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Bonaparte · #**501** Monday, December 21, 2015

Quote:

Originally Posted by exclusively

"Tough challenges reveal strengths and weaknesses" Challenges help us in knowing what we are and lead us to adversity. Hardship helps us to examine us and it recognizes that what is important in our life.

Synopsis

1-Introduction

2-Tough Challenges
a)example of Pakistan;
-socio-economic & political challenges
i-social challenges
-poverty
-illiteracy
-injustice
-unemployment
-crimes; extremism; terrorism etc..
ii-economic challenges
-lack in FDI
-overpopulation
-decline in growth rate
-imbalance in Forex
iii-Political challenges
-dearth of honest leadership
-incompetency of institutions

b) Challenges of an individual
-ranging from trifling issues to colossal problems

3-Challenges revel our strength
a) We incorporate our strength to achieve the challenges
b) Pakistan's strength to achieve the challenges
c) An individual's strength to attain the targets

4-Challenges reveal our weaknesses
a) Challenges become mountains to scale
b) Having fragility in achieving challenges our incompetency is exposed
c) We get weaker on account of the nature of challenges

5-Challenges disclose our reality
a) Bitter realities of Pakistan; dark & bright ages
i-Since inception to 1971; debacle of Dhaka
ii-Vulnerable picture of Pakistan before world since
iii-Indopak wars; 1948, 1965, 1971, 1999
iv-Are we really great in term of individuality? NO, NEVER!!! No one is perfect
b) Super natural truth of man

6-Challenges put us into the cold water
a) In the time of adverstity nearly no one is at our disposal
i-US was not at our disposal after disowning SEATO & CENTO
ii-US withdrew after decline of USSR
iii-Friends but not masters; Ayoub Khan
iii-Sino-Pak; Game of national interest
iv-Every body is selfish in the world-YES it is true!
b) Our beloved can leave us in the lurch--bitter truth!

7-Eventually Hardship recolonize our stance, reality & juncture
a) In hardship we come to know our our real stance
b) The hardship of Pakistan & ultimate realities to know our juncture
c) Man is born to face hardship bravely
d) Though it is hard to bear hardship, yet it can be tackled; the last message of father of nation

8-Finally we come to know what is important in our life!
a) Pakistan is a nuclear power
b) Abundant in natural resources
c) Human capital;
d) Brave protectors~world's first ranking agency
e) We need to no we are enough strong to achieve our challenges on our own
f) Existentialism finally tells us the aim of our life

9-Conclusion

Paragraphs-11
I left only last page unwritten
15 minutes for brainstorming & topic selection
1 hour in drafting rough outline
And I attempted 11 paraphrases within 1.1/2 hours

Please comment on my attempt. Thank You.

Your outline is outstanding and encompasses all points; however, as far as I can tell, mentioning Pakistan could undermine the essence of the topic which was """Tough challenges reveal strengths and weaknesses" and there was nothing about Pakistan, but yes you can mention Pakistan not merely confining to Pakistan, other nations also.

Furthermore, it would be probably better if you would have maintained general approach reflecting all angles such as, tough challenges of Syrian crises, Arab spring etc in both individual and state level and how they have revealed their true strengths. By doing so it would have been versatile and you could have an opportunity to propound your idea appropriately.

In a nutshell, Your outline is just great and requires more strengthening.
Fingers crossed and wish you all the best.

exclusively · #**502** Monday, December 21, 2015

Quote:

Originally Posted by fgump

Sir can we include regional and global challenges as well..? Like extremism, refugee crisis,terrorism and global warming. And by supernatural forces you meant earthquake,tsunami and hurricane. ..?

I have qualifed essay paper twice in CSS exam in CE~13 & CE~14, & in many other exams. As per my little knowledge, essay is all about your own thought, there is no any hard and fast rule to relate your essay to peculiar topics. In other words, you have liberty to mention whatever you want in your essay, but it must justify the topic and your arguments should be strong and nothing else.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by the99th

I am no expert but it looks great. However, don't you think you have put too much of Pak in it? Keeping in mind the topic and the baselines.

