fundamental – Islam is the official religion in Saudi Arabia & Iran.
Thanks!
This was a great attempt!
Best of luck! :-)
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Great work!
I would like to voice some thoughts in regards to your outline.
• Materialism is the death of spirituality: Unless materialism is clearly defined, this statement tends to ignore the importance of the material world. Islam has laid great emphasis on the material world: nature is a source of knowledge in the Quran.
I think spiritualism and materialism ought to run parallel to each other. One should compliment the other.
• Truth beautifies soul: How are you associating the truth with spirituality in this context?
One who seduced female dead bodies; One who raped small children: We cannot restrain that argument exclusively to the scientific age. Similar examples to exist prior to the scientific age.
• it has deprived man of joy,love,affection and harmony: It would be appropriate to provide a few functional definitions of the terms since there are numerous measures of joy and happiness - material wealth; friends; intellectual satisfaction; etc.
• all religions support love and kindness for humanity.People of this scientific
age are astrayed from the way of religion,that is why,their souls are suffering: Again, this equally applies to the times prior to the scientific age. For instance, the crusades; the cult of the assassins, etc.
• Spirituality should be focused rather materialism: I would say materialism should supplement spiritualism.
• Teachings of religions generally and Islam specifically should be followed: I think it would be good to specify which teachings are the most basic and fundamental – Islam is the official religion in Saudi Arabia & Iran.
Thanks!
This was a great attempt!
Best of luck! :-)
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It would lead to long discussion which I can't afford for time being so in short,
1)Materialism(regarding topic) clearly means over- lust for materialistic pursuits,the one that deprives man of love,affection and kindness.The one that has turned him into machine.
2)An unseen topic it was ! I attempted it in my own way,perhaps I did justice with it.I appreciate your criticism but it's of no use for me as this outline isn't for mere practice;it can't be edited
Thank you & pray for my success
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Quitters never win and Winners never quit..!!!
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Thursday, October 04, 2012
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Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar
It would lead to long discussion which I can't afford for time being so in short,
1)Materialism(regarding topic) clearly means over- lust for materialistic pursuits,the one that deprives man of love,affection and kindness.The one that has turned him into machine.
2)An unseen topic it was ! I attempted it in my own way,perhaps I did justice with it.I appreciate your criticism but it's of no use for me as this outline isn't for mere practice;it can't be edited
Thank you & pray for my success 
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Hi,
Thank you.
Yes, it was right on!
May we be successful. :-)
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Wednesday, October 10, 2012
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Brains Like Hearts go where they are appreciated Out Line:
Genius within:
Social Apathy:
Social Mobility Jeopardized:
Opportunity Attracts:
Reality is Disappointing:
Discrimination Prevails:
World No Different:
No Place is batter The One’s Own:
Need For inclusivity:
Conclusion:
“Nobody can become universal without being Local” Y.B. Yeast
Plz comments i know it's not a traditional approach but still I'm Confident
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Wednesday, October 10, 2012
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Originally Posted by Fadslee
Here is the outline which i wrote in the exam. I wrote 19 pages. Seniors are requested to comment whether it can get passing marks or otherwise.
A critical analysis of education systems in pakistan
Outline
1. Introduction
2. Forms of education
a. Formal educaion
i. Schools
ii. Colleges
iii. Universities
iv. Other recognised intitutes
b. Informal education
i. Distance educaion
ii. unrecognised madarsahs
iii. educaion at home and society
3. Importance of education
4. Defects/shortcoming of eduction systems in pakistan
a. Disorinted system
b. No uniformity
c. No check and balance
d. lack of financial resources
e. lack of infrastucture
f. No research and development
g. Less training facilities to teachers
h. Neglect of agriculture section
i. Mismatch of syllabus
j. Poor examination system
5. Outcome of poor education system
a. low literacy rate
b. lack of knowledge
c. high drop out rate
d. low agriculture and industrial output
e. less econmic growth
g. increase in poverty
h. increase in unemployment
i. increase in crime
6. Remedial Measures to improve education system
a. Government steps
i. ministry of education
ii. HEC
iii. NEVTEC
b. increase in fund allocation
c. development of infrastructure
d. Establishment of new education institutions
e. Uniformity in education
f. more research and development
g. training facilities to teachers
h. Emphasis on agri and industrial education
i. revamping of syllabus
j. effective controls
k. reforms in examination system.
7. Conclusion
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I got 41 marks with this outline
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Thursday, October 18, 2012
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Originally Posted by Ainuddin Kibzai
Sorry to let you know but you have totally misread the script just like numerous other aspirants.
It was about the Education SystemSSSSS of Pakistan, not the Education SYsteMMMMMM.
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Well here is a Funny thing....me n uniter both Misread the script (in ur View) and We both Passed :P
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Thursday, October 18, 2012
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It shows the marking style of the examiners, lolz. a number of passed candidates missed the script and still passed....
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Thursday, October 18, 2012
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It shows the marking style of the examiners, lolz. a number of passed candidates missed the script and still passed....
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Sir jee, with due respect ....all good teachers of essay keep saying one thing that 90% are unable to understand and often "misread"..and it is "ye English essay ka paper hai....knowledge ka nahi...knowledge baqi 11 subjects mei check hojati hai....its all about ur command over english language and its all about how u can produce a good writing out of something u virtually dont know about"
anyways my topic wasnt education systems..i dint write on it but i did make its outline ...actually i made outlines for 2 topics n then decided to go for "brains like hearts go where they r appreciated"
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