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Here i have written the complete ghazal. I hope u will like it

Tammana kio na keray ham girnay kee baar baar
umeed hu saharay kee jub phisalnay kay baad

pathar ko mom ker dain ishq kee tapish say ham
lohay ko paani dekha pighalnay kay baad

jaatay huway iss khouf say daitay nahein awaz
pathar kay na hu jain kahin palatnay kay baad

kio na matam kerain apnee hasratoo pe ham
ameeree ka ahsas huwa sab kuch lutnay kay baad

khoon say likhee thee ju daastan-e-muhabbat ham nay
baray khush huway wo un safhoo ko pharnay kay baad

Please tell me how u like this
thanks
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wah wah kia baat hay bhaee. ARAZ kia hay...

Wah khoob likhee jafrey nay dastan-e-ishk
Kia aur bhi likhogay tum, doosri likhnay kay baad ?
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well Jafery bhai poori ghazal hi koobsorat hai
aik aik shair hi daad kay qabil sedda dil pay jakay lagta hai
any way very nice and touching specilay last shair
keep sharing here
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yeah...nice try
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Thanks u adnan bhai and others for such a nice comments and encouraging me. I will keep on writing and posting here. Tidus: I like the way u appreciate and i will include it in my ghazal too :P
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that's like a good boy
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well achi hay aaapki ghazal bt we expect better from u
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jaatay huway iss khouf say daitay nahein awaz
pathar kay na hu jain kahin palatnay kay baad

bohot khobsorat

thanks 4 sharing
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just a bump
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Bohat Khoobsoorat Khayal Hai Jafery Sahib. Keep it up.
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