Friday, March 29, 2024
07:22 PM (GMT +5)

Go Back   CSS Forums > KPK Public Service Commission > KPKPMS > Past Papers > 2010

Reply Share Thread: Submit Thread to Facebook Facebook     Submit Thread to Twitter Twitter     Submit Thread to Google+ Google+    
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Search this Thread
  #11  
Old Wednesday, January 19, 2011
Habib orakzai's Avatar
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Jul 2008
Location: Islamabad/Peshawar
Posts: 159
Thanks: 57
Thanked 93 Times in 61 Posts
Habib orakzai will become famous soon enough
Default

well its really difficult to write 4000 words with healthy ideas on topics like first day at college or job etc. dont know whether one should write number of class rooms and bathrooms...lolxxx besides personel feelings, reasons to choose that college, and study environment.
__________________
"Man is never Prepared for examination".Put in your best and hope for the worst...
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to Habib orakzai For This Useful Post:
H. R. Akhunzada (Thursday, January 20, 2011)
  #12  
Old Thursday, January 20, 2011
prestigious's Avatar
MARWAT
Medal of Appreciation: Awarded to appreciate member's contribution on forum. (Academic and professional achievements do not make you eligible for this medal) - Issue reason:
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Student Valley : )
Posts: 896
Thanks: 1,614
Thanked 1,655 Times in 832 Posts
prestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud of
Default @ English essay paper

The paper seems very easy but there is much deepness and logic in selecting these topics. These topics has been selected after intensive thinking...
They want to check the creativity in writing and also the beauty of expression...
Prayers fr all...
__________________
Waseem Ullah Marwat
Reply With Quote
  #13  
Old Thursday, January 20, 2011
H. R. Akhunzada's Avatar
39th CTP (IG)
CSP Medal: Awarded to those Members of the forum who are serving CSP Officers - Issue reason: CE 2010 - Merit 236
 
Join Date: Jan 2010
Location: Islamabad
Posts: 96
Thanks: 297
Thanked 132 Times in 60 Posts
H. R. Akhunzada will become famous soon enoughH. R. Akhunzada will become famous soon enough
Smile

Quote:
Originally Posted by prestigious View Post
The paper seems very easy but there is much deepness and logic in selecting these topics. These topics has been selected after intensive thinking...
They want to check the creativity in writing and also the beauty of expression...
Prayers fr all...
Deep thinking my dear is not something you can do in a 3 hour paper... atleast not the deep thinking you are talking about. If a philosophical topic was the need why give almost four topics pointing at the same contextual material.The irony is the fact is how you'd justifiably write 2000 words let alone a 3000 word essay. Still in the same view how can ones essay be upto the mark of its use of correct discourse for the given topic chosen viz. expository, persuasive, argumentative, descriptive, narrative; as given in the instructions note?
It, by my regard was very immature on the part of the Commission.

@prestigious please dont take my argument as personal (for i qouted your post).... no hard feelings.... thanks for the prayers....good luck all
__________________
A fool can ask a wise man more questions than he can answer....
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to H. R. Akhunzada For This Useful Post:
Islaw Khan (Tuesday, February 15, 2011)
  #14  
Old Thursday, January 20, 2011
prestigious's Avatar
MARWAT
Medal of Appreciation: Awarded to appreciate member's contribution on forum. (Academic and professional achievements do not make you eligible for this medal) - Issue reason:
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Student Valley : )
Posts: 896
Thanks: 1,614
Thanked 1,655 Times in 832 Posts
prestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud ofprestigious has much to be proud of
Default

Quote:
Originally Posted by H. R. Akhunzada View Post
Deep thinking my dear is not something you can do in a 3 hour paper... atleast not the deep thinking you are talking about. If a philosophical topic was the need why give almost four topics pointing at the same contextual material.The irony is the fact is how you'd justifiably write 2000 words let alone a 3000 word essay. Still in the same view how can ones essay be upto the mark of its use of correct discourse for the given topic chosen viz. expository, persuasive, argumentative, descriptive, narrative; as given in the instructions note?
It, by my regard was very immature on the part of the Commission.

@prestigious please dont take my argument as personal (for i qouted your post).... no hard feelings.... thanks for the prayers....good luck all
@If a philosophical topic was the need why give almost four topics pointing at the same contextual material==> agree100 percent, and yeah ur points are also valid regarding "expository, persuasive, argumentative, descriptive, narrative; as given in the instructions note... "these things are not possible in most of the essay topics...
__________________
Waseem Ullah Marwat
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to prestigious For This Useful Post:
H. R. Akhunzada (Friday, January 21, 2011)
  #15  
Old Friday, January 21, 2011
Xeric's Avatar
Provincial Civil Service
Medal of Appreciation: Awarded to appreciate member's contribution on forum. (Academic and professional achievements do not make you eligible for this medal) - Issue reason: PMS / PCS Award: Serving PMS / PCS (BS 17) officers are eligible only. - Issue reason: Diligent Service Medal: Awarded upon completion of 5 years of dedicated services and contribution to the community. - Issue reason:
 
Join Date: Aug 2007
Posts: 2,639
Thanks: 430
Thanked 2,335 Times in 569 Posts
Xeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdomXeric is a bearer of wisdom
Default

The paper is seemingly easy and general topics but you will face problems to prolong it to 4k words. Furthermore, topic doesn't matter, examiner will check the paper according to the requirements of essay. It is not a paragraph writing or attempting a question of 20 marks. Let us wait for result.
__________________
No matter how fast i run or how far i go it wont escape me, pain, misery, emptiness.
Reply With Quote
  #16  
Old Friday, February 04, 2011
Junior Member
 
