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Share ur Essay outline of PMS 2011
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[U]PMS 2011 Essay paper:[/U] Write a comprehensive essay (4000-5000 words) on any one of the topics listed below.Make sure you use correct form of discourse for the topic you choose-viz expository,argumentative,persuasive,descriptive,narrative. 1. Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. What is your opinion ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 2. Independence from parents is essential if Pakistani youth want to be able to stand on their own feet. 3.Describe your favorite vacation spot.Use at least three of the five senses(taste,touch,sound,sight,smell) in your description. 4. Your fist day at a new college. 5. Your fist day at a new job. 6. Your first visit to another country(or to a large city). 7. All citizens should be required by law to vote.Discuss. 8. Privacy is not the most important right.Give your opinion against this statement. 9. Dieting makes people fat. 10. Write about an experience that shows that we should be careful of what we wish for. [U]P.S: Please Participate... [/U][/COLOR][/B] :) |
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7. All citizens should be required by law to vote.Discuss. My outline was:[/U] -What is the meaning of Vote System: -Here I described vote system that it is the constitutional right of every citizen to caste their vote and to elect his own choice of representative then I discussed that in pakistan, it means a person who has 18 years age then he has constitutional right to vote and to use this power for the best interest of the state. - Then I discussed that in almost every state, there is democratic form of govt and people elect there representative by casting their votes. Then I said, casting of votes and democracy are almost the same thing and vote system is the pre requisite of democracy. I also quoted one quotation of the Abraham Lincoln "democracy is the govt of the people, by the people and for the people"... -Then I discussed the using of vote system and the election/constitutional system of India, Germany, US , UK & China (each one in small and separate paragraph). - I also said that vote system is also prescribed by the Islam and has presented the selection of Hazrat Usman(RA) as example and said that It was almost the same as of the present vote system. -Then I discussed the problems and shortcoming of Vote system i.e: -No Change bcoz of less illiteracy and no value/importance of vote. -Traditional elites and their vested interest. -Lack of communication. -Poverty -Wrong use of vote -Selling of votes bcz of poverty, ignorance and no value of vote. -Wrong attitude/performance of the Leaders and as a result no hope of masses from their leaders. -Then I said that this is the main reason that people giving no value/importance to their votes and bcz of above mentioned problems the casting of votes in Pakistan and all developing countries in every election is less than 50 percent... -Then I suggested remedies: -Media should play their active role in building awareness and they should go to coverage in rural and all other areas. -International community should have to play their active role by sending their representatives and by monitoring all the process of election. -Pakistan election commission hav to do alot of improvement in their performance. Need to check up the whole process and to enhance transparency. -Education & awareness amongst masses. -Serious work to alleviate poverty. -Also the most important those areas where citizens are not given their constitutional right. The concerned authority should need to take active strong notice and should hav to give them constitutional right of casting their votes e.g in tribal areas Women are not allowed to caste their votes; the Govt & concerned authority need to take strong action and hav to giv this constitutional right to the tribal women etc... - and last but not the least, at the end I said that "Inspite of some shortcomings, vote system is the best system in the present time . We should remove all the shortcoming which are present in the vote system. then I quote Imran Khan "We need to bring change by ballet not by bullets". ........................................................................................................ [U]P.S:[/U] My outline was and data was almost the same but presentation was not not upto mark... Allah give me just 40 marks bass...please... Ya Allah help us plz... Prayers for all of you.... [/B][/COLOR] |
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@ Prestigious Thanks a lot dear for ur positive response and support ….. @ ur essay outline dear dont worry INSHALLAH you will pass with flying colours if you you have mentioned such points and have good discussion on them... our prayers are with u and with all friends and forum members... Dear I studies population dynamics in my last semester in Phd course work in Dec, 2010…… In that we studied Land use changes in which the deforestation and urbanization are the main topics…… Dear that subject helped me a lot in my essay paper of PMS …… And INSHALLAH I will share my outline after the Iftari by recalling my memory…. @ ALL Plz also share ur essay outline Best Luck to all; Tc and WS |
we should be careful for what we are wishing.. i think it was last essay among the 10. i didn't gave any outline but what i remember is that i described some experiences of history and present world scenarios arguing in favor and against of wishes , which may help us at some time and if we ant careful then it may bring destruction to us.