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You are correct dear, to be in a safe side, one must avoid additional concerns, that's why I incorporated both approaches; one in accordance with Pakistan and the second with "an individual's stance" from the head to tail of my write-up.

Quote:

Originally Posted by hasnain zafar

Dear Exclusively,
If there is a touch of philosophy in your essay and some references from Plato, Socrates etc; then I give you 70 marks, otherwise, 50 is must Insha' Allah.
A good effort indeed!

Pleasure, you are certainly right that such philosophical approach will lead a robust score.

Quote:

Originally Posted by abbas khan 119

A borderlinne essay I must say. Your essay may either invoke great interest or be detested strongly for unnecessary length and over reliance on examples

As I stated above that I relate the example in two dimension; first by Pak & second by an individual. So I think, checker will likely agree with that.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Bonaparte

Your outline is outstanding and encompasses all points; however, as far as I can tell, mentioning Pakistan could undermine the essence of the topic which was """Tough challenges reveal strengths and weaknesses" and there was nothing about Pakistan, but yes you can mention Pakistan not merely confining to Pakistan, other nations also.

Furthermore, it would be probably better if you would have maintained general approach reflecting all angles such as, tough challenges of Syrian crises, Arab spring etc in both individual and state level and how they have revealed their true strengths. By doing so it would have been versatile and you could have an opportunity to propound your idea appropriately.

In a nutshell, Your outline is just great and requires more strengthening.
Fingers crossed and wish you all the best.

I was thinking to attempt my essay by incorporating US history. From colonial perod to present USA~one of the super power countries in the world, faced many challenges, 13 colonizes matured and beleived in their strength and worked on their loopholes. Ultimately, during colonization no one help them out but they grew by their own potentials. Finally, they fought far their aim and America came into being on the globe.

Then I thought to relate it with Pakistan. Because it is test of Mod Pakistan and checker may be can not appreciate the incorporation of USA/Syria/India etc. So I took it with our own history Pakistan.

Simply these are 8-9 headings, I attempted almost 11 paragraphs, one intro, second all headings one by one in paragraph and in last the conclusion paragraph. It was a clean and to the point attempt. I hope it will work again. Hoping for the best. Wish you all the very best guys.

jaris · #**503** Monday, December 21, 2015

Quote:

Originally Posted by exclusively

"Tough challenges reveal strengths and weaknesses" Challenges help us in knowing what we are and lead us to adversity. Hardship helps us to examine us and it recognizes that what is important in our life.

Synopsis

1-Introduction

2-Tough Challenges
a)example of Pakistan;
-socio-economic & political challenges
i-social challenges
-poverty
-illiteracy
-injustice
-unemployment
-crimes; extremism; terrorism etc..
ii-economic challenges
-lack in FDI
-overpopulation
-decline in growth rate
-imbalance in Forex
iii-Political challenges
-dearth of honest leadership
-incompetency of institutions

b) Challenges of an individual
-ranging from trifling issues to colossal problems

3-Challenges revel our strength
a) We incorporate our strength to achieve the challenges
b) Pakistan's strength to achieve the challenges
c) An individual's strength to attain the targets

4-Challenges reveal our weaknesses
a) Challenges become mountains to scale
b) Having fragility in achieving challenges our incompetency is exposed
c) We get weaker on account of the nature of challenges

5-Challenges disclose our reality
a) Bitter realities of Pakistan; dark & bright ages
i-Since inception to 1971; debacle of Dhaka
ii-Vulnerable picture of Pakistan before world since
iii-Indopak wars; 1948, 1965, 1971, 1999
iv-Are we really great in term of individuality? NO, NEVER!!! No one is perfect
b) Super natural truth of man

6-Challenges put us into the cold water
a) In the time of adverstity nearly no one is at our disposal
i-US was not at our disposal after disowning SEATO & CENTO
ii-US withdrew after decline of USSR
iii-Friends but not masters; Ayoub Khan
iii-Sino-Pak; Game of national interest
iv-Every body is selfish in the world-YES it is true!
b) Our beloved can leave us in the lurch--bitter truth!

