"Awaz" My Creations
I have tried to write something, I hope all you guys like it:
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Achy Koshish he qibla, agarche zuban he ke lehaz se kuch khamyan (jinhe nazr andaz kia ja sakta he) mojod hen, aur skeptic dost sahi farma rahe hen aap ne akhtetam me zara ujlat dikhai he, thora sa mazeed aagay jaen, fan para bhut acha he. khush rahen.
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[B]good attempt once again, but the style remains the same.. every good writer varies his style in his various writings.. And also the theme is the same as ur earlier attempt had.. Try to create innovation, novelty, something new, or write something old with a new style.. otherwise your writings and attempts will not be noticed.. Keep writing and keep looking for improvements.. Gud Luck n Stay Blessed..[/B]
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"Shaam".....
Tribute to my late Father....I created this one when my father passed away and I was in Matric at that time..
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