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Old Saturday, July 30, 2005
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sab se chupa kar dard sy jo woh muskura diya
us ki hansi ne to aaj mujhe rula diya
lehje se uth raha tha har ik dard ka duhan
chehra bata raha tha k kuch ganwa diya
aawaz mein therao tha aankhoon mein nami thi
or keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya
jane kya us ko loghon se thi shikayatein
tanhaiyon ke dais mein khud ko basa diya
khud bhi voh hum se bichar kar adhura sa ho gaya
mujh ko bhi itne loghon mein tanha bana diya...........
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Salam..!!

Quote:
aawaz mein therao tha aankhoon mein nami thi
or keh raha tha k mein ne sab kuch bhula diya
jane kya us ko loghon se thi shikayatein
tanhaiyon ke dais mein khud ko basa diya

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" Daikha taqreer ki lazzat, keh jo uss ne kaha
main ne jaana goya 'yeh mere dil main hai' "


Thnxx for sharing such a nice "khyaal".

take care
Allah Hafiz
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Haseen ankhon se woh jab humaien dekhtay hain,
Hum ghabra kar ankhein jhuka letay hain,
kyoun milain un ankhon se ankhen,
Suna hai woh ankhon se apna bana letay hain.
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Alfaaz ke jhoote bandhan mein,
Raaz k gehry pardon mein,
Har shakhs mohabbat karta hai,
Hala ke mohabbat kuch bhi nahi,
Sub jhootay rishtay naate hain,
Sub dil rakhney ki baatein hain,
Kub kon kisi ka hota hai,
Sub asli roop chupatey hain,
Alfaz se khaly log yahan,
Lafzoon k teer chalatey hain,
Ab bahir nazar mein aagay woh,
Phir sary umar rulatey hain,
Kub kon kisi ka hota hai,
Sub jhootay rishtey naatey Hain.
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Sabhi muj se yeh kehtay hain k chalo neechy nigha ho kar,
Koi un sey nahi kehata ke na niklo yun ayan ho kar.
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@A Soul
Kya kahain kya na kahain
Puri ki puri poetry kamal hai
Thanks.
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Thanks Nida For your complements if these are only about my compiled poetry.
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Oops!
Sorry Mr. Mohib those comments were not for you. Those were for Mr. A Soul, I have already mentioned his name.
Just now I read the first two of yours, they are good and have reality in them. Third one is also nice.
Now, this is for you! May I know that are these are written by you?
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