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Tuesday, August 23, 2011
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Dear Farrah, bhut acha 18 say 19 sall ke umer ma ya hall pata nhe aga chall k kya talsim hota ha ,,,,, umeed krta hn kitaab jald chap jaie taa hum b mustfeed ho ska........
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Tuesday, August 23, 2011
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Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar
@ Mahvish ik aadh Ghazal ho jaye,chori kernay walon ko Allah Poochay ga.
meri aazad nazm..
wo meri muhabbat thi,
mein zaroorat tha us ki,
mein kehta tha muhabbat zaroori hoti hai,
wo kehti thi zaroorat majboori hoti hai,
mein nadaa'n..!!
zaroorat aur muhabbat ka khail na samjha,
aaj,
mujhe chorr k wo chal di,
ye kehtay hue k Jaan'an..!
tum meri zaroorat thay,
aur tum kia jano?
Zaroorten badal bhi jati hain...!!!!
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Its awesome dear farrah.
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Tuesday, August 23, 2011
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Karo Tum Mujh Se Mohabat To Kya Baat Ho,
Karo Tum Mujh Se Mohabat To Kya Baat Ho,
Mil Jae Zindagi Bhar Tumhara Sath To Kya Baat Ho.
Saanson Ke Sahare To Jee Raha Hun,
Gar Tum Ban Jao Sans Meri To Kya Baat Ho.
Dhadknen To Chalti Rehti Hain Har Garhi,
Gar Tum Ban Jao Dhadkan Meri To Kya Baat Ho.
Tumhen Hi Manga Hai Apni Duaon Mein,
Gar Tum Ban Jao Dua Meri To Kya Baat Ho.
Tumhen Hi Dhundti Hai Har Soo Meri Ye Nazar,
Gar Tum Ban Jao Nazar Meri To Kya Baat Ho.
Maut To Har Kisi Ko Aani Hai, Ik Din Mujhe Bhi Aegi,
Gar Tum Ban Jao Maut Meri To Kya Baat Ho.
Roshan Wadhwani
Chori Karne Wale Se Allah Paunchenge
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Tuesday, August 23, 2011
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Originally Posted by roshan wadhwani
karo tum mujh se mohabat to kya baat ho,
mil jae zindagi bhar tumhara sath to kya baat ho.
Saanson ke sahare to jee raha hun,
gar tum ban jao sans meri to kya baat ho.
Dhadknen to chalti rehti hain har garhi,
gar tum ban jao dhadkan meri to kya baat ho.
Tumhen hi manga hai apni duaon mein,
gar tum ban jao dua meri to kya baat ho.
Tumhen hi dhundti hai har soo meri ye nazar,
gar tum ban jao nazar meri to kya baat ho.
Maut to har kisi ko aani hai, ik din mujhe bhi aegi,
gar tum ban jao maut meri to kya baat ho.
roshan wadhwani
chori karne wale se allah paunchenge:d
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روشن بہت ہی اچھی کوشش ہے ۔جذبات کی بے ساختگی بلا شبہ دل کو چھو گئ ۔لیکن قافیہ نہیں آپ کی شاعری میں ۔
میں نے دوسرے تھریڈ میں آپ کی تشویش پڑھی ہے
آپ کی شاعری کو ویب سائٹ پہ شائع کرانے کا موقع دیا جائے گا ۔میں نے آپ کو پتا ای میل کر دیا ہے۔اور ہمیں فیس بک پر بھی جوائن کریں ۔ایک با ذوق ساتھی کو دیکھ کے بہت خوشی ہو گی
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Tuesday, August 23, 2011
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@Hasan Raza Awan This thread is for one's "own" poetry.Kindly stop posting others'.
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Wednesday, August 24, 2011
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@Hasan Raza Awan This thread is for one's "own" poetry.Kindly stop posting others'.
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oh sorry mujhe nai pta tha
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Wednesday, August 24, 2011
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Originally Posted by Farrah Zafar
روشن بہت ہی اچھی کوشش ہے ۔جذبات کی بے ساختگی بلا شبہ دل کو چھو گئ ۔لیکن قافیہ نہیں آپ کی شاعری میں ۔
میں نے دوسرے تھریڈ میں آپ کی تشویش پڑھی ہے
آپ کی شاعری کو ویب سائٹ پہ شائع کرانے کا موقع دیا جائے گا ۔میں نے آپ کو پتا ای میل کر دیا ہے۔اور ہمیں فیس بک پر بھی جوائن کریں ۔ایک با ذوق ساتھی کو دیکھ کے بہت خوشی ہو گی
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Thnx Alot Dear Farah for ur kind appreciation
Ya dear i am aware dat my poetry lacks the requirements and charateristics of complete poetry.
Farah these are just my feelings that i have put into words regardless of wazan, qafaiya or anything else that is required for making peotry..
Hope these words containing my feelings wud be liked by u and others who hav such sensitive feelings.....
Ya dear i hav got ur mail, thnx for inviting me to ur group...it wud be a great pleasure to join u......be in touch.....Regards
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Thursday, August 25, 2011
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Aasman Ko Chhune Ki Aas Hai Mujhe,
Pahadon Se Nazren Milane Ki Aas Hai Mujhe,
Nakam Hun Mayus Phir Bhi Nahin,
Tabhi To Samandar Ko Sametne Ki Aas Hai Mujhe.
Roshan Wadhwani
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Thursday, August 25, 2011
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mudatoo ce khusboo ke chah ke,
mudatoo ce khusboo ko muqeed kiya,
magar tair e khsboo wafa ke manind
taqdeer ban kar apna na tehra.
Hoon soch me gum kiyun gulab ko masla jata he...
kiuyun kanntey salamat rehty hen..
makhmal ko choona assan he bohat
Azal ce insan fitrate Asaan he bohatt.
kiyun khusboo salamt nae rehty?
kiyun mohabbta nafrat me badalty he
kiyun panchee qafus ka nishan banty he?
ye sooch mujy preeshan karty hey
ye soch mujy pasheema`n rakhty he
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