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Default مرسل بھی پھر ترا ہو خدا بھی ترا رہے

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( سید اقبال رضوی شارب)

اللہ مرے نصیب میں فکرِ رسا رہے
دل میں ہمیشہ الفتِ صلّے عَلَى رہے

خلقت پہ کیوں نہ اسکا اجارہ بنا رہے
ہاتھوں میں جس کے زلفِ رسولِ خدا رہے

ہر قاتلانِ آلِ عبا پر ہیں لعنتیں
ہارون ہو یا پھر وہ *ابو سابغہ رہے

یارب یہی دعا ہے کہ ہر آن دہر میں
مجھکو خیالِ مرضیِ مشکل کشا ر ہے

کوتاہی کچھ نہ ہو کبھی حقِّ امام میں
لازم جو ہم پہ اجر ہے وہ سب ادا رہے

خلقِ عظیم ہیں مرے آقا تو کیوں نہ پھر
ہم سب کے بھی خلوص کا پرچم اٹھا رہے

کاندھوں پہ بت شکن کبھی حسنین پشت پر
چشمِ تصوّراں میں یہ منظر سجا رہے

شارب تلاش حق ہے تو حیدر کے در پہ جا
مرسل بھی پھر ترا ہو خدا بھی ترا رہے


ابو سابغہ : Abu Saabigha yaani Shimr ( Qatil-e Imam Husain ki kunniyat thi)
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Kindly explain briefly 2nd and 3rd pairs of verses..
I think there is some problem, whether it is in writing or in pronunciation..
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Originally Posted by Syeda Irum View Post
Kindly explain briefly 2nd and 3rd pairs of verses..
I think there is some problem, whether it is in writing or in pronunciation..
Dear Irum,
Thank you for seeking clarification
First of all be assured that there is no problem in meter and wazn of the ashaar.
Their taqteea are perfectly fine.

Sher no 2: I am writing in roman because some people do not read sakin letters properly in urdu so there comes a problem in reading ashaar.

For example the word "khabar" some people pronounce as "khabr" on the meter of " qabr" which is not correct The correct is on the meter " zabAr".
Anyways .....

KhilqAt pe kyun na uska ijaarah bana rahe
haathon mein jiske zulf e rasool e khuda rahe....


Explanation .....

Allah ne sadque mein Mohammad wa aal e mohammad ke kaenaat ko khalq kiya aur unke tasarruf mein de diya.

To Rasool k tasarruf mein kaenaat hai aur Rasool ki zulf Hasnain key tasarruf mein k khud Rasool apni peeth per bitha ker hasnain ko apni zulf thama kr ghutniyon chalte thei.....


Jiske haath mein Rasool ne apni zulf de di to goya apni mukammal ijarahdari de di.


Sher no. 3

Her qatelaan e aal e aba per hain laanatein
Haroon ho ya phir woh abu Sabeghaa rahe.

AAl e aba..yaani ...Chader e tatheer ke neeche aane wale ashkhas yani Imam Husain aur unki auladein jo imam hueein

That means

The killers of Imam Husain and his progeny are cursed be it Haroon Rasheed or Shimr.


Shimr jo qatile imam husain tha uska naam "abu sabeghaa: bhi tha.

Haroon Rashid was an Abbasid Ruler .Abbasids came to power by fighting Bani Umaiyyah on the pretext that Aulade Fatima are the real ones to guide ummaH but once they came to power they were equally bad for aulad e Fatima.

I hope things are clear....if not you are welcome again

regards
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That's great..... Nice��

... اُس نے کہا دین کی پوری تاریخ لکھ :::::

❤️.. میں نے فقط حسین ع لکھا اور کچھ نہیں..
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