7-Eventually Hardship recolonize our stance, reality & juncture
a) In hardship we come to know our our real stance
b) The hardship of Pakistan & ultimate realities to know our juncture
c) Man is born to face hardship bravely
d) Though it is hard to bear hardship, yet it can be tackled; the last message of father of nation

8-Finally we come to know what is important in our life!
a) Pakistan is a nuclear power
b) Abundant in natural resources
c) Human capital;
d) Brave protectors~world's first ranking agency
e) We need to no we are enough strong to achieve our challenges on our own
f) Existentialism finally tells us the aim of our life

9-Conclusion

Paragraphs-11
I left only last page unwritten
15 minutes for brainstorming & topic selection
1 hour in drafting rough outline
And I attempted 11 paraphrases within 1.1/2 hours

Please comment on my attempt. Thank You.

good work, and i hope you pass it. Insha'allah
my outline
-Intro: true strengtth is not physical but mental and comes only through being on right path

(emphasis on spirituality.)
-types of adversity (student, lover, sailor, etc)
-SWOT analysis
(I gave at least 4 Allama Iqbals poetry duets, as khudi ko ke r buland itna , to realse true strength of oneself)
-preparing for ultimate threat (death)
-self enlightenment (after a lot of difficult circumstances)
-there is never happily ever after (so remembering pain of death will help you forget the pain of this world and help you true purpose of life. not to be afraid of difficulties, Allama Iqbal duet about shaheen and pahar)
-conclusion (failure and success are relative, be on the path help you realise true purpose of life)

HOW IS THAT
10 PAGES AND 2 PAGES OF OUTLINE

saadiii · #**504** Monday, December 21, 2015

I don't exactly remember my outline but it somehow went like this. Please comment

1. Thesis Statement
2. Reality of Human Nature: It is best seen in times of stress
3. The journey from an ordinary human to a supreme being is not a bed of roses – a journey of all sorts of experiences – harsh and sooth
4. The story of necessity is the mother of invention and its relevance with the stance
5. Sigmund Freud’s Defense Mechanism the expression of repressed thought in hardships
a. Decision making linked with unconscious. Id, Ego, Superego. The part which dominates affects our instincts in hard times and we take decisions which become our identity.
6. Darwin’s Idea of the Survival of the Fittest:
a. The quest for Survival - a hard task: those who do so are successful
7. Examples:
a. Individuals and communities which acted in hard times shaped their fates
i. Prophet’s decision to sign the treaty of Hudaibiya
ii. Mao Zedong’s reforms to revive the glory of China
iii. Martin Luther King’s voice against racism
iv. Hitler’s brutalities
v. Colonial struggle against their masters
8. Frantz Fanon idea of the awakening of national consciousness in times
of stress
9. Gayatari Spivak’s view of the reaction of Subaltern in suppression
10. Mystic point of view:
a. One gets to know oneself only if one bears with the pain
11. Steps taken in hardships act as self assessment or accountability
12. Selection criteria in modern firms – see if a candidate is able to bear
the burden or pressure
13. Stress management courses – part of academia
14. conclusion

Kamran Kazmi · #**505** Monday, December 21, 2015

what happen if one didn't wrote outline of essay in Paper?

Kamran Kazmi · #**506** Monday, December 21, 2015

What does it mean?
can any one explain?
what i wrote in essay was a complete essay, except outline. i did not mention in points form.

Thanks Mrkhansaab

exclusively · #**507** Monday, December 21, 2015

Quote:

Originally Posted by jaris

good work, and i hope you pass it. Insha'allah
my outline
-Intro: true strengtth is not physical but mental and comes only through being on right path

(emphasis on spirituality.)
-types of adversity (student, lover, sailor, etc)
-SWOT analysis
(I gave at least 4 Allama Iqbals poetry duets, as khudi ko ke r buland itna , to realse true strength of oneself)
-preparing for ultimate threat (death)
-self enlightenment (after a lot of difficult circumstances)
-there is never happily ever after (so remembering pain of death will help you forget the pain of this world and help you true purpose of life. not to be afraid of difficulties, Allama Iqbal duet about shaheen and pahar)
-conclusion (failure and success are relative, be on the path help you realise true purpose of life)

HOW IS THAT
10 PAGES AND 2 PAGES OF OUTLINE

It's pretty good, you have almost justified the topic. Good luck.