Join Date: May 2010
Posts: 6
Thanks: 0
Thanked 9 Times in 5 Posts
engrjawadshah1 is on a distinguished road
Default

one of my friend who after showing the essay paper to Dr abdul salam ,islamia college peshawar,quotes his comments . "es bande ko jis ne ye paper banaya hai es ko ulta latka do agar mere pas ye paper aye checking ki liye to me kisi ko pass nahi karon ga kiyun ki en topics pe essay sere se ban hi nahi sakta koi be student mujhe en topics pe essay bana k dikha de "
Reply With Quote
  #17  
Old Friday, February 04, 2011
The Manager's Avatar
Senior Member
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Peshawar/Malakand
Posts: 331
Thanks: 376
Thanked 151 Times in 109 Posts
The Manager will become famous soon enough
Default @PMS Essay

Dear frnds it was really pathatic bt keep in mind that there were only three essays to be selected by the candidates...1,7 & 10. remaining essays were just fr restriction of the choice and attempting one of those meanz sucide..... just think over the paper....
__________________
''Always bear in mind that your own resolution to succeed is more important than any one thing''
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to The Manager For This Useful Post:
Waqas77 (Monday, September 09, 2013)
  #18  
Old Friday, February 04, 2011
Banned
 
Join Date: May 2010
Posts: 218
Thanks: 79
Thanked 129 Times in 102 Posts
Sheeraz S is on a distinguished road
Thumbs down

Quote:
Originally Posted by engrjawadshah1 View Post
one of my friend who after showing the essay paper to Dr abdul salam ,islamia college peshawar,quotes his comments . "es bande ko jis ne ye paper banaya hai es ko ulta latka do agar mere pas ye paper aye checking ki liye to me kisi ko pass nahi karon ga kiyun ki en topics pe essay sere se ban hi nahi sakta koi be student mujhe en topics pe essay bana k dikha de "
This is really ridiculous remark by Prof Abdul Salam. The essay paper was up to the standards; even more canonical than CSS's essay paper. Prof Salam better have his head examined!!
Reply With Quote
  #19  
Old Friday, February 04, 2011
engr.Mansoor's Avatar
41st CTP (PAS)
CSP Medal: Awarded to those Members of the forum who are serving CSP Officers - Issue reason: CE 2012 Merit 30
 
Join Date: Mar 2010
Location: Hayatabad,Peshawar.
Posts: 84
Thanks: 4
Thanked 69 Times in 40 Posts
engr.Mansoor is on a distinguished road
Default My view

Salam to all aspirants of PMS.
After going through all the comments i came to conclusion that all the topics were nice and also good. Infact it is really hard and difficult to write on an easy topic. And the examiner will see the difference in approach by every student.
I have attempted "My first day at new job". And thats how i start it
"Beautiful car,handsome salary,attractive house and a large fleet of workers etc.This is not an excerpt from a novel.These are the dreams of every human being in this world.To achieve these goals every body burns its mid night oil and also sails against the tides of difficulties and hardships of life. Dreams is not what one see while sleeping but dreams are those which don`t allow you to sleep. After passing through the rough and tough educational career every student holds a piece of paper in his hand in form of degree.For other people it`s a piece of paper only but for the specific holder it is the reward of his sixteen years long and hard journey of his educational career. In other words that degree is the tool in hands of an educated person to achieve and fulfill his dreams."

After that i also have created some beautifull and dramatic scenes in it. Also i have mentioned the the lessons which i have learnt from my first day at new job.
And also ended my essay with Robert Frost quote
"the woods are lovely,dark and deep
But i have the promises to keep
And miles to go before i sleep
and miles to go before i sleep"
__________________
A pessimist sees the difficulty in every opportunity; an optimist sees the opportunity in every difficulty.
Reply With Quote
The Following User Says Thank You to engr.Mansoor For This Useful Post:
H. R. Akhunzada (Thursday, February 17, 2011)
  #20  
Old Friday, February 04, 2011
Member
 
Join Date: Aug 2010
Posts: 32
Thanks: 4
Thanked 22 Times in 11 Posts
bilalhidayat is on a distinguished road
Default

yes. I agree with the last person. dr. abdul salam should be whipped for his remarks. why would he fail a student if essay topics were like that ? a student didn't make a paper. Yes, some real time idiots made papers this time as we had "renewable sources of energy" examined twice in EDS paper. Ever saw that before in your life ?
Reply With Quote
Reply

Thread Tools Search this Thread
Search this Thread:

Advanced Search

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is Off
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
Essay Writing saharsyed Essay 16 Saturday, May 09, 2020 01:08 PM
Essay Writing mnadeem Essay 2 Wednesday, May 25, 2016 02:21 PM


CSS Forum on Facebook Follow CSS Forum on Twitter

Disclaimer: All messages made available as part of this discussion group (including any bulletin boards and chat rooms) and any opinions, advice, statements or other information contained in any messages posted or transmitted by any third party are the responsibility of the author of that message and not of CSSForum.com.pk (unless CSSForum.com.pk is specifically identified as the author of the message). The fact that a particular message is posted on or transmitted using this web site does not mean that CSSForum has endorsed that message in any way or verified the accuracy, completeness or usefulness of any message. We encourage visitors to the forum to report any objectionable message in site feedback. This forum is not monitored 24/7.

Sponsors: ArgusVision   vBulletin, Copyright ©2000 - 2024, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.