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I am starting a new topic. choose a word from above shaher and give next shaher which contain that word.

Abi qadam uthay na thay kay safar tamam hoa
Ghazab hai safar ka itna bhi mukhtasir hona


umm ummm now one can choose aby word from the above sher
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Na tha kuch toh, Khuda tha, kuch na hota toh Khuda hota
diboya mujhko hone ne, na hota main toh kya hota .

abb next baari kis ki hayy
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teray baghair kabhi tou ghaneemat hai zindagi
khud ko ganwa k kaun teri justuju karey
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Bahut pehly say un qadmon ki aahat jan laiaty hain
tughy aay zindagi hum door say pehchan laiaty hain
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Abi qadam uthay na thay kay safar tamam hoa
Ghazab hai safar ka itna bhi mukhtasir hona


Really Nice...bohat acha shair hai...nice
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yea mujh sey pochiye kya justajuu main lazzat hai
fazaa-e-dahar main tahaliil ho gayaa hoon main
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Abi qadam uthay na thay kay safar tamam hoa
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Really Nice...bohat acha shair hai...nice
Thanx
Nice 2 c u after along time.
kee sharing
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kis udasi sa muja us na mubarak di hai
jasa acha na laga ho mer aacha hona
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jis terah log khasara main boht sochta hain
aaj kal hum tera bara main boht sochta hain
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bholay hain rafta rafta unhain mudatoon ke baad
qistoon mein khudkushi ka maza hum se poochiye
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bholay hain rafta rafta unhain mudatoon ke baad
qistoon mein khudkushi ka maza hum se poochiye
nice sher..kee sharing

but this is a diffrent toic..
above sher say koi lafz select kar k next sher likhna hay
so lz khyal rakheey...dont break the rules of NEW BAIT BAAZI...shukria.

from above sher i m choosing lafz ...
HUM

Na thi jisko meray pyaar ki Qadar
Itefaaq se usi ko chah rahay thay hum
Usi diye nay jalaya meray haathon ko
Jisko hawa se bacha rahay thay hum
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choosing HAWA from above sher

Hawa

Raston pay na betho , hawa tang karay gi
ghuzartay hoay logon ki sada tang karay gi

Mat toot kay chaho ussay aaghaz-e-safar main
bicharay ga tu eik eik ada tang karay gi.
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