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7. All citizens should be required by law to vote.Discuss. My outline was:[/U] -What is the meaning of Vote System: -Here I described vote system that it is the constitutional right of every citizen to caste their vote and to elect his own choice of representative then I discussed that in pakistan, it means a person who has 18 years age then he has constitutional right to vote and to use this power for the best interest of the state. - Then I discussed that in almost every state, there is democratic form of govt and people elect there representative by casting their votes. Then I said, casting of votes and democracy are almost the same thing and vote system is the pre requisite of democracy. I also quoted one quotation of the Abraham Lincoln "democracy is the govt of the people, by the people and for the people"... -Then I discussed the using of vote system and the election/constitutional system of India, Germany, US , UK & China (each one in small and separate paragraph). - I also said that vote system is also prescribed by the Islam and has presented the selection of Hazrat Usman(RA) as example and said that It was almost the same as of the present vote system. -Then I discussed the problems and shortcoming of Vote system i.e: -No Change bcoz of less illiteracy and no value/importance of vote. -Traditional elites and their vested interest. -Lack of communication. -Poverty -Wrong use of vote -Selling of votes bcz of poverty, ignorance and no value of vote. -Wrong attitude/performance of the Leaders and as a result no hope of masses from their leaders. -Then I said that this is the main reason that people giving no value/importance to their votes and bcz of above mentioned problems the casting of votes in Pakistan and all developing countries in every election is less than 50 percent... -Then I suggested remedies: -Media should play their active role in building awareness and they should go to coverage in rural and all other areas. -International community should have to play their active role by sending their representatives and by monitoring all the process of election. -Pakistan election commission hav to do alot of improvement in their performance. Need to check up the whole process and to enhance transparency. -Education & awareness amongst masses. -Serious work to alleviate poverty. -Also the most important those areas where citizens are not given their constitutional right. The concerned authority should need to take active strong notice and should hav to give them constitutional right of casting their votes e.g in tribal areas Women are not allowed to caste their votes; the Govt & concerned authority need to take strong action and hav to giv this constitutional right to the tribal women etc... - and last but not the least, at the end I said that "Inspite of some shortcomings, vote system is the best system in the present time . We should remove all the shortcoming which are present in the vote system. then I quote Imran Khan "We need to bring change by ballet not by bullets". ........................................................................................................ [U]P.S:[/U] My outline was and data was almost the same but presentation was not not upto mark... Allah give me just 40 marks bass...please... Ya Allah help us plz... Prayers for all of you.... [/B][/COLOR][/QUOTE] good attempt according to me and wish you and all the members a nice score |
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Dear here is My Outline of PMS- 2011-Essay Paper
Topic: 1. Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world's forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. I started my essay like this…… “The Earth does not belongs to man, Man belongs to earth. He is merely a strand in it (web). Whatever he does to it, He does to himself. ” Outline: • Introduction of topic • Various environmental resources --Soil --Water --Land --Mountains --Forests --Air --Deserts etc • Importance of forests / forests as national assets • Significance of forests • Deforestation / destruction of forests • Various factors responsible for forests destruction --Legislative factors --Economic factors --Agricultural factors --Social factors --Push and pull factors --Political factors --Technological factors --Demographic factors etc • Causes of forests destruction --Poor legislation --INADEQUATE monitoring and evaluation system --Increased population --Improper planning and research --Mis guided policies --Improper implementation --Lack of agricultural land --Urbanization --Inadequate land tenure systems --Food shortage --Lack of infrastructure --Agricultural extensification --Agri intensification --Export incentives, export pull factors --Increased creativity and advancement --National resources exploration --Demand for natural resources by population pressure --Rural land changes --Lack of data, information, and quality data regarding forests • Impacts of forests destruction --Ruthless destruction of forests --air pollution --water pollution --Green house effect --Global warming --Soil erosion --Land slides --Melting of glaciers and polar ice --Increased sea level --Loss of agricultural land due to sea level --Wild species extinction --Loss of coastal and beach margins and boundaries --Loss of recreational places --Loss of low land places --Lack of fertile land --Interference and disturbances in natural ecosystem --Increased emissions of gases --Increased waste production --Increased water, soil, land, air pollution --Changes in weather pattern --Increased freq of natural disasters like flood, tsunamis, land slides etc --Water contamination --Increase vector borne diseases --Loss to natural habitate --Changes in precipitation patterns --Inadequate rain fall --Loss of rain forests --Changes in agricultural patterns --Agricultural extensification --Agri- intensification --Deplete soil nutrients recycling capacity --Land fragmentation --Pull factors for migration; and has its own consequences like - Food, - Water, - Infrastructure - Income, - Land resources etc • Suggestions and recommendations to reduce, prevent and control forests destruction --Proper and informed polices making --Efficient and effective relevant legislation --Proper implementation of policies --Strong political will --Govt. commitment --Environmental sustainability education --Regular and adequate monitoring and evaluation --Research and education in environmental sciences, geology, and Geography etc --Change of consumption pattern of population --Alternate dependency on natural resources --Safeguard of national interests --Local support and collaboration --International market support and cooperation --Montreal protocol 1987 --Kyoto protocol etc --Check on Technological innovations --Arable land management systems --Sustainable agricultural use changes --Sustainable consumption --Extensive study on human dimension of changes --Importance of forests context --Inter-disciplinary research promotion --Remote sensing i.e idea of COMMONS --Micro level studies at local/ national level --Macro level studies at international level --Stress on careful intervening factors eg... --Technology --Institutions --Policy context --Cultural values and norms --Human induced environmental impacts --public awareness regarding deforestation --Educate reforestation --celebrating various world nominated days like --World earth day --World water day --Environmental day etc --Costs and benefits of the use of COMMONS --Various incentives not to degrade the natural resources • And finally Conclusion with the following sentence along with importance and significance of forests, with a role for the prevention and control of ruthless de-forestation…….. “Either We Cease the Movement and Define History, Or Let The Movement to Define Our Destiny.” ALL are requested to evaluate my essay outline…. Best luck and wishes to all Tc and ws |
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I attempted the The First Essay related to Forests as it is my subject. But, I didn't have the idea that an outline is a pre-requisite for a good essay. I attempted the essay to the best of my knowledge and tried to minimize the grammatical errors and tried to give it a well formatted look. Yet, the problem was related to 4000-5000 words requirement for the essay which made me nervous on the very onset and it troubled us through out the essay. Let us hope it goes well in marking. Sorry, can't share the outline as I didn't give one.
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And I never thought that not giving an outline would prove so fatal for me :(.
One should learn from one's mistakes and I dare say that a powerful and well balanced outline can ensure success in Essay paper with flying colors as most of the paper checker do not go the length of the paper but just check outline, introduction and conclusion. I have tried my level best to overcome these shortcomings in CSS. The result is in Allah's domain . |
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: ) All the best for CSS12 written result... Inshallah you will rock this time... : ) [U] P.S: [/U] [U]@My essay:[/U] I got 42 haha but failed in public admin. only... dil jallee [/B][/COLOR] |
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