Help needed on Study proposal
 

I want to apply for Turkish scholarships.Along with other requirements they want a (Letter of intent may include, - your spesific reasons to study in Türkiye )

I write like this.


Turkey is a country with fast growing economy. It gives the opportunity of high quality education with rich field of choice. After thorough study of Turkish institutes for science and technology, and the dynamic and diverse curriculum its offer, I am interested in a research career in Turkey. It will be highly beneficial for me to do my studies under the supervision of highly qualified professors and well equipped lab. The university-industry linkage of Turkish Universities will give me exposure to fast transient scientific environment and will help me to achieve excellence in my research work.

Kindly suggest changes so that i can write a high quality para..

[QUOTE=omama;431900]It will be highly beneficial for me to do my studies under the supervision of highly qualified professors and well equipped lab.[/QUOTE]

I'll suggest you to replace above paragraph with this new one:

It will be highly beneficial for me to pursue research studies to gain expertise and advanced skills by using improved research capabilities/facilities available at the world class universities of Turkey.

I am also recipient of [B]Turkish Govt's ONE YEAR Fellowship[/B]. Foe which program you are applying? and in which field?

thanx alimallah..
i did my undergrade in Electrical engineering and now i m interested in Electronics and control systems.

[QUOTE=omama;431922]thanx alimallah..
i did my undergrade in Electrical engineering and now i m interested in Electronics and control systems.[/QUOTE]

OK, Thats nice, wish you best of luck. Have you prepared Research proposal? Research Proposal must contain few important things like: Introduction or your topic, then aims and objectives, Methodology/Research Plan, Scope of the proposed study, etc.

i m working on it but they only want Letter of Intent which must contain why do u want to study in Turkey,About proposed field and future planing. I have written it but was confused in the posted para.
By the way wat are u studing n which univ....?

[QUOTE=omama;431946]i m working on it but they only want Letter of Intent which must contain why do u want to study in Turkey, About proposed field and future planing. I have written it but was confused in the posted para.
By the way wat are u studing n which univ....?[/QUOTE]

Ok then you must submit it. DO u want to pursue Ph.D degree there? or just M.S? I am final year student of Ph.D in Analytical chemistry at S.U Jamshoro. I have received the award letter of the Turkish Govt scholarship and Insha'allah after attempting CSS-2013, I am planning to avail that scholarship granted to me for selcuk University Konya, Turkey.

I have submit the application.PhD i my long term goal

how can i apply aswell?

visit foriegn funded scholarship section of Hec website.