Quote:

Originally Posted by saadiii

I don't exactly remember my outline but it somehow went like this. Please comment

1. Thesis Statement
2. Reality of Human Nature: It is best seen in times of stress
3. The journey from an ordinary human to a supreme being is not a bed of roses – a journey of all sorts of experiences – harsh and sooth
4. The story of necessity is the mother of invention and its relevance with the stance
5. Sigmund Freud’s Defense Mechanism the expression of repressed thought in hardships
a. Decision making linked with unconscious. Id, Ego, Superego. The part which dominates affects our instincts in hard times and we take decisions which become our identity.
6. Darwin’s Idea of the Survival of the Fittest:
a. The quest for Survival - a hard task: those who do so are successful
7. Examples:
a. Individuals and communities which acted in hard times shaped their fates
i. Prophet’s decision to sign the treaty of Hudaibiya
ii. Mao Zedong’s reforms to revive the glory of China
iii. Martin Luther King’s voice against racism
iv. Hitler’s brutalities
v. Colonial struggle against their masters
8. Frantz Fanon idea of the awakening of national consciousness in times
of stress
9. Gayatari Spivak’s view of the reaction of Subaltern in suppression
10. Mystic point of view:
a. One gets to know oneself only if one bears with the pain
11. Steps taken in hardships act as self assessment or accountability
12. Selection criteria in modern firms – see if a candidate is able to bear
the burden or pressure
13. Stress management courses – part of academia
14. conclusion

Your outlines are better, but try to use and incorporate key words of the topics in your main outlines. In this way, the checker will be at ease to assess your write-up. Nonetheless, inhs'allah you will pass it easily by this attempt.

Mrkhansaab · #**508** Monday, December 21, 2015

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mrkhansaab

Wohee unjaam ho ga jub Subzi bunanay se pehlay pyaz laal nahee kiyay hotay.

Quote:

Originally Posted by Kamran Kazmi

What does it mean?
can any one explain?
what i wrote in essay was a complete essay, except outline. i did not mention in points form.

Thanks Mrkhansaab

Outline is a good base for yourself as well as the examiner. Your essay might be the best, but without an outline it might be hard to sift through and grade you point wise.

Either way, if an examiner is in a good mood, or if your essay was top notch, you won't and shouldn't be penalised.

Majid876 · #**509** Monday, December 21, 2015

" It takes a village to raise a child" Discuss the task of education as a community whole . It is not merely the responsibility of teachers and local administrators.

Outlines
. Introduction
. Education- an intellectual tonic
1. Role of parents
I. Inculcation the spirit of education,
II. Provision of Peaceful home environment
III. Cooperation with school administration.
IV. Close monitoring child learning progress.

1.b. Role and responsibility of the community
I. Highlight education; not ignorance.
II. Provision of free land for educational activities
III. Opening of free academies and concessional tutorial centres.
IV. Constructive cooperation with school administration to ensure 100% literacy.
V. Private-public partnership in raising a child.

1.C Role of teachers and local administration

I. To highlight true value of education.
II. To teach morality, discipline
III. Arrangements of seminars with the aid of community for promoting child education.
IV. Prudent use of fund for raising children

. Way out
Education is the collective responsibility of the society. Teachers cannot make a child educated alone. It takes the village to raise the child. Unless the community attaches importance to education, then it cannot takes roots. Hence, union of teacher, community and state are indispensable for raising a child upright. Nelson Mandala remarked, " education is a powerful weapon through which you can use to change the world.
Please check it seniors. Thanks for anticipation.

iamAliButt · #**510** Monday, December 21, 2015

when the result will be announced and what will be the next step, what we are supposed to do meanwhile...

Guide please.

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