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خدا ہمارا خدا نا خدا امام اپنے
اسی لئے توبگڑتے نہیں ہیں کام اپنے

بزور اجر رسالت بوجہ قرب علی
بنائے میثم و قنبر نے کیا مقام اپنے

فقیرِ کاخِ درِ سیّدہ یہ کہتے ہیں
ارم سے اچھے گزرتے ہیں صبح و شام اپنے

نبی کی طرح علی کی حیاتِ سادہ دیکھ
نکل ہی جاتے بے ساختہ سلام اپنے

نجات پاؤں گا میں جانتا ہوں اے شارب
ثنا ئے احمد و حیدر میں ہیں کلام اپنے
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there are two typo
one na khuda .....space is too much
the other, "hain" was left in a sher.

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خدا ہمارا خدا ناخدا امام اپنے
اسی لئے توبگڑتے نہیں ہیں کام اپنے

بزور اجر رسالت بوجہ قرب علی
بنائے میثم و قنبر نے کیا مقام اپنے


فقیرِ کاخِ درِ سیّدہ یہ کہتے ہیں
ارم سے اچھے گزرتے ہیں صبح و شام اپنے


نبی کی طرح علی کی حیاتِ سادہ دیکھ
نکل ہی جاتے ہیں بے ساختہ سلام اپنے


نجات پاؤں گا میں جانتا ہوں اے شارب
ثنا ئے احمد و حیدر میں ہیں کلام اپنے

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