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Maha Khan Thursday, January 28, 2016 10:05 AM

ﺳﻨﻮ ﺟﺐ ﺗﻢ ﻧﮩﯿﮟ ﺗﻬﮯ ﻧﺎ
 
[color="darkred"][color="black"][/color][size="3"]ﺳﻨﻮ ﺟﺐ ﺗﻢ ﻧﮩﯿﮟ ﺗﻬﮯ ﻧﺎ..
ﻣﺤﺒﺖ ﺩﺭ ﺑﺪﺭ ﺳﯽ ﺗﮭﯽ
ﮐﺒﮭﯽ ﺍﺱ ﺳﮯ ﮐﺒﮭﯽ ﺍﺱ ﺳﮯ
ﮐﺒﮭﯽ ﺍﺱ ﺩﺭ ﮐﺒﮭﯽ ﺍﺱ ﺩﺭ
ﻣﺤﺒﺖ ﺧﻮﺍﺭ ﺭﮨﯽ ﮨﮯ
ﻣﮕﺮ....... .
ﺟﺐ ﺳﮯ ﻣﻠﮯ ﮨﻮ ﺗﻢ
ﻣﺤﺒﺖ ﺭﺍﺱ ﺁﺋﯽ ﮨﮯ
ﺗﻤﮩﺎﺭﮮ ﭘﺎﺱ ﺁﻧﮯ ﺳﮯ
ﻣﺤﺒﺖ ﭘﺎﺱ ﺁﺋﯽ ﮨﮯ
ﻣﯿﮟ ﮐﯿﻮﮞ ﮐﺮ ﺗﻢ ﺳﮯ ﯾﮧ ﺑﻮﻟﻮﮞ
ﻣﺠﮭﮯ ﺗﻢ ﺳﮯ ﻣﺤﺒﺖ ﮨﮯ
ﮐﮧ ﺗﻢ ﺗﻮ ﺗﻢ ﻧﮩﯿﮟ ﮨﻮ ﺍﺏ
ﮐﮧ ﺗﻢ ﺍﺏ ﺻﺮﻑ ﻣﯿﺮﮮ ﮨﻮ
ﻣﯿﺮﮮ ﮨﺮ ﺁﺝ ﻣﯿﮟ ﺯﻧﺪﮦ
ﻣﯿﺮﮮ ﮨﺮ ﮐﻞ ﻣﯿﮟ ﺷﺎﻣﻞ
ﻣﻠﮯ ﮨﻮ ﺟﺐ ﺳﮯ ﺗﻢ ﻣﺠﮫ ﮐﻮ
ﺗﺐ ﺳﮯ ﺍﺏ ﺗﻠﮏ ﻣﺠﮫ ﮐﻮ
ﺻﺮﻑ ﺧﻮﺩ ﺳﮯ[color="black"][/color]
ﻓﻘﻂ ﺧﻮﺩ ﺳﮯ ﻣﺤﺒﺖ ﮨﮯ[size="3"][/size][/size][/color]

Anum Ahmad Tuesday, April 05, 2016 09:01 PM

nice, is this your's?

Rana shery Wednesday, April 06, 2016 02:47 PM

Good but needs correction.
 
Dear Maha, It is a good attempt either it belongs to you or not.
Ideas are better but words need to be re arranged. In the the following places it is out of pattern(be wazan).
.........ﻣﯿﺮﮮ ﮨﺮ ﮐﻞ ﻣﯿﮟ ﺷﺎﻣﻞ

ﺗﺐ ﺳﮯ ﺍﺏ ﺗﻠﮏ ﻣﺠﮫ ﮐﻮ........

Remain blessed.


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